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    Daimon's Primary Skill

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    Daimon's Primary Skill

    Post by Daimon on Mon Feb 24, 2014 9:38 am

    Skill Name:Hie Hie No Mi
    Skill Type:Logia Devil Fruit
    Skill Information:This devil fruit allows the user to control, create, and transform themselves into ice at will.  The devil turned Daimon into a "Freezing Human".  The Fruit itself is a blue sphere shaped fruit.  It is covered in swirls with shades of the color blue.  It has a baby blue stem extending from the top.  It smells like cold milk and feels cold to the touch.  It feels soft and squishy and even colder the deeper you poke.  Upon tasting it, it was extremely cold, and tasted just like shaved ice without syrup.
    Skill Strengths:
    1. Allows the user to turn into pure ice, making physical attacks ineffective causing the user to shatter and simply reform.
    2. Extremely cold temperatures don't affect the user and they can completely freeze any part of themselves without damage. +10 Stamina against cold users
    3.Can create, control, and transform ice around him at will.  Allow him to summon ice and control it as well as become it himself for transport. (Future ability so for now I can't, transportation available at level 2)
    4. The user can navigate and walk through icy terrain just like normal terrain including icy ground or snowstorms or blizzards.

    Skill Weaknesses:
    1. As is any devil fruit user, sea water causes the user's abilities to be useless, and they are not able to swim.  The user can still freeze water, only if they freeze it before falling in it, or else their powers will be ineffective. (Ability registered below)

    2. The Ice is weak against magma and fire (-10 endurance), because ice's vunerability to higher temperatures.

    3. Ice can not freeze vibrations, so a vibrating opponent will not be able to freeze however it can keep them stuck if frozen before that start vibrating.

    4. Seastone can render the devil fruit useless just like the sea.


    Ability Lvl 1 Name::Ice Saber
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Close Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:When created, lasts 2 posts, cooldown 3
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user can create a blade of ice using their devil fruit powers to use as a weapon.  The weapon is armed melee so the range is close having to rely on physical contact.  The blade is 25 inches long.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    1.The saber can be used to stab, slash, cut a target, like a regular saber.
    2. Weapon is created quickly for offensive or defensive purposes.
    3. If coming into contact of durable defense, the ice sword can break into shards cutting into opponent
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    1. It would melt against high temperatures.
    2. Will break apart if coming into contact with vibrations.
    3. Longer ranged ability users

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ice Storm
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Long Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:4 posts, lasts 3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user summons a blizzard around the battlefield, rendering it hard to see for opponents and also causing immense cold.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    Enemy vision is lowered for 1 post
    Intense cold causes - 5 endurance for one post
    Enemy speed is -5 due to slippery ground from ice storm. for one post
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    Can be melted by high temperatures (fire/magma/various other sources of heat)
    Enemies with snow or ice related abilities are unaffected
    If target has control of wind or air can simply blow ice storm away cancelling it

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ice Touch
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Close Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:If the user comes into contact with an opponent, the opponent's limb begins to build ice around it, freezing it and it starts to spread.  The limb will be useless for one post, as it will be completely frozen. The Ice spreads across the average human's entire arm and shoulder.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:Can freeze an opponent's limb for a post rendering useless
    pain from the intense cold - 5 endurance
    Can freeze a small area of water to solid so he can walk on it. (15 feet)
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    Can be melted by higher temperatures generated from things like fire, magma, or others
    Must have physical contact
    Can not freeze  already vibrating targets

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ice Spear
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Mid Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user creates a spear of ice, and launches it at an opponent in an attempt to impale a target up to 30 feet
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:A fast spear since its not thrown physically but through the manipulation of ice at 20 mph
    Is sharp and can impale.
    Can be created in thin air with the power of the devil fruit so if restrained, can still create
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    Can be dodge by a quick enough opponent, an opponent with 10+ more reflex then the user's speed can dodge it.
    Can be melted if homing in on a target producing extreme heat.
    Will break into pieces if coming toward something vibrating.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ice Time Capsule
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Long Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3 turns last 2
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user touches the ground, and begins to freeze it.  If the ice reaches the opponent, it freezes their legs and feet to the ground decreasing speed by 5. The attack reaches up to 10 meters
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:Can freeze the ground and and a single target standing on it if it contacts them by their feet only. It goes up and engulfs the feet ankles and midway up the legs decreasing speed by 5 for one post.
    The user is unaffected by the ice getting an advantage in this terrain.
    The turn after the target is frozen their speed is lowered by 5 due to numb feet the post after the engulfing of the feet
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    Can be melted before freezing from high temperatures
    Must actually touch them to freeze them.
    Can not freeze an already vibrating target
    Strength decreased by 5 during duration of move.


