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    The Yawning Sage

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    Edward D. Valentine

    Rank 1- Limited Edition Donor 2- Player-

    Lineage : Will of the D

    Beli Beli : 57170
    Divine Coins : 11
    Posts : 88
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Black Orchid Pirates
    Affiliation : Pirate


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Edward D. Valentine
    Primary Skill: Flower Reaper Style
    Secondary Skill: The Yawning Sage

    The Yawning Sage

    Post by Edward D. Valentine on Sun Mar 09, 2014 9:01 am

    The Yawning Sage


    Skill Type: Blunt, Support


    Skill Information: In his lazy behavior, Edward learned to control his mind, body and spirit. He mediates channeling his spirit with nature. He becomes one with nature to gain abilities that surpass the normal human experience. It is an art Edward created to improve his laziness so he doesn’t have to fight when he doesn’t want to. When he gets irritated his sword style is improved greatly from this skill.


    Skill Strengths:


    • User is capable of traveling at very high speeds. At lvl 1 you can burst your speed up to 10MPH, at lvl 2, 20MPH and at lvl 3, 30MPH.
    • User is capable of using skills to combo with his melee weapon.
    • User receives a +5 reflex boost from all close combat skills for his harmony with nature.



    Skill Weaknesses:


    • Cannot Use any form of heavy armor

    • -5 finesse to long-range attacks

    • As user begins to speed up his awareness starts to weaken. -5 reflex.

     
     
    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Running Spring


    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support, Mid-range


    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 turns


    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward will swiftly dash towards a target or away. Can also be used to dodge any attack launched within 20 meters


    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:



    • User can travel at 10 MPH to dodge an incoming attack from an opponent
    • User can use travel at a very fast rate up to 20 meters within any direction
    • User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique.



    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:



    • Requires user to see incoming attack
    • Can only be used to dodge one attack
    • User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill.

     


    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Gliding Twister


    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support, Close-range


    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 turns


    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward dodges the oncoming attack, spinning around the opponent at close-range and stands behind him ready to strike.


    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:



    • User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique
    • Leaves the user ready to attack the opponent from behind
    • Can dodge a close incoming attack



    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:



    • Opponents can dodge attacks from skill user whose speed is +10 more than skill user's speed.
    • -5 fines against long-range attacks
    • User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill



     
    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Raging Stream


    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Blunt, Mid-range


    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 turns


    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward kicks off the ground a few times to charge at his opponent with blindingly fast speed, appearing in front of the opponent and smacking the melee into the opponents gut.


    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:



    • User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique
    • User can use travel at a 10 MPH to 20 meters within any direction 
    • Inflicts Blunt damage on the opponent



    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:



    • Leaves user open to frontal attacks
    • Receive half-damage if wearing heavy armor
    • User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill

     
     
    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Tree Stump


    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Blunt, Close-range


    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  4 turns


    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward stomps of the ground, slamming the bottom of his melee into the opponents vital point.


    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:



    • Inflicts Blunt damage on the opponent
    • +5 strength benefit from this technique if in close-range
    • The user is harder to hit as he stands next to his opponent



    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:



    • Leaves himself open in the back
    • The user receives -5 speed debuff from skill
    • Easily dodged if opponent is at long-range


    Last edited by Edward D. Valentine on Sun Mar 09, 2014 9:04 pm; edited 3 times in total
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    Leon L.H.

    Administrator- Developer/Chatbox Moderator- Rank 1- Beta 3 Tester- Limited Edition Donor- Novice- Mythical Zoan Fruit User- Player-

    Lineage : Peacekeeper's Virtue

    Beli Beli : 275283
    Task Points : 16
    Divine Coins :
    Posts : 520
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Heaven's Winter
    Affiliation : Pirate


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Hexel L Hellsing AKA The Red Piano
    Primary Skill: Akuma-Akuma No Mi; Model: Diablo
    Secondary Skill: Vengeance of Demon Slayers

    Re: The Yawning Sage

    Post by Leon L.H. on Sun Mar 09, 2014 7:58 pm



    Edward D. Valentine wrote:
    The Yawning Sage


    Skill Type: Blunt, Support


    Skill Information: In his lazy behavior, Edward learned to control his mind, body and spirit. He mediates channeling his spirit with nature. He becomes one with nature to gain abilities that surpass the normal human experience. It is an art Edward created to improve his laziness so he doesn’t have to fight when he doesn’t want to. When he gets irritated his sword style is improved greatly from this skill.


    Skill Strengths:


    • User is capable of traveling at very high speeds. - how fast? gain +10 speed? if not a stat gain,, use MPH for example, at lvl 1 you can burst your speed up to 10MPH, at lvl 2 20 and at lvl 3, 25. I would accept this.
    • User is capable of using skills to combo with his melee weapon.
    • User receives a +5 reflex boost from all close combat skills for his harmony with nature.



