The Yawning Sage

• User is capable of traveling at very high speeds. At lvl 1 you can burst your speed up to 10MPH, at lvl 2, 20MPH and at lvl 3, 30MPH.
  
• User is capable of using skills to combo with his melee weapon.
  
• User receives a +5 reflex boost from all close combat skills for his harmony with nature.
  

• Cannot Use any form of heavy armor
  
  
• -5 finesse to long-range attacks
  
  
• As user begins to speed up his awareness starts to weaken. -5 reflex.
  

• User can travel at 10 MPH to dodge an incoming attack from an opponent
  
• User can use travel at a very fast rate up to 20 meters within any direction
  
• User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique.
  

• Requires user to see incoming attack
  
• Can only be used to dodge one attack
  
• User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill.
  

• User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique
  
• Leaves the user ready to attack the opponent from behind
  
• Can dodge a close incoming attack
  

• Opponents can dodge attacks from skill user whose speed is +10 more than skill user's speed.
  
• -5 fines against long-range attacks
  
• User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill
  

• User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique
  
• User can use travel at a 10 MPH to 20 meters within any direction 
  
• Inflicts Blunt damage on the opponent
  

• Leaves user open to frontal attacks
  
• Receive half-damage if wearing heavy armor
  
• User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill
  

• Inflicts Blunt damage on the opponent
  
• +5 strength benefit from this technique if in close-range
  
• The user is harder to hit as he stands next to his opponent
  

• Leaves himself open in the back
  
• The user receives -5 speed debuff from skill
  
• Easily dodged if opponent is at long-range
  

Edward D. Valentine wrote:

The Yawning Sage

Skill Type: Blunt, Support


Skill Information: In his lazy behavior, Edward learned to control his mind, body and spirit. He mediates channeling his spirit with nature. He becomes one with nature to gain abilities that surpass the normal human experience. It is an art Edward created to improve his laziness so he doesn’t have to fight when he doesn’t want to. When he gets irritated his sword style is improved greatly from this skill.


Skill Strengths:

• User is capable of traveling at very high speeds. - how fast? gain +10 speed? if not a stat gain,, use MPH for example, at lvl 1 you can burst your speed up to 10MPH, at lvl 2 20 and at lvl 3, 25. I would accept this.
  
• User is capable of using skills to combo with his melee weapon.
  
• User receives a +5 reflex boost from all close combat skills for his harmony with nature.
  

Skill Weaknesses:

• Cannot Use any form of heavy armor
  
  
• -10 reflex to long-range attacks - change this to -5 finesse.
  
  
• As user begins to speed up his awareness starts to weaken - add - 5 reflexes.
  

 
 

CHANGE ALL COOLDOWN TO 4 POSTS!

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Running Spring


Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support, Mid-range


Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 turns


Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward will swiftly dash towards a target or away. Can also be used to dodge any attack launched within 20 meters


Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

• User can travel at very fast rate to dodge an incoming attack from an opponent - how fast? again use example i gave you above. again at lvl one i would put 5MPH
  
• User can use travel at a very fast rate up to 20 meters within any direction
  
• User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique.
  

Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

• Requires user to see incoming attack
  
• Can only be used to dodge one attack
  
• User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill.
  

 


Ability Lvl 1 Name: Gliding Twister


Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support, Close-range


Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 turns


Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward dodges the oncoming attack, spinning around the opponent at close-range and stands behind him ready to strike.


Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

• User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique
  
• Leaves the user ready to attack the opponent from behind
  
• Can dodge a close incoming attack
  

Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

• Requires user to see incoming attack
  
• Weak against long range attacks
  
• User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill
  

 
Ability Lvl 1 Name: Raging Stream


Ability Lvl 1 Type: Blunt, Mid-range


Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 turns


Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward kicks off the ground a few times to charge at his opponent with blindingly fast speed, appearing in front of the opponent and smacking the melee into the opponents gut.


Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

• User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique
  
• User can use travel at a very fast rate up to 20 meters within any direction
  
• Inflicts Blunt damage on the opponent
  

Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

• Leaves user open to frontal attacks
  
• Weak to Heavy Armor - how much weak? they receive half the damage weak?
  
• User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill
  

 
 
Ability Lvl 1 Name: Tree Stump


Ability Lvl 1 Type: Blunt, Close-range


Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  3 turns


Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward stomps of the ground, slamming the bottom of his melee into the opponents vital point.


Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

• Inflicts Blunt damage on the opponent
  
• +5 finesse benefit from this technique - how?
  
