Dangan-Dangan no Mi

Skill Name: Dangan-Dangan no mi (Bullet-Bullet Fruit)
Skill Type:Paramecia
Skill Information:A large dark grey blackberry, covered in several short, conical protrusions colored with an orange dot on the ends. When eaten, this Devil fruit allows the user to influence the trajectory and momentum of any bullet within a certain range.
Skill Strengths:
-Can change the trajectory of any bullet fired within range. (50 meters at lvl 1, 75 meters at lvl 2, and 100 meters at lvl 3)
-Passively redirects bullets fired in his direction and in his line of sight.
-Can influence the trajectory and momentum of his own shots to find their mark faster, have more piercing power, and even curve the bullets.
Skill Weaknesses:
-Cannot redirect bullets at point blank range
-Is vulnerable to bullets made with Kairoseki, as well as being unable to interfere with their trajectories.
-General Devil fruit weaknesses to the sea, sea salt, Kairoseki, and haki.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Bullet-Bullet: Straight Shooter
Ability Lvl 1 Type:Long Range (30-40 meters)
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:5 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user fires a shot and influences it to make it fly faster and farther.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- +20 speed on the shot.
- Pierces through light armor.
- Travels in a straight line without dropping until max range is reached.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Lowers finesse by -20 for the shot.
- Shot does not damage heavily armored opponents, though it may stagger them.
- Speed bonus lowered to +10 at ranges beyond 50 meters.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Bullet-Bullet: Hit The Dirt
Ability Lvl 1 Type:Support
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:4 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user utilizes the fruit's abilities to deflect bullets away from his allies.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Spares allies from the damage of gunfire.
- Deflects bullets away from allies.
- May hit enemies standing behind allies.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Only works on allies within his line of sight.
- Only works on allies within range of user.
- Cannot deflect bullets made with Kairoseki.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Bullet-Bullet: Finger Gun
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Long Range ( 30-40 meters)
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user picks up a spent shell or a pre-fired bullet, makes a gun shape with their hand, and fires the projectile as if they had a gun.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Used as a last resort when the thread ammo limit has been reached.
- Allows 5 more shots past the thread ammo limit.
- Pierces light armor.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- -10 Finesse with all shots made using this ability.
- Shot loses effectiveness outside the user's range.
- User can only use this ability 5 times per thread before being completely unarmed.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Bullet-Bullet: Curve
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Long Range (30-40 meters)
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user fires a shot from their weapon and influences it to make it curve around or over the target's cover. Max distance = 80 meters
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Allows the user to hit targets behind cover.
- +10 finesse to the shot against enemies in cover.
- Can fire over cover in absence of viable ways of bullet going around the sides of cover.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- -10 speed to this shot.
- Shot cannot pierce through light armor or higher, due to loss of momentum.
- Can still be easily dodged by people with high reflexes.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Bullet-Bullet: Pistol Fist
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Close range (0-20 meters)
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user places 3 bullets in between the fingers on either of his hands and jabs, using their powers to discharge the bullets at the moment of contact, augmenting the force of the punch with the momentum and penetration of the bullets.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Allows the user to punch through medium armor
- Allows the user to break through objects as thin as or thinner than a wooden door.
- Alternative to ranged weapons in close combat.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Expends 3 bullets from ammo reserves when used.
- Renders the hand used to perform the technique unusable.
- Can only be used twice, as the user would run out of hands to break.

Bump it up!

you need to make 2 more abilities. You need to make total of 5 lvl 1 primary abilities.

Bump?

...Hope someone checks this soon...

