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    Sherlock Fang's Primary skill set Duel Kitchen Knives

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    Sherlock Fang's Primary skill set Duel Kitchen Knives

    Post by serdaniel on Sun Aug 03, 2014 7:53 am

    Skill Name: Dual Wielding Kitchen Knives
    Skill Type: Duel wielding Kitchen Knife
    Skill Information: Most cooks only use their kitchen knives for cooking, few rarely use them for fighting Sherlock uses them expertly in both fighting and cooking. May it be countering a master swordsman with a bigger blade then him to filleting the barrel of a gun off, but one thing can be certain he takes very good care of his knives as he does not us the knives he fights with to coook
    Skill Strengths: *Sharp they cut through Flesh Like butter *They are easy to conceal *Their easy weapon to Quickly Drawl out
    Skill Weaknesses: *Opponents With lvl. 1 med or Heavy armor *Opponents with long ranged weaponry *Zoan type Devil fruit user with thick hides

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Poison covered Fillet Chop x20
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Melee
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 turns
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:20 very quick slashes and  causes shallow or deep cuts on the enemy
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths: *can cut off opponents limbs*Can make the enemies bleed out *20% chance to poison *Can slowly cause the enemy to bleed out
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses: *Enemies with higher reflexes then Sherlock Fang have a chance doge this move *Cant poison logia Devil fruit users *Cant poised an opponent if he is completely armored.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Double Kitchen Knives Throw
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Ranged
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 Posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Flings two kitchen Knives
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:*Sherlock's only Medium to long range move  *Hits Twice *It pierces against armored enemies
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses: *People with High Reflexes then Sherlock can doge this move*Misses 50%the time *Falls on the ground in  15 feet

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Sherlocks Sweet Knee of Justice
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 5 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: When Sherlock doesn't have his knives on himself he shouts out SWEET KNEE OF JUSTICE and knees his opponent in the groin.  
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:*Works against Armored Opponents *Stuns opponent For a turn *Hurts mens family jewls really badly
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:*Only does half the attack stat when calculating damage*Move is slow and can be easily avoided by opponents with high speed and reflexes higher then Sherlock's*Doesn't work on women

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: X slash/ Cross slash
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Sherlock does a cross slash on an enemy
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:  *This is another move that hits twice *Stuns enemy for an post  *When using this attack he speeds up by 20% * Can cut through armor that is made out of material like leather
    [b]Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses: *Cant cut through armor made out of metal*Move only uses half of his strengh stat instead of all of them *The move has a big recoil on Sherlock's body

    [b]Ability Lvl 1 Name: Flaming Cross Slash/Flaming X Slash

    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Melee
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:6 Posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: He covers His Kitchen Knives with Cooking oil and uses matches to Light them aflame then while there on fire he does a flaming cross slash on the enemy.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:*Burns and cuts enemy *This can hit logia type users who are weak to flames *Can melt normal metals  like Iron
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:*Doesn't hit logia devil fruit users who are not weak to fire *Can sometimes burn himself *Only can use Twice a Thread
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    Re: Sherlock Fang's Primary skill set Duel Kitchen Knives

    Post by Fisher D. Conrad on Tue Aug 05, 2014 9:09 am

    Alright, kids. I'm going to show you how we do this back in the old country.

    serdaniel wrote:Skill Name: Dual Wielding Kitchen Knives
    Skill Type:Cook
    Skill Information: Most cooks only use their kitchen knives for cooking, few rarely use them for fighting Sherlock uses them expertly in both fighting and cooking. May it be countering a master swordsman with a bigger blade then him to filleting the barrel of a gun off, but one thing can be certain he takes very good care of his knives.

    Elephant in the room here. If you use your knives to stab a bunch of guys, then use them to gut a fish, didn't you just give us all hepatitis?

    "Cook" is not a type. Skill types refer to what your skill is. In this case, it would be knive fighting or some such word.

    Health Inspector wrote:Skill Strengths: *Opponents with no armor or regular clothes *Unarmed opponents * Opponents at close range
    Skill Weaknesses: *Opponents With lvl. 1 med or Heavy armor *Opponents with long ranged weaponry *Zoan type Devil fruit user with thick hides

    Strengths aren't so much strengths as they are obvious observations. Tell us what about these knives makes them good weapons, not what they can hurt. Weakesses are valid, though.