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    Re: Daimon's Primary Skill

    Post by Leon L.H. on Mon Feb 24, 2014 8:14 pm

    With Azure's Permission I will be reviewing this.
    Correction will be in red.

    Daimon wrote:Skill Name:Hie Hie No Mi
    Skill Type:Logia Devil Fruit
    Skill Information:This devil fruit allows the user to control, create, and transform themselves into ice at will.

    Skill Strengths: It allows the user to control ice using it for several purposes. The user has a huge resistance to extremely cold temperatures.

    You need at least 3 strength, I suggest you put it in list format.
    1.
    2.
    3.


    Skill Weaknesses:The Ice is ineffective against vibrations.  It is cancelled out from fire and magma.  In order to freeze opponents if using a certain ability, he will have to physically touch them, or something they are in contact with, so if combating an opponent faster then him, it can get tricky.

    Like before I suggest you put it in list format.


    ' so if combating an opponent faster then him, it can get tricky.'
    - How faster than you?
    For example, Opponents with +10 more Speed than you will be tricky to fight. Put it in this type of format.

    It is cancelled out from fire and magma. - So if fire or magma user fights you, your skill is automatically become useless? If so, I suggest you change this to against fire/magma users, skill user ( you) will lose -10 Endurance against them.
    The Ice is ineffective against vibrations. - This is fine, but again unless you don't want your skill to not work on vibration type players, I do suggest you change the wording. (gave you plenty examples above)


    Ability Lvl 1 Name::Ice Saber
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Close Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:When created, lasts 5 posts, cooldown is 2 - Cool down have to be longer than the duration of the ability.
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user can create a blade of ice using their devil fruit powers to use as a weapon.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:The saber can be used to stab, slash, cut a target, like a regular saber.
    Need at least 3 strength.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:It would be ineffective against fire, magma, or something vibrating at a high level.
    Need at least 3 weakness

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ice Storm
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Long Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:4 posts, lasts 3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user summons a blizzard around the battlefield, rendering it hard to see for opponents and also causing immense cold.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    Enemy vision is lowered - for how long? for 3 posts? if so, denied, change it to 1 post.
    Intense cold - explain this more, how cold? you are allow to put, opponents will lose -5 endurance due to intense cold weather or something like that.
    Daimon can see clearly throughout and is unaffected by snow - you need to put this under your skill strength not ability strength.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    Can be melted - by what?
    Enemies with snow or ice related abilities are unaffected
    need one more weakness.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ice Touch
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Close Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:1 post - Cooldown have to be at least 2 posts or more.
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:If the user comes into contact with an opponent, the opponent's limb begins to build ice around it, freezing it and it starts to spread.  The limb will be useless for two posts, - 1 post.  as it will be completely frozen.  If the head is frozen, can knock an opponent out. Can also freeze other things like water but only small amounts. - just letting you know, this sound too over powered for lvl 1 ability. you may freeze part of opponent's body such as arms, legs or small portion of their side. Freezing their head, sounds over powered to me.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:Can freeze an opponent's limb - if so, it can't be more than 1 post.
    Extreme pain from the intense cold - how extreme? like above you can put opponents lose - 5 Endurance.
    need one more strength.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    Can be melted or if an opponent can control vibrations, not be frozen.
    Must have to physically contact them.
    one more weakness.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ice Spear
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Mid Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user creates a spear of ice, and launches it at an opponent in an attempt to impale
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths: A fast spear since its not thrown physically but through the manipulation of ice. - how fast?
    Is sharp and can impale.
    one more strength
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    Can be dodge by a quick enough opponent - when you say quick opponents, how fast do they have to be? i suggest you put it in this format "opponents with +10 speed than your (stat of your choice) can dodge it."
    Can be melted or if an opponent is vibrating off, break into pieces.
    one more weakness

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ice Time Capsule
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Long Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3 turns last 2
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user touches the ground, and begins to freeze it.  If the ice reaches the opponent, it freezes their feet to the ground rendering them unable to walk.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:Can freeze the ground and anyone standing on it if it contacts them. - only their feet right?
    Can limit mobility of opponents. - for how long? as lvl 1 ability, the unable to walk part will last 1 post.
    need at least one more strength
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:Can be melted or if the opponent is vibrating enough, not freeze them and break apart.
    Must actually touch them to freeze them.
    [/b]need one more weakness.