Correction is in RED

Noir Dulocke wrote:
Skill Name: Dangan-Dangan no mi (Bullet-Bullet Fruit)
Skill Type:Paramecia
Skill Information:A large dark grey blackberry, covered in several short, conical protrusions colored with an orange dot on the ends. When eaten, this Devil fruit allows the user to influence the trajectory and momentum of any bullet in their line of sight.
Skill Strengths:
-Can change the trajectory of any bullet fired within his line of sight. - be specific on the distance. For example, at lvl 1, you can't control the bullet if its 50meters away.
-Becomes immune to shots fired in his line of sight. - denied. this fruit allows you to change the trajectory and momentum. It has nothing to do with you being immune to shots fired towards you.
-Can influence the trajectory and momentum of his own shots to find their mark faster, have more piercing power, and even curve the bullets.
Skill Weaknesses:
-Is vulnerable to shots from the behind, or sneak attacks, as he cannot see the bullets. - if you have high reflexes you can dodge bullets and even notice them beforehand. Try making new weakness
-Is vulnerable to bullets made with Kairoseki, as well as being unable to interfere with their trajectories.
-General Devil fruit weaknesses to the sea, sea salt, Kairoseki, and haki.

YOU NEED AT LEAST 3 STRENGTH AND 3 WEAKNESS FOR EACH ABILITIES

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Bullet-Bullet: Straight Shooter
Ability Lvl 1 Type:Range - long range? med? or close range specify it
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3 posts - change it to 5 posts.
Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user fires a shot and influences it to make it fly faster and farther (further). --- this doesn't go with your first weakness. You said, "The user fires a shot and influences",, how can you influence something when your weakness said you can't once its fired.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- +20 finesse on the shot. - it would make sense to say speed instead of finesse.
- Pierces through light armor.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

- balance out your weakness. You are gaining +20 stats, your weakness need to be somewhat equal to that. for example, you lose -20 finesse.

- Shot cannot be influenced in any way once fired.
- Shot is ineffective against heavily armored opponents. - is this mean they won't take any damage against this ability?
- Finesse bonus lowered to +10 at distances beyond 50 feet. - make sure to put the max distance it can travel under the description.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Bullet-Bullet: Hit The Dirt
Ability Lvl 1 Type:Support
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:4 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user utilizes the fruit's abilities to deflect bullets away from his allies.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

- need at least 3 strength

- Spares allies from the damage of gunfire.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Only works on allies within his line of sight.
- Only works on allies within 20 feet of user.
- Cannot deflect bullets made with Kairoseki.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Bullet-Bullet: Finger Gun
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Ranged - specify which one, long med or close
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user picks up a spent shell or a pre-fired bullet, makes a gun shape with their hand, and fires the projectile as if they had a gun.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Used as a last resort when the thread ammo limit has been reached.
- Allows 10 more shots past the thread ammo limit.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

I am going to help you here. you losing total of -30 stats is not good at all!

- -10 Finesse with all shots made using this ability.
- -20 Finesse to all shots made at distances past 25 feet. - make sure to put under description how far the empty cartridge can travel
- User can only use this ability 10 times per thread before being completely unarmed. - reword this to, user can only use this ability 5 times per thread.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Bullet-Bullet: Curve
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Range - again...specify it
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user fires a shot from their weapon and influences it to make it curve around or over the target's cover. - put the max distance it can travel
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Allows the user to hit targets behind cover.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- -10 Finesse to this shot. - change it to speed.
- Shot cannot pierce through light armor or higher, due to loss of momentum.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Bullet-Bullet: Pistol Fist
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user places 3 bullets in between the fingers on either of his hands and jabs, using their powers to discharge the bullets at the moment of contact, augmenting the force of the punch with the momentum and penetration of the bullets.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Allows the user to punch through medium armor
- Allows the user to break through objects as thin as or thinner than a wooden door.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Expends 3 bullets from ammo reserves when used.
- Can seriously damage the arm used, damaging it after 5 repeated uses and rendering it unusable and possibly causing permanent damage after 5 more. - 5 repeated use? as I mentioned above, you are not immune to bullets and the explosions it causes. using this attack once will damage your arm to a point you will at least suffer from 1st or 2nd degree burn, possibly broken hand.

I REPEAT, YOU NEED AT LEAST 3 STRENGTH AND 3 WEAKNESS FOR YOUR ABILITIES.

It's been a while... is this still viable for checking?
bump

please edit your range in as shown in this example and according to the sites preset range classification Close range 0-10 meters. Mid range, 15-25 and long range 30-40.

Example:

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Though I found this a bit confusing... nevermind though.