• The user is harder to hit as he stands next to his opponent
  

Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

• Leaves himself open in the back
  
• The user receives -5 speed debuff from skill
  
• Easily dodged. The opponent can dodge when their skill is half of the users. - what do you mean half o the users?
  

Edward D. Valentine wrote:

The Yawning Sage

Skill Type: Blunt, Support


Skill Information: In his lazy behavior, Edward learned to control his mind, body and spirit. He mediates channeling his spirit with nature. He becomes one with nature to gain abilities that surpass the normal human experience. It is an art Edward created to improve his laziness so he doesn’t have to fight when he doesn’t want to. When he gets irritated his sword style is improved greatly from this skill.


Skill Strengths:

• User is capable of traveling at very high speeds. At lvl 1 you can burst your speed up to 10MPH, at lvl 2, 20MPH and at lvl 3, 30MPH.
  
• User is capable of using skills to combo with his melee weapon.
  
• User receives a +5 reflex boost from all close combat skills for his harmony with nature.
  

Skill Weaknesses:

• Cannot Use any form of heavy armor
  
  
• -5 finesse to long-range attacks
  
  
• As user begins to speed up his awareness starts to weaken - add - 5 reflexes.
  

 
 
Ability Lvl 1 Name: Running Spring


Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support, Mid-range


Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 turns


Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward will swiftly dash towards a target or away. Can also be used to dodge any attack launched within 20 meters


Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

• User can travel at 10 MPH to dodge an incoming attack from an opponent
  
• User can use travel at a very fast rate up to 20 meters within any direction
  
• User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique.
  

Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

• Requires user to see incoming attack
  
• Can only be used to dodge one attack
  
• User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill.
  

 


Ability Lvl 1 Name: Gliding Twister


Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support, Close-range


Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 turns


Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward dodges the oncoming attack, spinning around the opponent at close-range and stands behind him ready to strike.


Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

• User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique
  
• Leaves the user ready to attack the opponent from behind
  
• Can dodge a close incoming attack
  

Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

• Requires user to see incoming attack
  
• Weak against long range attacks - how so?
  
• User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill
  

 
Ability Lvl 1 Name: Raging Stream


Ability Lvl 1 Type: Blunt, Mid-range


Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 turns


Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward kicks off the ground a few times to charge at his opponent with blindingly fast speed, appearing in front of the opponent and smacking the melee into the opponents gut.


Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

• User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique
  
• User can use travel at a very fast rate up to 20 meters within any direction
  
• Inflicts Blunt damage on the opponent
  

Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

• Leaves user open to frontal attacks
  
• Receive half-damage if wearing heavy armor
  
• User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill
  

 
 
Ability Lvl 1 Name: Tree Stump


Ability Lvl 1 Type: Blunt, Close-range


Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  4 turns


Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward stomps of the ground, slamming the bottom of his melee into the opponents vital point.


Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

• Inflicts Blunt damage on the opponent
  
• +5 strength benefit from this technique if in close-range
  
• The user is harder to hit as he stands next to his opponent
  

Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

• Leaves himself open in the back
  
• The user receives -5 speed debuff from skill
  
• Easily dodged if opponent is at long-range
  

Edward D. Valentine wrote:

The Yawning Sage

Skill Type: Blunt, Support


Skill Information: In his lazy behavior, Edward learned to control his mind, body and spirit. He mediates channeling his spirit with nature. He becomes one with nature to gain abilities that surpass the normal human experience. It is an art Edward created to improve his laziness so he doesn’t have to fight when he doesn’t want to. When he gets irritated his sword style is improved greatly from this skill.


Skill Strengths:

• User is capable of traveling at very high speeds. At lvl 1 you can burst your speed up to 10MPH, at lvl 2, 20MPH and at lvl 3, 30MPH.
  
• User is capable of using skills to combo with his melee weapon.
  
• User receives a +5 reflex boost from all close combat skills for his harmony with nature.
  

Skill Weaknesses:

• Cannot Use any form of heavy armor
  
  
• -5 finesse to long-range attacks
  
  
• As user begins to speed up his awareness starts to weaken. -5 reflex.
  

 
 
Ability Lvl 1 Name: Running Spring


Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support, Mid-range


Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 turns


Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward will swiftly dash towards a target or away. Can also be used to dodge any attack launched within 20 meters


Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

• User can travel at 10 MPH to dodge an incoming attack from an opponent
  
• User can use travel at a very fast rate up to 20 meters within any direction
  
• User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique.
  

Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

• Requires user to see incoming attack
  
• Can only be used to dodge one attack
  
• User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill.
  