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    Re: Daimon's Primary Skill

    Post by Daimon on Tue Feb 25, 2014 6:16 am

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    Re: Daimon's Primary Skill

    Post by Leon L.H. on Tue Feb 25, 2014 8:05 am

    Daimon wrote:Skill Name:Hie Hie No Mi
    Skill Type:Logia Devil Fruit
    Skill Information:This devil fruit allows the user to control, create, and transform themselves into ice at will.
    Skill Strengths:
    1. Allows the user to turn into pure ice, making physical attacks ineffective causing the user to shatter and simply reform.
    2. Extremely cold temperatures don't affect the user and they can completely freeze any part of themselves without damage.
    3.Can create, control, and transform ice around him at will.  Allow him to summon ice and control it as well as become it himself for transport. - be noted, that you need to create an ability which allows you to do it.
    4. The user can navigate and walk through icy terrain just like normal terrain including icy ground or snowstorms or blizzards.

    Skill Weaknesses:
    1. As is any devil fruit user, sea water causes the user's abilites to be useless, and they are not able to swim.  The user can still freeze water, only if they freeze it before falling in it, or else their powers will be ineffective. - be noted you need to make an ability which allows you to freeze water and stuff.

    2. The Ice is weak against magma and fire (-10 endurance), because ice's vulnerability to higher temperatures.

    3. Ice can not freeze vibrations, so a vibrating opponent will not be able to freeze however it can keep them stuck if frozen before that start vibrating.

    4. Seastone can render the devil fruit useless just like the sea.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name::Ice Saber
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Close Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:When created, lasts 2 posts, cooldown 3
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user can create a blade of ice using their devil fruit powers to use as a weapon.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    1.The saber can be used to stab, slash, cut a target, like a regular saber.
    2. Weapon is created quickly for offensive or defensive purposes.
    3. If coming into contact of durable defense, the ice sword can break into shards cutting into opponent
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    It would melt against high temperatures.
    Will break apart if coming into contact with vibrations.
    Limited to only close range - take this out and replace it to "longer ranger ability users."

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ice Storm
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Long Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:4 posts, lasts 3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user summons a blizzard around the battlefield, rendering it hard to see for opponents and also causing immense cold.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    Enemy vision is lowered for 1 post
    Intense cold causes - 5 endurance - for one post
    Enemy speed is -5 due to slippery ground from ice storm. - for one post
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    Can be melted by high temperatures (fire/magma/various other sources of heat)
    Enemies with snow or ice related abilities are unaffected
    If target has control of wind or air can simply blow ice storm away cancelling it

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ice Touch
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Close Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:If the user comes into contact with an opponent, the opponent's limb begins to build ice around it, freezing it and it starts to spread.  The limb will be useless for two posts - again change this to one post. as it will be completely frozen.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:Can freeze an opponent's limb for a post rendering useless
    Extreme pain from the intense cold - 5 endurance
    Can freeze a small area of water to solid so he can walk on it.

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    Can be melted by higher temperatures generated from things like fire, magma, or oters (others)
    Must have to physically contact them.
    Can not freeze  already vibrating targets