    Skill Weaknesses:


    • Cannot Use any form of heavy armor

    • -10 reflex to long-range attacks - change this to -5 finesse.

    • As user begins to speed up his awareness starts to weaken - add - 5 reflexes.

     
     

    CHANGE ALL COOLDOWN TO 4 POSTS!

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Running Spring


    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support, Mid-range


    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 turns


    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward will swiftly dash towards a target or away. Can also be used to dodge any attack launched within 20 meters


    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:



    • User can travel at very fast rate to dodge an incoming attack from an opponent - how fast? again use example i gave you above. again at lvl one i would put 5MPH
    • User can use travel at a very fast rate up to 20 meters within any direction
    • User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique.



    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:



    • Requires user to see incoming attack
    • Can only be used to dodge one attack
    • User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill.

     


    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Gliding Twister


    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support, Close-range


    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 turns


    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward dodges the oncoming attack, spinning around the opponent at close-range and stands behind him ready to strike.


    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:



    • User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique
    • Leaves the user ready to attack the opponent from behind
    • Can dodge a close incoming attack



    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:



    • Requires user to see incoming attack
    • Weak against long range attacks
    • User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill



     
    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Raging Stream


    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Blunt, Mid-range


    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 turns


    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward kicks off the ground a few times to charge at his opponent with blindingly fast speed, appearing in front of the opponent and smacking the melee into the opponents gut.


    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:



    • User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique
    • User can use travel at a very fast rate up to 20 meters within any direction
    • Inflicts Blunt damage on the opponent



    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:



    • Leaves user open to frontal attacks
    • Weak to Heavy Armor - how much weak? they receive half the damage weak?
    • User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill

     
     
    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Tree Stump


    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Blunt, Close-range


    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  3 turns


    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward stomps of the ground, slamming the bottom of his melee into the opponents vital point.


    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:



    • Inflicts Blunt damage on the opponent
    • +5 finesse benefit from this technique - how?
    • The user is harder to hit as he stands next to his opponent



    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:



    • Leaves himself open in the back
    • The user receives -5 speed debuff from skill
    • Easily dodged. The opponent can dodge when their skill is half of the users. - what do you mean half o the users?



    _______________________
    ACHIEVEMENTS!

    * First player to create a task and finished it.
    * First player to receive the rewards for completing a task.
    * First and the Last player who received 10 Stat points for completing a task.
    * Second player to create a Skill and got it approved.
    * First Player to get Mythical Zoan user.
    * Second Highest Bounty

    Signatures:

    Even in the heart of heaven, Angels can still feel fear.




    Wanted Poster:




    My Theme Song:





    Approval Stamp:

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    Leon L.H.

    Administrator- Developer/Chatbox Moderator- Rank 1- Beta 3 Tester- Limited Edition Donor- Novice- Mythical Zoan Fruit User- Player-

    Lineage : Peacekeeper's Virtue

    Beli Beli : 275283
    Task Points : 16
    Divine Coins :
    Posts : 520
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Heaven's Winter
    Affiliation : Pirate


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Hexel L Hellsing AKA The Red Piano
    Primary Skill: Akuma-Akuma No Mi; Model: Diablo
    Secondary Skill: Vengeance of Demon Slayers

    Re: The Yawning Sage

    Post by Leon L.H. on Sun Mar 09, 2014 8:29 pm

    Edward D. Valentine wrote:
    The Yawning Sage


    Skill Type: Blunt, Support


    Skill Information: In his lazy behavior, Edward learned to control his mind, body and spirit. He mediates channeling his spirit with nature. He becomes one with nature to gain abilities that surpass the normal human experience. It is an art Edward created to improve his laziness so he doesn’t have to fight when he doesn’t want to. When he gets irritated his sword style is improved greatly from this skill.


    Skill Strengths:


    • User is capable of traveling at very high speeds. At lvl 1 you can burst your speed up to 10MPH, at lvl 2, 20MPH and at lvl 3, 30MPH.
    • User is capable of using skills to combo with his melee weapon.
    • User receives a +5 reflex boost from all close combat skills for his harmony with nature.



    Skill Weaknesses:


    • Cannot Use any form of heavy armor

    • -5 finesse to long-range attacks

    • As user begins to speed up his awareness starts to weaken - add - 5 reflexes.

     
     
    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Running Spring


    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support, Mid-range


    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 turns


    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward will swiftly dash towards a target or away. Can also be used to dodge any attack launched within 20 meters


    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:



    • User can travel at 10 MPH to dodge an incoming attack from an opponent
    • User can use travel at a very fast rate up to 20 meters within any direction
    • User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique.



    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:



    • Requires user to see incoming attack
    • Can only be used to dodge one attack
    • User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill.

     


    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Gliding Twister


    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support, Close-range


    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 turns


    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward dodges the oncoming attack, spinning around the opponent at close-range and stands behind him ready to strike.