 


Ability Lvl 1 Name: Gliding Twister


Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support, Close-range


Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 turns


Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward dodges the oncoming attack, spinning around the opponent at close-range and stands behind him ready to strike.


Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

• User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique
  
• Leaves the user ready to attack the opponent from behind
  
• Can dodge a close incoming attack
  

Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

• Requires user to see incoming attack - what determines you to see the attack? reword this to Opponents can dodge attacks from skill user whose speed is +10 more than skill user's speed.
  
• -5 fines against long-range attacks
  
• User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill
  

 
Ability Lvl 1 Name: Raging Stream


Ability Lvl 1 Type: Blunt, Mid-range


Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 turns


Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward kicks off the ground a few times to charge at his opponent with blindingly fast speed, appearing in front of the opponent and smacking the melee into the opponents gut.


Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

• User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique
  
• User can use travel at a very fast rate up to 20 meters within any direction - add 10MPH
  
• Inflicts Blunt damage on the opponent
  

Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

• Leaves user open to frontal attacks
  
• Receive half-damage if wearing heavy armor
  
• User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill
  

 
 
Ability Lvl 1 Name: Tree Stump


Ability Lvl 1 Type: Blunt, Close-range


Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  4 turns


Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward stomps of the ground, slamming the bottom of his melee into the opponents vital point.


Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

• Inflicts Blunt damage on the opponent
  
• +5 strength benefit from this technique if in close-range
  
• The user is harder to hit as he stands next to his opponent
  

Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

• Leaves himself open in the back
  
• The user receives -5 speed debuff from skill
  
• Easily dodged if opponent is at long-range
  

Edward D. Valentine wrote:

The Yawning Sage

Skill Type: Blunt, Support


Skill Information: In his lazy behavior, Edward learned to control his mind, body and spirit. He mediates channeling his spirit with nature. He becomes one with nature to gain abilities that surpass the normal human experience. It is an art Edward created to improve his laziness so he doesn’t have to fight when he doesn’t want to. When he gets irritated his sword style is improved greatly from this skill.


Skill Strengths:

• User is capable of traveling at very high speeds. At lvl 1 you can burst your speed up to 10MPH, at lvl 2, 20MPH and at lvl 3, 30MPH.
  
• User is capable of using skills to combo with his melee weapon.
  
• User receives a +5 reflex boost from all close combat skills for his harmony with nature.
  

Skill Weaknesses:

• Cannot Use any form of heavy armor
  
  
• -5 finesse to long-range attacks
  
  
• As user begins to speed up his awareness starts to weaken. -5 reflex.
  

 
 
Ability Lvl 1 Name: Running Spring


Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support, Mid-range


Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 turns


Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward will swiftly dash towards a target or away. Can also be used to dodge any attack launched within 20 meters


Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

• User can travel at 10 MPH to dodge an incoming attack from an opponent
  
• User can use travel at a very fast rate up to 20 meters within any direction
  
• User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique.
  

Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

• Requires user to see incoming attack
  
• Can only be used to dodge one attack
  
• User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill.
  

 


Ability Lvl 1 Name: Gliding Twister


Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support, Close-range


Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 turns


Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward dodges the oncoming attack, spinning around the opponent at close-range and stands behind him ready to strike.


Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

• User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique
  
• Leaves the user ready to attack the opponent from behind
  
• Can dodge a close incoming attack
  

Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

• Opponents can dodge attacks from skill user whose speed is +10 more than skill user's speed.
  
• -5 fines against long-range attacks
  
• User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill
  

 
Ability Lvl 1 Name: Raging Stream


Ability Lvl 1 Type: Blunt, Mid-range


Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 turns


Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward kicks off the ground a few times to charge at his opponent with blindingly fast speed, appearing in front of the opponent and smacking the melee into the opponents gut.


Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

• User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique
  
• User can use travel at a 10 MPH to 20 meters within any direction 
  
• Inflicts Blunt damage on the opponent
  

Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

• Leaves user open to frontal attacks
  
• Receive half-damage if wearing heavy armor
  
• User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill
  

 
 
Ability Lvl 1 Name: Tree Stump


Ability Lvl 1 Type: Blunt, Close-range


Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  4 turns


Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward stomps of the ground, slamming the bottom of his melee into the opponents vital point.


Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

• Inflicts Blunt damage on the opponent
  
• +5 strength benefit from this technique if in close-range
  
• The user is harder to hit as he stands next to his opponent
  

Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

• Leaves himself open in the back
  
• The user receives -5 speed debuff from skill
  
• Easily dodged if opponent is at long-range