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ice Spear
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Mid Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user creates a spear of ice, and launches it at an opponent in an attempt to impale
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:[/bA fast spear since its not thrown physically but through the manipulation of ice at 20 mph
    Is sharp and can impale.
    Can be create in thin air with the power of the devil fruit so if restrained, can still create
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    Can be dodge by a quick enough opponent, an opponent with speed 10+ can dodge it - 10+ speed more than yours? or just by having 10+ speed. Like i mentioned before, everyone in this site have at least 10 speed. Meaning this ability will be useless against them. I do highly suggest you put "+10 speed than skill user's speed" something like that. However its all up to you.
    Can be melted if homing in on a target producing extreme heat.
    Will break into pieces if coming toward something vibrating.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ice Time Capsule
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Long Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3 turns last 2
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user touches the ground, and begins to freeze it.  If the ice reaches the opponent, it freezes their feet to the ground rendering them unable to walk.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:Can freeze the ground and anyone standing on it if it contacts them by their feet only.
    Can limit mobility of opponents for one turn.
    The turn after the target is frozen their speed is lowered by 5 due to numb feet.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    Can be melted before freezing from high temperatures
    Must actually touch them to freeze them.
    Can not freeze an already vibrating target


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    Re: Daimon's Primary Skill

    Post by Daimon on Tue Feb 25, 2014 4:31 pm

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    Re: Daimon's Primary Skill

    Post by Azure Snow on Wed Feb 26, 2014 7:53 pm

    Alrighty, Now that i had Leon look over it to get most of the stuff that needed to be corrected i will personally look it over.

    Corrections in red.


    Daimon wrote:Skill Name:Hie Hie No Mi
    Skill Type:Logia Devil Fruit
    Skill Information:This devil fruit allows the user to control, create, and transform themselves into ice at will. (I would like to see more of a description, come on, Its the ICE LOGIA you got there. make it epic. What does the fruit that you have eaten look like? what did it feel like, Texture, smell, feeling.Smile)
    Skill Strengths:
    1. Allows the user to turn into pure ice, making physical attacks ineffective causing the user to shatter and simply reform.
    2. Extremely cold temperatures don't affect the user and they can completely freeze any part of themselves without damage.(Put +10 Stamina against cold users)
    3.Can create, control, and transform ice around him at will.  Allow him to summon ice and control it as well as become it himself for transport. (Future ability so for now I can't)(What level are you able to do the Transportation?)
    4. The user can navigate and walk through icy terrain just like normal terrain including icy ground or snowstorms or blizzards.

    Skill Weaknesses:
    1. As is any devil fruit user, sea water causes the user's abilites(Abilities*) to be useless, and they are not able to swim.  The user can still freeze water, only if they freeze it before falling in it, or else their powers will be ineffective. (Ability registered below)

    2. The Ice is weak against magma and fire (-10 endurance), because ice's vunerability to higher temperatures.

    3. Ice can not freeze vibrations, so a vibrating opponent will not be able to freeze however it can keep them stuck if frozen before that start vibrating.

    4. Seastone can render the devil fruit useless just like the sea.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name::Ice Saber
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Close Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:When created, lasts 2 posts, cooldown 3
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user can create a blade of ice using their devil fruit powers to use as a weapon.(How long is the blade, what is the range the weapon can attack at?)
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    1.The saber can be used to stab, slash, cut a target, like a regular saber.
    2. Weapon is created quickly for offensive or defensive purposes.
    3. If coming into contact of durable defense, the ice sword can break into shards cutting into opponent
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    It would melt against high temperatures.
    Will break apart if coming into contact with vibrations.
    Longer ranged ability users
    (i would like the 1. 2. 3. thing you did for the strength for all of strengths and weaknesses.)

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ice Storm
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Long Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:4 posts, lasts 3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user summons a blizzard around the battlefield, rendering it hard to see for opponents and also causing immense cold.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    Enemy vision is lowered for 1 post
    Intense cold causes - 5 endurance for one post
    Enemy speed is -5 due to slippery ground from ice storm. for oen(one*) post
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    Can be melted by high temperatures (fire/magma/various other sources of heat)
    Enemies with snow or ice related abilities are unaffected
    If target has control of wind or air can simply blow ice storm away cancelling it

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ice Touch
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Close Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:If the user comes into contact with an opponent, the opponent's limb begins to build ice around it, freezing it and it starts to spread.  The limb will be useless for one posts(Post*), as it will be completely frozen. (How far can the ice spread? --go into detail.)
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:Can freeze an opponent's limb for a post rendering useless
    Extreme pain from the intense cold - 5 endurance(If your going to have a stat bonus against an enemy i want at least a 3 post cool down.)
    Can freeze a small area of water to solid so he can walk on it.(How small of an area?)
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    Can be melted by higher temperatures generated from things like fire, magma, or oters(Others*)
    Must have to physically contact them.(Reword to: Must have Physical Contact.)
    Can not freeze  already vibrating targets