    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:



    • User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique
    • Leaves the user ready to attack the opponent from behind
    • Can dodge a close incoming attack



    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:



    • Requires user to see incoming attack
    • Weak against long range attacks - how so?
    • User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill



     
    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Raging Stream


    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Blunt, Mid-range


    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 turns


    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward kicks off the ground a few times to charge at his opponent with blindingly fast speed, appearing in front of the opponent and smacking the melee into the opponents gut.


    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:



    • User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique
    • User can use travel at a very fast rate up to 20 meters within any direction
    • Inflicts Blunt damage on the opponent



    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:



    • Leaves user open to frontal attacks
    • Receive half-damage if wearing heavy armor
    • User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill

     
     
    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Tree Stump


    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Blunt, Close-range


    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  4 turns


    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward stomps of the ground, slamming the bottom of his melee into the opponents vital point.


    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:



    • Inflicts Blunt damage on the opponent
    • +5 strength benefit from this technique if in close-range
    • The user is harder to hit as he stands next to his opponent



    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:



    • Leaves himself open in the back
    • The user receives -5 speed debuff from skill
    • Easily dodged if opponent is at long-range



    _______________________
    ACHIEVEMENTS!

    * First player to create a task and finished it.
    * First player to receive the rewards for completing a task.
    * First and the Last player who received 10 Stat points for completing a task.
    * Second player to create a Skill and got it approved.
    * First Player to get Mythical Zoan user.
    * Second Highest Bounty

    Signatures:

    Even in the heart of heaven, Angels can still feel fear.




    Wanted Poster:




    My Theme Song:





    Approval Stamp:

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    Leon L.H.

    Administrator- Developer/Chatbox Moderator- Rank 1- Beta 3 Tester- Limited Edition Donor- Novice- Mythical Zoan Fruit User- Player-

    Lineage : Peacekeeper's Virtue

    Beli Beli : 275283
    Task Points : 16
    Divine Coins :
    Posts : 520
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Heaven's Winter
    Affiliation : Pirate


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Hexel L Hellsing AKA The Red Piano
    Primary Skill: Akuma-Akuma No Mi; Model: Diablo
    Secondary Skill: Vengeance of Demon Slayers

    Re: The Yawning Sage

    Post by Leon L.H. on Sun Mar 09, 2014 8:49 pm

    Edward D. Valentine wrote:
    The Yawning Sage


    Skill Type: Blunt, Support


    Skill Information: In his lazy behavior, Edward learned to control his mind, body and spirit. He mediates channeling his spirit with nature. He becomes one with nature to gain abilities that surpass the normal human experience. It is an art Edward created to improve his laziness so he doesn’t have to fight when he doesn’t want to. When he gets irritated his sword style is improved greatly from this skill.


    Skill Strengths:


    • User is capable of traveling at very high speeds. At lvl 1 you can burst your speed up to 10MPH, at lvl 2, 20MPH and at lvl 3, 30MPH.
    • User is capable of using skills to combo with his melee weapon.
    • User receives a +5 reflex boost from all close combat skills for his harmony with nature.



    Skill Weaknesses:


    • Cannot Use any form of heavy armor

    • -5 finesse to long-range attacks

    • As user begins to speed up his awareness starts to weaken. -5 reflex.

     
     
    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Running Spring


    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support, Mid-range


    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 turns


    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward will swiftly dash towards a target or away. Can also be used to dodge any attack launched within 20 meters


    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:



    • User can travel at 10 MPH to dodge an incoming attack from an opponent
    • User can use travel at a very fast rate up to 20 meters within any direction
    • User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique.



    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:



    • Requires user to see incoming attack
    • Can only be used to dodge one attack
    • User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill.

     


    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Gliding Twister


    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support, Close-range


    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 turns


    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward dodges the oncoming attack, spinning around the opponent at close-range and stands behind him ready to strike.


    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:



    • User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique
    • Leaves the user ready to attack the opponent from behind
    • Can dodge a close incoming attack



    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:



    • Requires user to see incoming attack - what determines you to see the attack? reword this to Opponents can dodge attacks from skill user whose speed is +10 more than skill user's speed.
    • -5 fines against long-range attacks
    • User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill



     
    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Raging Stream


    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Blunt, Mid-range


    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 turns


    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward kicks off the ground a few times to charge at his opponent with blindingly fast speed, appearing in front of the opponent and smacking the melee into the opponents gut.


    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:



    • User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique
    • User can use travel at a very fast rate up to 20 meters within any direction - add 10MPH
    • Inflicts Blunt damage on the opponent



    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:



    • Leaves user open to frontal attacks
    • Receive half-damage if wearing heavy armor
    • User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill

     
     
    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Tree Stump


    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Blunt, Close-range


    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  4 turns


    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward stomps of the ground, slamming the bottom of his melee into the opponents vital point.


