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One Piece RP is a new non-canon forum RP focused on building a strong active community.

Phoenix D. Jack has been promoted to Administrator, and Ray Ignazia has been promoted to Head Moderator.
We are currently still in a beta like phase, and still working out some kinks like fixing up the tasks and stat system - but those that stay with us will be rewarded with limited edition stuff.

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    Twisted Fate Skills/Ability's [Done]

    Twisted Fate
    Twisted Fate


    Rank 1- Player-

    Lineage : Will of the Adventurer

    Beli Beli : 2751
    Posts : 9
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Savage Heart Pirates
    Affiliation : Pirate

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    Post by Twisted Fate Sun Jul 06, 2014 6:04 am

    Skill Name:Card throwing

    Skill Type: Playing Cards

    Skill Information: The user uses Cards instead of throwing knifes. These are harder to use then normal knifes and thus user makes up for the lack in strength with steel wires attached to the cards. The wires go down into his belt that has spools of steel wires. The user can get rid of the wires when ever he needs to.

    Skill Strengths:
    - The cards are connected to wires that can do light cuts.

    - The Cards can fly thought the air easier then knifes. ( knifes dont go as far because there heavier and wider then cards and cards can go farther because there lighter and thinner )

    - Cards can slip through tight and small areas.

    Skill Weaknesses:
    - Cards cannot pierece armor through regular means.

    - Wires can become tangled

    - The cards can be easily burned



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    Last edited by Twisted Fate on Tue Jul 08, 2014 1:51 am; edited 19 times in total (Reason for editing : because i can)
    Twisted Fate
    Twisted Fate


    Rank 1- Player-

    Lineage : Will of the Adventurer

    Beli Beli : 2751
    Posts : 9
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Savage Heart Pirates
    Affiliation : Pirate

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    Post by Twisted Fate Mon Jul 07, 2014 8:37 am

    Okay i now allow mods to destroy this post
    Rylan the Prodigy
    Rylan the Prodigy


    Rank 1- Beta 3 Tester- Player-

    Lineage : Prince of Darkness

    Beli Beli : 41013
    Task Points : 1
    Posts : 151
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : The Executioners
    Affiliation : Marine


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Rylan Kura
    Primary Skill: Goro Goro no mi
    Secondary Skill:

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    Post by Rylan the Prodigy Mon Jul 07, 2014 5:08 pm

    Hai, corrections will be in red.
    Twisted Fate wrote:Skill Name:Card throwing

    Skill Type: Playing Cards

    Skill Information: The user uses Cards instead of throwing knifes. These are harder to use then normal knifes and thus user makes up for the lack in strength with steel wires attached to the cards. The wires go down into his belt that has spools of steel wires. The user can get rid of the wires when ever he needs to.

    Skill Strengths:
    - The cards are connected to wires that can do light cuts.

    - The cards can cut as well as knives -You already said they can cut, no need to repeat it. Think of a new strength.

    - The Cards can fly thought the air easier then knifes -I don't see how this is a strength..

    Skill Weaknesses:
    - The cards arn't as strong as knifes. -Why are you comparing this to knifes? It's your skill you should tell what is strong ABOUT them, don't compare them to knifes..

    - They cant cut as deep as knives. -Why are you comparing this to knifes? It's your skill you should tell what is strong ABOUT them, don't compare them to knifes..

    - There direction can be changed by little gusts of wind. -Remove this weakness, since in RP's it will cause a lot of trouble.

    - The cards can be easily burned



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    Twisted Fate
    Twisted Fate


    Rank 1- Player-

    Lineage : Will of the Adventurer

    Beli Beli : 2751
    Posts : 9
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Savage Heart Pirates
    Affiliation : Pirate

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    Post by Twisted Fate Tue Jul 08, 2014 1:51 am

    edited
    Rylan the Prodigy
    Rylan the Prodigy


    Rank 1- Beta 3 Tester- Player-

    Lineage : Prince of Darkness

    Beli Beli : 41013
    Task Points : 1
    Posts : 151
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : The Executioners
    Affiliation : Marine


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Rylan Kura
    Primary Skill: Goro Goro no mi
    Secondary Skill:

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    Post by Rylan the Prodigy Tue Jul 08, 2014 2:36 am

    Twisted Fate wrote:Skill Name:Card throwing

    Skill Type: Playing Cards

    Skill Information: The user uses Cards instead of throwing knifes. These are harder to use then normal knifes and thus user makes up for the lack in strength with steel wires attached to the cards. The wires go down into his belt that has spools of steel wires. The user can get rid of the wires when ever he needs to.

    Skill Strengths:
    - The cards are connected to wires that can do light cuts.

    - The Cards can fly thought the air easier then knifes. ( knifes dont go as far because there heavier and wider then cards and cards can go farther because there lighter and thinner ) -again, I don't see how this is a strength.


    - Cards can slip through tight and small areas. -How is this a strength?

    Skill Weaknesses:
    - Cards cannot pierece armor through regular means.

    - Wires can become tangled -How will this be determined RP wise?

    - The cards can be easily burned



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