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ice Spear
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Mid Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user creates a spear of ice, and launches it at an opponent in an attempt to impale(How far can it be thrown?)
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:00](Fix coding right here)A fast spear since its not thrown physically but through the manipulation of ice at 20 mph
    Is sharp and can impale.
    Can be create(Created*) in thin air with the power of the devil fruit so if restrained, can still create
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    Can be dodge(dodged*) by a quick enough opponent, an opponent with 10+ more speed then the user can dodge it.(Change it to +10 more reflex than the users speed. basicly your enemies reflex against your speed.)
    Can be melted if homing in on a target producing extreme heat.
    Will break into pieces if coming toward something vibrating.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ice Time Capsule
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Long Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3 turns last 2
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user touches the ground, and begins to freeze it.  If the ice reaches the opponent, it freezes their feet to the ground rendering them unable to walk.(Whats the exact Range in meters?)
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:Can freeze the ground and anyone standing on it if it contacts them by their feet only.(How far up the leg can the ice go?)
    Can limit mobility of opponents for one turn.
    The turn after the target is frozen their speed is lowered by 5 due to numb feet.(Say, The Post after this technique is used instead of The turn after. its a bit easier)
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    Can be melted before freezing from high temperatures
    Must actually touch them to freeze them.
    Can not freeze an already vibrating target




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    Re: Daimon's Primary Skill

    Post by Daimon on Thu Feb 27, 2014 2:06 am

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    Re: Daimon's Primary Skill

    Post by Azure Snow on Fri Feb 28, 2014 7:30 am

    Correction in red.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ice Time Capsule
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Long Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3 turns last 2
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user touches the ground, and begins to freeze it. If the ice reaches the opponent, it freezes their feet to the ground rendering them unable to walk(Even though this is cool, it makes the target Immobile, So Lets change it up to covers the Feet and Legs in Ice if it hits, making a decrease in Speed. -5 or something. ). The attack reaches up to 10 meters
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -Can freeze the ground and anyone standing on it if it contacts them by their feet only. It goes up and engulfs the foot and ankle(Change this to something like- Ice Surrounds the Feet, ankles and goes midway up the leg, causing a decrease in the targets speed. (-5 speed) )
    -Can limit mobility of opponents for one turn.(so, change this.)
    -The turn after the target is frozen their speed is lowered by 5 due to numb feet the post after the engulfing of the feet
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    Can be melted before freezing from high temperatures
    Must actually touch them to freeze them.
    Can not freeze an already vibrating target
    (Have a Negative Stat for your self, such as -5 to -10 Strength. to balance out the stats a bit.)



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    Weapon: Silver Light
    Weapon: Bright Nodachi
    Armor: Majestic Winter
    Primary Skill: Heaven's Nōdachi Style
    Secondary Skill: Gun Blade Style


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    Daimon

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    Gender : Male
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    Primary Skill: Hie Hie No Mi
    Secondary Skill: Sairento Kiringu (Silent Killing)

    Re: Daimon's Primary Skill

    Post by Daimon on Fri Feb 28, 2014 7:42 am

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    Azure Snow

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    Gender : Female
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    Character Name: Azure D. Snow
    Primary Skill: Heaven Nōdachi Style
    Secondary Skill: Gun Blade Style

    Re: Daimon's Primary Skill

    Post by Azure Snow on Fri Feb 28, 2014 7:53 am



    Daimon wrote:Skill Name:Hie Hie No Mi
    Skill Type:Logia Devil Fruit
    Skill Information:This devil fruit allows the user to control, create, and transform themselves into ice at will.  The devil turned Daimon into a "Freezing Human".  The Fruit itself is a blue sphere shaped fruit.  It is covered in swirls with shades of the color blue.  It has a baby blue stem extending from the top.  It smells like cold milk and feels cold to the touch.  It feels soft and squishy and even colder the deeper you poke.  Upon tasting it, it was extremely cold, and tasted just like shaved ice without syrup.
    Skill Strengths:
    1. Allows the user to turn into pure ice, making physical attacks ineffective causing the user to shatter and simply reform.
    2. Extremely cold temperatures don't affect the user and they can completely freeze any part of themselves without damage. +10 Stamina against cold users
    3.Can create, control, and transform ice around him at will.  Allow him to summon ice and control it as well as become it himself for transport. (Future ability so for now I can't, transportation available at level 2)
    4. The user can navigate and walk through icy terrain just like normal terrain including icy ground or snowstorms or blizzards.

