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    Shiro's Secondary abilities

    Shiro Kotei
    Shiro Kotei


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    Character Profile
    Character Name: Shiro Kotei
    Primary Skill: N/A
    Secondary Skill: Flying Flash God

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    Post by Shiro Kotei Mon Jun 30, 2014 4:50 pm

    Skill Name: Flying Flash God
    Skill Type: Rokushiki: Soru/Geppo
    Skill Information: Geppo allows the users to actually jump off the air itself, allowing them to stay in the air for much longer than usual. Shiro can use this technique to cross great distances without ever touching the ground, or set himself up for a swift aerial attacks. Soru allows the users to move at extremely high speeds in order to avoid attacks, as well as to attack at higher speeds and with greater power. It was revealed that the principle of this move was to kick off the ground at least ten times in the blink of an eye.

    Skill Strengths:
    - Allows the user to move at even faster rates of speed, giving the user the capability to move and possibly be unseen.
    - Allows the user to treat the air as if it were the ground, allowing them great mobility while in the air as well as the ground.
    - Shiro is able to use White Emperor, his speed and Soru in combination with each other for deadly combinations.


    Skill Weaknesses:
    - While using Soru will increase the users speed, they will have to suffer a loss of finesse because the faster you do something the harder it becomes to be precise.
    - Most Soru techniques become null and void if the opponent is able to keep up with Shiro visually. (equal Reflex or higher)
    - If the users legs are injured it becomes useless to use geppo because it will cause pain every time it is used.


    Abilities:


    Last edited by Shiro Kotei on Sun Jul 06, 2014 3:01 am; edited 2 times in total
    Shiro Kotei
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    Character Profile
    Character Name: Shiro Kotei
    Primary Skill: N/A
    Secondary Skill: Flying Flash God

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    Post by Shiro Kotei Tue Jul 01, 2014 6:24 pm

    Complete Very Happy
    Shiro Kotei
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    Character Profile
    Character Name: Shiro Kotei
    Primary Skill: N/A
    Secondary Skill: Flying Flash God

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    Post by Shiro Kotei Thu Jul 03, 2014 5:27 pm

    bump
    Ray Ignazia
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    Post by Ray Ignazia Fri Jul 04, 2014 9:08 pm

    Since Double Flash Reversal is a level 1 ability, it can only allow you to slash at random points on the enemy, and will have a very less chance of success, so please do edit that in.

    Shiro Kotei
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    Character Name: Shiro Kotei
    Primary Skill: N/A
    Secondary Skill: Flying Flash God

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    Post by Shiro Kotei Sat Jul 05, 2014 1:47 am

    Edited, is that good?
    Ray Ignazia
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    Post by Ray Ignazia Sat Jul 05, 2014 9:46 pm

    I still see the wording reflecting those of you striking vital points, which remains to be the crux of your ability.

    Also, the second ability has 4 strengths, please reduce those to three.

    Thank you.
    Shiro Kotei
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    Character Name: Shiro Kotei
    Primary Skill: N/A
    Secondary Skill: Flying Flash God

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    Post by Shiro Kotei Sat Jul 05, 2014 11:03 pm

    I will fix the ability again but as for the 4 strengths it is allowed according to the template. It states that you has to have a minimum of 3 and so long as there is an equal amount of weaknesses then it is fine.
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    Post by Ray Ignazia Tue Jul 08, 2014 3:23 pm

    Approved.

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