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One Piece RP is a new non-canon forum RP focused on building a strong active community.

Phoenix D. Jack has been promoted to Administrator, and Ray Ignazia has been promoted to Head Moderator.
We are currently still in a beta like phase, and still working out some kinks like fixing up the tasks and stat system - but those that stay with us will be rewarded with limited edition stuff.

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    Dan'yaku-Dan'yaku no mi

    Tyler D
    Tyler D


    Rank 1- Paramecia Fruit User- Player-

    Lineage : Blood Bane

    Beli Beli : 9255
    Posts : 24
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Affiliation : Marine


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Tyler Di'angelo
    Primary Skill: Dan'yaku-Dan'yaku no mi
    Secondary Skill:

    Dan'yaku-Dan'yaku no mi Empty Dan'yaku-Dan'yaku no mi

    Post by Tyler D Sun Jun 29, 2014 4:16 am

    Skill Name: Dan'yaku-Dan'yaku no mi
    Skill Type: Paramecia
    Skill Information: This is an incredibly rare and unique devil fruit that is essentially useless unless in the hands of a marksman. This devil fruit allows the wielder to create unique ammunition from certain parts of the body. Essentially becoming an ammo man. Because they are made of the user's body they retain the strength of the ammo they resemble. This also means that though a bullet would be like steel in terms of strength it would not have steel like properties. A unique property of this DF is when the wilder pulls out a hair or a nail etc they feel no pain. [If someone else does it they feel pain]. He can even copy and recreate specialised ammo from other people thanks to this DF.
    Skill Strengths:

    • Made up from the body part of the user thus has no metal wood etc but has base strength of which ever ammo modelled after..


    • Is as strong as the ammo modelled after in terms of basic.


    • Each creation has a single unique ability.


    Skill Weaknesses:

    • Can not swim


    • Essentially useless without a bow or a gun.


    • Sea stone weakens the user and halts abilities.


    • Not including the unique ability the ammo created is only as strong as the base ammo modelled after.


    Abilities:


    Last edited by Tyler D on Mon Jun 30, 2014 8:44 pm; edited 5 times in total
    Ray Ignazia
    Ray Ignazia


    Rank 1- Beta 3 Tester- Player-

    Lineage : Will Of The Adventurer

    Beli Beli : 53674
    Posts : 86
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Pandora's Secret
    Affiliation : Marine


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Ray Ignazia
    Primary Skill: Enerugi No Mi
    Secondary Skill:

    Dan'yaku-Dan'yaku no mi Empty Re: Dan'yaku-Dan'yaku no mi

    Post by Ray Ignazia Sun Jun 29, 2014 11:34 am

    Hello there, I'm Ray Ignazia and I shall be grading you application.

    For starters, please put all your strengths and weaknesses in bullet points, or use the
    Code:
    [list][/list]
    command in order to make them easily readable. Also, please do make note that each ability needs to have 3 strengths and 3 weaknesses, so please do edit those in as well.

    Thank you,
    Ray Ignazia
    Tyler D
    Tyler D


    Rank 1- Paramecia Fruit User- Player-

    Lineage : Blood Bane

    Beli Beli : 9255
    Posts : 24
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Affiliation : Marine


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Tyler Di'angelo
    Primary Skill: Dan'yaku-Dan'yaku no mi
    Secondary Skill:

    Dan'yaku-Dan'yaku no mi Empty Re: Dan'yaku-Dan'yaku no mi

    Post by Tyler D Mon Jun 30, 2014 2:44 am

    Edited
    Ray Ignazia
    Ray Ignazia


    Rank 1- Beta 3 Tester- Player-

    Lineage : Will Of The Adventurer

    Beli Beli : 53674
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    Gender : Male
    Crew : Pandora's Secret
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    Character Profile
    Character Name: Ray Ignazia
    Primary Skill: Enerugi No Mi
    Secondary Skill:

    Dan'yaku-Dan'yaku no mi Empty Re: Dan'yaku-Dan'yaku no mi

    Post by Ray Ignazia Mon Jun 30, 2014 9:13 am

    No level one ability can be powerful enough to kill. Keeping that in mind, please edit out any allusions to fatalistic abilities.
    Tyler D
    Tyler D


    Rank 1- Paramecia Fruit User- Player-

    Lineage : Blood Bane

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    Posts : 24
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    Gender : Male
    Affiliation : Marine


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Tyler Di'angelo
    Primary Skill: Dan'yaku-Dan'yaku no mi
    Secondary Skill:

    Dan'yaku-Dan'yaku no mi Empty Re: Dan'yaku-Dan'yaku no mi

    Post by Tyler D Mon Jun 30, 2014 1:53 pm

    What?

    --its been edited but really makes no sense how things can slice through metal like butter but can't kill even though bone and skin are much weaker.
    Ray Ignazia
    Ray Ignazia


    Rank 1- Beta 3 Tester- Player-

    Lineage : Will Of The Adventurer

    Beli Beli : 53674
    Posts : 86
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Pandora's Secret
    Affiliation : Marine


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Ray Ignazia
    Primary Skill: Enerugi No Mi
    Secondary Skill:

    Dan'yaku-Dan'yaku no mi Empty Re: Dan'yaku-Dan'yaku no mi

    Post by Ray Ignazia Mon Jun 30, 2014 8:26 pm

    Your last ability has two strengths which are the same. Please make those two different strengths, basically summarize your ability in strengths. Read one of the approved for an idea.

    Also, if that were the case, your character would be burning to a crisp/hacked into pieces/crushed into grub every singular fighting thread. So yes, for Player immersion, such things are required.
    Tyler D
    Tyler D


    Rank 1- Paramecia Fruit User- Player-

    Lineage : Blood Bane

    Beli Beli : 9255
    Posts : 24
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Affiliation : Marine


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Tyler Di'angelo
    Primary Skill: Dan'yaku-Dan'yaku no mi
    Secondary Skill:

    Dan'yaku-Dan'yaku no mi Empty Re: Dan'yaku-Dan'yaku no mi

    Post by Tyler D Mon Jun 30, 2014 8:45 pm

    Sorry totally didnt realize i did that XD

    Edited
    Ray Ignazia
    Ray Ignazia


    Rank 1- Beta 3 Tester- Player-

    Lineage : Will Of The Adventurer

    Beli Beli : 53674
    Posts : 86
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Pandora's Secret
    Affiliation : Marine


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Ray Ignazia
    Primary Skill: Enerugi No Mi
    Secondary Skill:

    Dan'yaku-Dan'yaku no mi Empty Re: Dan'yaku-Dan'yaku no mi

    Post by Ray Ignazia Mon Jun 30, 2014 8:50 pm

    Approved. Don't mess around with it or it'll be pulled and nerfed.

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