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    Jin's sickles with chain

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    Jin's sickles with chain

    Post by Jin on Thu May 01, 2014 4:50 am

    Equipment Name: Double 1 hand sickle and chain
    Equipment Level: 1
    Equipment Type: Sickle and chain
    Equipment Description: Its basicly a chain with two edges. Eachedge conects with a 1 blade black sickle. Jin usually grabs bouth sickles at a time and sometimes grabs only one sicle to throw the other towards the enemy.
    Equipment Significance: The sickles aren’t very heavy, they are made with aluminum which makes them lighter. Even do they are made very compreased making them strong (comparing to the material, they have the same power as any normal weapon), these can be used to attack in close range and midlle range.
    Equipment Strength:
    1. They are close range and middle range, usually close range.
    2. They can help the user when faling by throwing it and grabbing from some structure.
    3. It can grab enemies to pull them towards the user.
    Equipment Weaknesses:
    1. The user can throw it a max of 8 mts, because if the chain was longer, the user would lose speed.
    2. The chain can be cuted wasily when thrown, meaning it couldn’t be used until it’s repaird in the boat.
    3. The sharpness of the sickles must be sharpen after a battle because it’s made with aluminum.


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    Re: Jin's sickles with chain

    Post by Storm Runner on Thu May 01, 2014 4:11 pm

    Fighters can't use guns as far as I am aware however you could make them just knifes that the handles of them are made out non working guns. Also as far as I know Lv1 weapons can't have be poisoned.


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    Re: Jin's sickles with chain

    Post by Jin on Thu May 01, 2014 5:55 pm

    OK, ill modify this
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    Re: Jin's sickles with chain

    Post by Storm Runner on Sun May 04, 2014 4:23 am

    can't have poison and I think I read some Spanish in there. please fix that.


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    Re: Jin's sickles with chain

    Post by Jin on Sun May 04, 2014 4:38 am

    Sorry, i didn't ment to put poison. I corrected that
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    Re: Jin's sickles with chain

    Post by Storm Runner on Sun May 04, 2014 1:58 pm

    Corrections are in red. Please go through this with a fine tooth comb I did a lot of spelling corrections which you can see if you compared the quote to what you actually wore. I didn't highlight them.

    Jin wrote:Equipment Name: Double 1 hand sickle and chain
    Equipment Level: 1
    Equipment Type: Sickle and chain
    Equipment Description: Its basicly a chain with two edges. Each edge conects with a 1 blade black sickle. Jin usually graves both sickles at a time and sometimes graves only one sickle to throw the other towards the enemy.
    Equipment Significance: The sickles aren’t very heavy, they are made with aluminum wich makes them lighter. Even though they are made very compreased making them strong, these can be used to attack in close range and midlle range. << They can only be as strong as other lv1 weapons.
    Equipment Strength:
    1. They are close range and middle range, usually close range.
    2. They can help the user when falling by throwing it and graving from some structure. << Graving?
    3. It can grave enemies to pull them towards the user.
    Equipment Weaknesses:
    1. The user can throw it with a máximum of 8 mts, because if the chane was longer, the user would lose speed. << Please reword this and get rid of the Spanish.
    2. The chain can be cut easily when thrown, meaning it couldn’t be used until it’s repaird in the boat.
    3. The sharpness of the sickles must be sharpened after a battle because it’s made with aluminum.
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    Re: Jin's sickles with chain

    Post by Jin on Sun May 04, 2014 9:11 pm

    I couldn't find the spanish, sorry.
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    Re: Jin's sickles with chain

    Post by Storm Runner on Sun May 04, 2014 11:47 pm

    máximum.....that word is Spanish


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    Re: Jin's sickles with chain

    Post by Jin on Mon May 05, 2014 5:34 pm

    No, in spanish, its máximo, but ill correct it
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    Re: Jin's sickles with chain

    Post by Storm Runner on Mon May 05, 2014 7:00 pm

    i don't think graving is the correct word to use but none the less

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    Re: Jin's sickles with chain

    Post by Jin on Fri May 09, 2014 3:26 am

    Sorry for the word, i already changed it.
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    Re: Jin's sickles with chain

    Post by Storm Runner on Fri May 09, 2014 7:58 pm

    Meh you were approved either way


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