    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:



    • Inflicts Blunt damage on the opponent
    • +5 strength benefit from this technique if in close-range
    • The user is harder to hit as he stands next to his opponent



    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:



    • Leaves himself open in the back
    • The user receives -5 speed debuff from skill
    • Easily dodged if opponent is at long-range



    _______________________
    ACHIEVEMENTS!

    * First player to create a task and finished it.
    * First player to receive the rewards for completing a task.
    * First and the Last player who received 10 Stat points for completing a task.
    * Second player to create a Skill and got it approved.
    * First Player to get Mythical Zoan user.
    * Second Highest Bounty

    Signatures:

    Even in the heart of heaven, Angels can still feel fear.




    Wanted Poster:




    My Theme Song:





    Approval Stamp:

    avatar
    Leon L.H.

    Administrator- Developer/Chatbox Moderator- Rank 1- Beta 3 Tester- Limited Edition Donor- Novice- Mythical Zoan Fruit User- Player-

    Lineage : Peacekeeper's Virtue

    Beli Beli : 275283
    Task Points : 16
    Divine Coins :
    Posts : 520
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Heaven's Winter
    Affiliation : Pirate


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Hexel L Hellsing AKA The Red Piano
    Primary Skill: Akuma-Akuma No Mi; Model: Diablo
    Secondary Skill: Vengeance of Demon Slayers

    Re: The Yawning Sage

    Post by Leon L.H. on Sun Mar 09, 2014 9:12 pm

    Approved. Thank you for working with me.

    Edward D. Valentine wrote:
    The Yawning Sage


    Skill Type: Blunt, Support


    Skill Information: In his lazy behavior, Edward learned to control his mind, body and spirit. He mediates channeling his spirit with nature. He becomes one with nature to gain abilities that surpass the normal human experience. It is an art Edward created to improve his laziness so he doesn’t have to fight when he doesn’t want to. When he gets irritated his sword style is improved greatly from this skill.


    Skill Strengths:


    • User is capable of traveling at very high speeds. At lvl 1 you can burst your speed up to 10MPH, at lvl 2, 20MPH and at lvl 3, 30MPH.
    • User is capable of using skills to combo with his melee weapon.
    • User receives a +5 reflex boost from all close combat skills for his harmony with nature.



    Skill Weaknesses:


    • Cannot Use any form of heavy armor

    • -5 finesse to long-range attacks

    • As user begins to speed up his awareness starts to weaken. -5 reflex.

     
     
    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Running Spring


    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support, Mid-range


    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 turns


    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward will swiftly dash towards a target or away. Can also be used to dodge any attack launched within 20 meters


    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:



    • User can travel at 10 MPH to dodge an incoming attack from an opponent
    • User can use travel at a very fast rate up to 20 meters within any direction
    • User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique.



    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:



    • Requires user to see incoming attack
    • Can only be used to dodge one attack
    • User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill.

     


    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Gliding Twister


    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support, Close-range


    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 turns


    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward dodges the oncoming attack, spinning around the opponent at close-range and stands behind him ready to strike.


    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:



    • User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique
    • Leaves the user ready to attack the opponent from behind
    • Can dodge a close incoming attack



    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:



    • Opponents can dodge attacks from skill user whose speed is +10 more than skill user's speed.
    • -5 fines against long-range attacks
    • User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill



     
    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Raging Stream


    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Blunt, Mid-range


    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 turns


    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward kicks off the ground a few times to charge at his opponent with blindingly fast speed, appearing in front of the opponent and smacking the melee into the opponents gut.


    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:



    • User receives a +10 speed benefit for technique
    • User can use travel at a 10 MPH to 20 meters within any direction 
    • Inflicts Blunt damage on the opponent



    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:



    • Leaves user open to frontal attacks
    • Receive half-damage if wearing heavy armor
    • User receives a -10 reflex de buff for skill

     
     
    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Tree Stump


    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Blunt, Close-range


    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  4 turns


    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Edward stomps of the ground, slamming the bottom of his melee into the opponents vital point.


    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:



    • Inflicts Blunt damage on the opponent
    • +5 strength benefit from this technique if in close-range
    • The user is harder to hit as he stands next to his opponent



    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:



    • Leaves himself open in the back
    • The user receives -5 speed debuff from skill
    • Easily dodged if opponent is at long-range



    _______________________
    ACHIEVEMENTS!

    * First player to create a task and finished it.
    * First player to receive the rewards for completing a task.
    * First and the Last player who received 10 Stat points for completing a task.
    * Second player to create a Skill and got it approved.
    * First Player to get Mythical Zoan user.
    * Second Highest Bounty

    Signatures:

    Even in the heart of heaven, Angels can still feel fear.




    Wanted Poster:




    My Theme Song:





    Approval Stamp:


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