Arc's Cutlass

Equipment Name: Sekai Supuritta
Equipment Level: 1
Equipment Type: Sword/Cutlass
Equipment Description: The Sekai Supuritta is a cutlass passed through the Highram family for generations from father to son. It's specifically crafted for use in the Ancestral Sword Style of the Highram family.
http://cdn1.bigcommerce.com/server4100/dd172/products/909/images/8953/Pirate_Sword_Pirate_Cutlass_with_Sheath_6__71903.1374866861.1000.675.jpg?c=1
Equipment Significance: This sword is the one Arc is most accustomed to using and is the best at utilizing the techniques of the Ancestral Sentinal Style. It's very good at cutting things.
Equipment Strength:
-Where I was born and raised: Arc was trained with this cutlass since birth, when using it he gains +5 finesse.
-Soul of Iron: The Sekai Supuritta has been used by countless sword masters before Arc and is imbued with their fighting spirit and dieing will. It will not easily break.
-Faster is better: The design of a cutlass is made so that faster swings cut better so exceptionally fast attacks can be very damaging.
-Shockwave: Attacks by Arc using this blade passively have a cutting shockwave that carries for 2 meters and does minor damage.
Equipment Weaknesses:
-I don't try new things: Arc has never used any blade except this one he loses 5 finesse points when using any other weapon.
-Parasite: The blade has a strange curse on it so it can only be repaired by absorbing blood from the wielder. To fully restore the blade if it's shattered would require so much blood it could hospitalize Arc for weeks.
-A congress of ourselves: When a wielder of the sword perishes, their wisdom of swords play is transferred into the sword to be passed to the next wielder. However so many minds have been stuffed in it over the course of a long family history that it has become less of a source of useful wisdom and more of a cluster of indistinguishable voices yelling at each other within Arc's head. It makes for a terrible head ache.
-Irreplaceable: Arc's swordsmen ship degrades drastically without this particular sword and his swordsmen ship is really all Arc has left in this world. Making it a potential hostage or it could force Arc to go back into a dangerous environment if he gets separated from it.

Corrections will be in RED

Arc Highram wrote:Equipment Name: Sekai Supuritta
Equipment Level: 1
Equipment Type: Sword/Cutlass
Equipment Description: The Sekai Supuritta is a cutlass passed through the Highram family for generations from father to son. It's specifically crafted for use in the Ancestral Sword Style of the Highram family.

Equipment Significance: This sword is the one Arc is most accustomed to using and is the best at utilizing the techniques of the Ancestral Sentinal Style. It's very good at cutting things.
Equipment Strength:
-Where I was born and raised: Arc was trained with this cutlass since birth, when using it he gains +5 finesse. - stat gaining is not allowed at lvl 1 equipment.
-Soul of Iron: The Sekai Supuritta has been used by countless sword masters before Arc and is imbued with their fighting spirit and dieing will. It will not easily break. - yes it will. it's lvl 1 equipment. make new strength.
-Faster is better: The design of a cutlass is made so that faster swings cut better so exceptionally fast attacks can be very damaging. - reword this to, the cutlass is lightweight, allowing the user to attack quickly with this weapon. or something alike.
-Shockwave: Attacks by Arc using this blade passively have a cutting shockwave that carries for 2 meters and does minor damage. - this is skill or ability strength. Not a strength of this equipment.
Equipment Weaknesses:

-I don't try new things: Arc has never used any blade except this one he loses 5 finesse points when using any other weapon. - look,, this is your equipment weakness not your character weakness. make new one.
-Parasite: The blade has a strange curse on it so it can only be repaired by absorbing blood from the wielder. To fully restore the blade if it's shattered would require so much blood it could hospitalize Arc for weeks. - no. if it shatters you go to black smith, pay beli and repair it. remake a weakness.
-A congress of ourselves: When a wielder of the sword perishes, their wisdom of swords play is transferred into the sword to be passed to the next wielder. However so many minds have been stuffed in it over the course of a long family history that it has become less of a source of useful wisdom and more of a cluster of indistinguishable voices yelling at each other within Arc's head. It makes for a terrible head ache. - not a equipment weakness.
-Irreplaceable: Arc's swordsmen ship degrades drastically without this particular sword and his swordsmen ship is really all Arc has left in this world. Making it a potential hostage or it could force Arc to go back into a dangerous environment if he gets separated from it. - again.. not an equipment weakness.

I've seen you here, so are we still working on this?

nope