Aphrodi's Secondary skill

Aphrodi wrote:Skill Name: Rokushiki
Skill Type: Soru and Geppo
Skill Information: Rokushiki is a special, superhuman martial arts style.
Skill Strengths:
- Is able to move at high speed = Soru - how fast? at most 10MPH?
at lvl one - 10, lvl 2 - 20 lvl 3 - 30 MPH would be acceptable.
- Allows aerial movements = Geppo
- Can combine devil fruit powers with this style
Skill Weaknesses:
- -5 endurance when going against close range opponents
- If legs are damaged, the user is not able to perform any of these techniques.
- Soru can be seen through if you have 30+ more reflex than the user - 30 is bit high. change it to +10. I do suggest you make new weakness as seeing someone's attack is entirely up to ones stats.  Then again this is your skill.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Soru - Soru is a type.
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support - change it to Soru.
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: cooldown is 5 posts, lasts 3.
Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user kicks of the ground 10 times in a blink of an eye, after that he's able to travel at a great speed(10 MPH). People under my speed will see it like Aphrodi disappeared.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Speed can be used to enhance strength +5 (1 post)
- Can be used to evade attacks
- +5 speed (3 posts) - reword it to, +5 speed for the duration of the ability or until the ability is done. As I am understand you only gain +5 speed right? not 15.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- While moving around the user is vulnerable to attacks -5 endurance
- Accuracy is lowered due moving so fast -5 Finesse
- Due moving around so much the reflex is lowered -5 reflex

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Swift Asesinado
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Close range - change it to Soru.
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user unsheathe his sword and combines "Soru" to increase his movement. - just let you know this is Soru,, not sword tech.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Immobilises (Immobilizes)  the opponents arm - how? and for how long? one post.
- Is able to pierce through light armour - sword tech? or is this soru?
- +5 strength when this skill is used (Only lasts a post) - how are you gaining +5 strength for unsheathing your sword?
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Can only hit one target.
- Halves the damage on people who have Heavy Armour
- Doesn't work on long range opponents - since you mentioned, what is the max range of this ability? put it on description please.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: La Espada
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Close range - change it to Geppo.
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 cooldown
Ability Lvl 1 Description: This technique is combined with "Geppo" and "Desert Spade" the user 'flies' 20 meter - change it to 30 ft. 20 meters is about 65 ft. above the ground, at the time rotating clock wise, using the speed and power from the gravity to land a hit.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
+ 5 Speed (1 post) - again how are you gaining speed?
+ 5 Strength (1 post) - how are you gaining + 5 strength? I suggest you say, when the attack lands, due to the impact, it gains + 5 strength or something.
+ It's hard to block because its fast and powerful.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- If missed -5 endurance (2 posts) - this ability is 1 post long. so you mean to say you will lose - 5 endurance for two posts after the duration of the ability? if so specify it.
-5 reflex (1 post) - how?
- Cannot stop once going down.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Geppo - use different name.
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support - change it to Geppo
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 posts lasts 2
Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user jumps into air and continues to jump to travel distances without ever touching the ground. (Level one can travel 20 meter, level 2 can 35 meter and level 3 can 50) - again 20 meters is too much at lvl 1, maybe 10 meters , lvl 2 = 20 and lvl 3 30. Also you have to put it in the strength that at lvl 2 it can go up to certain height and at lvl 3 as well. I do suggest you put it under Skill strength not this ability strength though. For example

Geppo - ability to walk in air.
- at lvl 1 10 meters
- at lvl 2 20 meters

so on and on.


Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

considering what i wrote above on description, I do assume you will change the strength.

- Can "fly" into the air to evade attacks
- Is able to attack while using Geppo
- + 5 speed ( 2 posts) - reword it to, +5 speed for the duration of the ability or until the ability is done. As I assume you only gain +5 not 10?
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
-Cannot use the ability when the lower body (from my waist down) is damaged/pinned or stunned.
- Both legs must be intact to use this technique
- -5 finesse (lasts 2 posts) - again, same as +5 speed one on strength.

Aphrodi wrote:Skill Name: Rokushiki
Skill Type: Soru and Geppo
Skill Information: Rokushiki is a special, superhuman martial arts style.
Skill Strengths:
- Is able to move at high speed = Soru lvl 1 = 10 MPH, lvl 2 = 20 MPH and level 3 = 30 MPH
- Allows aerial movements = Geppo
- Can combine devil fruit powers with this style
Skill Weaknesses:
- -5 endurance when going against close range opponents
- If legs are damaged, the user is not able to perform any of these techniques.
- -5 finesse when using Soru due moving at high speed.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Rapidó
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Soru
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: cooldown is 5 posts, lasts 3.
Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user kicks of the ground 10 times in a blink of an eye, after that he's able to travel at a great speed(10 MPH). People under my speed will see it like Aphrodi disappeared.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Speed can be used to enhance strength +5 (1 post)
- Can be used to evade attacks
- 5 speed for the duration of the ability or until the ability is done.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- While moving around the user is vulnerable to attacks -5 endurance
- Accuracy is lowered due moving so fast -5 Finesse
- Due moving around so much the reflex is lowered -5 reflex