    Skill Weaknesses:
    1. As is any devil fruit user, sea water causes the user's abilities to be useless, and they are not able to swim.  The user can still freeze water, only if they freeze it before falling in it, or else their powers will be ineffective. (Ability registered below)

    2. The Ice is weak against magma and fire (-10 endurance), because ice's vunerability to higher temperatures.

    3. Ice can not freeze vibrations, so a vibrating opponent will not be able to freeze however it can keep them stuck if frozen before that start vibrating.

    4. Seastone can render the devil fruit useless just like the sea.


    Ability Lvl 1 Name::Ice Saber
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Close Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:When created, lasts 2 posts, cooldown 3
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user can create a blade of ice using their devil fruit powers to use as a weapon.  The weapon is armed melee so the range is close having to rely on physical contact.  The blade is 25 inches long.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    1.The saber can be used to stab, slash, cut a target, like a regular saber.
    2. Weapon is created quickly for offensive or defensive purposes.
    3. If coming into contact of durable defense, the ice sword can break into shards cutting into opponent
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    1. It would melt against high temperatures.
    2. Will break apart if coming into contact with vibrations.
    3. Longer ranged ability users

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ice Storm
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Long Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:4 posts, lasts 3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user summons a blizzard around the battlefield, rendering it hard to see for opponents and also causing immense cold.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    Enemy vision is lowered for 1 post
    Intense cold causes - 5 endurance for one post
    Enemy speed is -5 due to slippery ground from ice storm. for one post
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    Can be melted by high temperatures (fire/magma/various other sources of heat)
    Enemies with snow or ice related abilities are unaffected
    If target has control of wind or air can simply blow ice storm away cancelling it

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ice Touch
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Close Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:If the user comes into contact with an opponent, the opponent's limb begins to build ice around it, freezing it and it starts to spread.  The limb will be useless for one post, as it will be completely frozen. The Ice spreads across the average human's entire arm and shoulder.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:Can freeze an opponent's limb for a post rendering useless
    pain from the intense cold - 5 endurance
    Can freeze a small area of water to solid so he can walk on it. (15 feet)
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    Can be melted by higher temperatures generated from things like fire, magma, or others
    Must have physical contact
    Can not freeze  already vibrating targets

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ice Spear
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Mid Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user creates a spear of ice, and launches it at an opponent in an attempt to impale a target up to 30 feet
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:A fast spear since its not thrown physically but through the manipulation of ice at 20 mph
    Is sharp and can impale.
    Can be created in thin air with the power of the devil fruit so if restrained, can still create
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    Can be dodge by a quick enough opponent, an opponent with 10+ more reflex then the user's speed can dodge it.
    Can be melted if homing in on a target producing extreme heat.
    Will break into pieces if coming toward something vibrating.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ice Time Capsule
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Long Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3 turns last 2
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user touches the ground, and begins to freeze it.  If the ice reaches the opponent, it freezes their legs and feet to the ground decreasing speed by 5. The attack reaches up to 10 meters
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:Can freeze the ground and and a single target standing on it if it contacts them by their feet only. It goes up and engulfs the feet ankles and midway up the legs decreasing speed by 5 for one post.
    The user is unaffected by the ice getting an advantage in this terrain.
    The turn after the target is frozen their speed is lowered by 5 due to numb feet the post after the engulfing of the feet
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    Can be melted before freezing from high temperatures
    Must actually touch them to freeze them.
    Can not freeze an already vibrating target
    Strength decreased by 5 during duration of move.


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    Character
    Weapon: Silver Light
    Weapon: Bright Nodachi
    Armor: Majestic Winter
    Primary Skill: Heaven's Nōdachi Style
    Secondary Skill: Gun Blade Style


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