Killing me softly with his bump

Fix the corrections mentioned there is barely any

Noir Dulocke wrote:Skill Name: Dangan-Dangan no mi (Bullet-Bullet Fruit)
Skill Type:Paramecia
Skill Information:A large dark grey blackberry, covered in several short, conical protrusions colored with an orange dot on the ends. When eaten, this Devil fruit allows the user to influence the trajectory and momentum of any bullet within a certain range.
Skill Strengths:
-Can change the trajectory of any bullet fired within range. (50 meters at lvl 1, 75 meters at lvl 2, and 100 meters at lvl 3)
-Passively redirects bullets fired in his direction. - I would like this to be within only his field of vision as it seems too close to god modding as it is right now.
-Can influence the trajectory and momentum of his own shots to find their mark faster, have more piercing power, and even curve the bullets.
Skill Weaknesses:
-Cannot redirect bullets at point blank range
-Is vulnerable to bullets made with Kairoseki, as well as being unable to interfere with their trajectories.
-General Devil fruit weaknesses to the sea, sea salt, Kairoseki, and haki.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Bullet-Bullet: Straight Shooter
Ability Lvl 1 Type:Long Range (30-40 meters)
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:5 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user fires a shot and influences it to make it fly faster and farther.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- +20 speed on the shot.
- Pierces through light armor.
- Travels in a straight line without dropping until max range is reached.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Lowers finesse by -20 for the shot.
- Shot does not damage heavily armored opponents, though it may stagger them.
- Speed bonus lowered to +10 at ranges beyond 50 meters.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Bullet-Bullet: Hit The Dirt
Ability Lvl 1 Type:Support
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:4 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user utilizes the fruit's abilities to deflect bullets away from his allies.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Spares allies from the damage of gunfire. (I'd like to make a special case for this, unless you could think of any other strengths.) -being able to deflect gunfire from yourself is a strength is it not?
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Only works on allies within his line of sight.
- Only works on allies within range of user.
- Cannot deflect bullets made with Kairoseki.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Bullet-Bullet: Finger Gun
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Long Range ( 30-40 meters)
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user picks up a spent shell or a pre-fired bullet, makes a gun shape with their hand, and fires the projectile as if they had a gun.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Used as a last resort when the thread ammo limit has been reached.
- Allows 5 more shots past the thread ammo limit.
- Pierces light armor.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- -10 Finesse with all shots made using this ability.
- Shot loses effectiveness outside the user's range.
- User can only use this ability 5 times per thread before being completely unarmed.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Bullet-Bullet: Curve
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Long Range (30-40 meters)
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user fires a shot from their weapon and influences it to make it curve around or over the target's cover. Max distance = 80 meters
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Allows the user to hit targets behind cover.
- +10 finesse to the shot against enemies in cover.
- Can fire over cover in absence of viable ways of bullet going around the sides of cover.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- -10 speed to this shot.
- Shot cannot pierce through light armor or higher, due to loss of momentum.
- Can still be easily dodged by people with high reflexes.

Ability Lvl 1 Name: Bullet-Bullet: Pistol Fist
Ability Lvl 1 Type: Close range (0-20 meters)
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user places 3 bullets in between the fingers on either of his hands and jabs, using their powers to discharge the bullets at the moment of contact, augmenting the force of the punch with the momentum and penetration of the bullets.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Allows the user to punch through medium armor
- Allows the user to break through objects as thin as or thinner than a wooden door.
- Alternative to ranged weapons in close combat.
Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Expends 3 bullets from ammo reserves when used.
- Renders the hand used to perform the technique unusable.
- Can only be used twice, as the user would run out of hands to break.

One last thing then you are okay

Noir Dulocke wrote:Ability Lvl 1 Name: Bullet-Bullet: Hit The Dirt
Ability Lvl 1 Type:Support
Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:4 posts
Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user utilizes the fruit's abilities to deflect bullets away from his allies.
Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
- Spares allies from the damage of gunfire.
- Deflects bullets away from allies

<< add that it deflects bullets from you.

Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
- Only works on allies within his line of sight.
- Only works on allies within range of user.
- Cannot deflect bullets made with Kairoseki.

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