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Swift Asesinado
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Soru
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 5 posts lasts 2 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user combines both Geppo and Soru styles to move in the air at high speed movement. (10 MPH)
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Is able to fly and move at high speed - fly up to how high. at lvl one I would accept 20 ft.
- Speed can be used to enhance strength - by how much? +5 ? and of course for how long.
- +5 speed for the duration of the ability or until the ability is done.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Can only hit one target. - now how is gaining speed and able to walk in air can hit a target?
- Halves the damage on people who have Heavy Armour - same as first weakness.
- Doesn't work on long range opponents (max is 30 ft) - same.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: La Espada
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Geppo
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 cooldown
Ability Lvl 1 Description: This technique is combined with "Geppo" and "Desert Spade" the user 'flies' 30 ft above the ground, at the time rotating clock wise, using the speed and power from the gravity to land a hit.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
+ 5 Speed (1 post) The user gains speed by coming down like a meteor.
+ when the attack lands, due to the impact, it gains + 5 strength
+ It's hard to block because its fast and powerful.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- If missed -5 endurance (because he takes damage from crashing into the ground) - say, opponents with 10+ more reflexes than skill user's speed can dodge it.
- Is not able to change directions. - add when missed, - 5 endurance.
- Cannot stop once going down. - say, skill user can't stop the ability once it goes down.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Cielo
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Geppo
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 posts lasts 2
Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user jumps into air and continues to jump to travel distances without ever touching the ground. (Level one can travel 20 meter, level 2 can 35 meter and level 3 can 50) - you mean ft. not meters. as you won't be jumping almost 65 ft. up in the air at lvl one or 160 ft. up the air at lvl 3. please change it to ft.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Height increases as the higher the level the user is
- Is able to attack while using Geppo
-  +5 speed for the duration of the ability or until the ability is done.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
-Cannot use the ability when the lower body (from my waist down) is damaged/pinned or stunned.
- Both legs must be intact to use this technique
- -5 finesse for the duration of the ability or until the ability is done.

Aphrodi wrote:Skill Name: Rokushiki
Skill Type: Soru and Geppo
Skill Information: Rokushiki is a special, superhuman martial arts style.
Skill Strengths:
- Is able to move at high speed = Soru lvl 1 = 10 MPH, lvl 2 = 20 MPH and level 3 = 30 MPH
- Allows aerial movements = Geppo
- Can combine devil fruit powers with this style
Skill Weaknesses:
- -5 endurance when going against close range opponents
- If legs are damaged, the user is not able to perform any of these techniques.
- -5 finesse when using Soru due moving at high speed.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Rapidó
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Soru
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: cooldown is 5 posts, lasts 3.
Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user kicks of the ground 10 times in a blink of an eye, after that he's able to travel at a great speed(10 MPH). People under my speed will see it like Aphrodi disappeared.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Speed can be used to enhance strength +5 (1 post)
- Can be used to evade attacks
- 5 speed for the duration of the ability or until the ability is done.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- While moving around the user is vulnerable to attacks -5 endurance
- Accuracy is lowered due moving so fast -5 Finesse
- Due moving around so much the reflex is lowered -5 reflex

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Swift Asesinado
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Soru & Geppo
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 5 posts lasts 2 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user combines both Geppo and Soru styles to move in the air at high speed movement. (10 MPH)
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Is able to fly and move at high speed (20 ft)
- Speed can be used to enhance strength + 5 strength until the ability is done.
- +5 speed for the duration of the ability or until the ability is done.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- -5 finesse due moving at high speed (10 MPH) for 2 posts
- Both legs must be intact to use this technique
- Using both (Soru and Geppo) puts a strain on his body. -5 endurance for 1 post

Ability Lvl 1 Name: La Espada
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Geppo
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 cooldown
Ability Lvl 1 Description: This technique is combined with "Geppo" and "Desert Spade" the user 'flies' 30 ft above the ground, at the time rotating clock wise, using the speed and power from the gravity to land a hit.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
+ 5 Speed (1 post) The user gains speed by coming down like a meteor.
+ when the attack lands, due to the impact, it gains + 5 strength
+ It's hard to block because its fast and powerful.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- opponents with 10+ more reflexes than skill user's speed can dodge it.
- Is not able to change directions when missed -5 endurance for one post
- skill user can't stop the ability once it goes down.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Cielo
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Geppo
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 posts lasts 2
Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user jumps into air and continues to jump to travel distances without ever touching the ground. (Level one can travel 20 ft, level 2 can 35 ft and level 3 can 50 ft)
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Height increases as the higher the level the user is
- Is able to attack while using Geppo
-  +5 speed for the duration of the ability or until the ability is done.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
-Cannot use the ability when the lower body (from my waist down) is damaged/pinned or stunned.
- Both legs must be intact to use this technique
- -5 finesse for the duration of the ability or until the ability is done.