    Cooking with Mods wrote:Ability Lvl 1 Name: Fillet Chop x20
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Cook/Duel Wielding kitchen Knives
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 turns
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:20 very quick slashes and  causes shallow or deep cuts on the enemy
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths: *Good against slow opponents *Good against foot soldiers *Non armored opponents
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses: *Fast Opponents *lvl. 1 heavy or medium armor *Cant hit opponents at long or medium range

    Ability type refers to what your ability is. This seems like melee. Review the code again, because I'm guessing you did this on all of them.

    Why is it good against foot soldiers, specifically? Are foot soldiers too inept to fight back against it? Do your knives poison only foot soldiers? What do you know about these people that I don't?

    You listed people without armor in your skill strengths, so putting it here is redundant. Think of a new one.

    Is it bad if they're faster than you or just fast in general? Explain.

    Armor and range weakness covered in skill weaknesses and ability type. Find some new ones.

    Foot Soldiers wrote:Ability Lvl 1 Name: Double Kitchen Knives Throw
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Cook/Duel Kitchen Knives
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3 Posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Flings two kitchen Knives
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:*Sherlock's only Medium to long range move *Hits Twice *Opponents with low reflex
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses: *People with High Reflex *Misses half the time *Opponents with lvl 1 medium or heavy armor

    Give me some numbers on those ranges. How far until they fall off into the ground?

    Same as before. Lower reflexes than your speed or low in general?

    Same reflex question for weakness part.

    Why does it miss half the time? That sounds like a really bad move if that's the case.

    Armor redundancy already covered (repeat for all of them).

    You could change that cooldown to 2 and I wouldn't notice.

    Fish wrote:Ability Lvl 1 Name: Sherlocks Sweet Knee of Justice
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Duel Kitchen Knives/Cook
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: When Sherlock doesn't have his knives on himself he shouts out SWEET KNEE OF JUSTICE and knees his opponent in the groin.  
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:*Works against Armored Opponents *Stuns opponent For a turn *Very small chance of making the enemy faint
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:*1/4 as strong as all his other skill 1 moves *Move is slow *Close range only

    Armor mention can stay. This is a valid time to bring it up.

    To what extent does it stun them? Can they not do anything for that whole turn? If so, raise the cooldown to at least 5.

    Unless there's a fair way to determine if they faint or not, you'll probably have to switch that for a new strength (more for your sake than anyone else, since no one will faint if given the choice).

    Does that mean it only does a quarter of your strength stat as damage?

    How is it slow? Explain.

    Range would be explained with an accurate type naming. Need a new weakness (probably that it doesn't really work on people with vaginas?).

    Dangly Parts wrote:Ability Lvl 1 Name: X slash/ Cross slash
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Duel Kitchen Knives/Cook
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:4 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Sherlock does a cross slash on an enemy
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths: *Very Fast *Knocks out Foot soldiers/Random mook's without in one hit *Cuts Enemy
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses: *Easy for Stronger opponents to block or parry *Second Weakest move *doesn't cut on opponents with lvl. 1 heavy or medium armor

    How is it very fast? Does it increase your speed stat?

    I figure most attacks will do that to your average NPC, so think of a better strength.

    "Cuts enemy" isn't really necessary when you're talking about knives. Going to need another strength.

    Why is it easy for strong people to do so? If you mean people above your rank, that goes without saying. Going to need an explanation or new weakness.

    Why is it the second weakest? What makes it such?

    Armor explained.

    Cooldown is fine at 3.

    Armored Enemies need the Cape Stun and Beatdown wrote:Ability Lvl 1 Name: Flaming Cross Slash/Flaming X Slash
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Cook/Duel Kitchen Knives
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:6 Posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: He covers His Kitchen Knives with Cooking oil drags them together Lighting them aflame then while there on fire he does a flaming cross slash on the enemy.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:*Burns and cuts enemy *Knocks out foot soldiers in one hit *Hard to block
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:*Doesn't Stun Devil Fruit Users *Close Range only *Only can use Twice a Thread

    I don't really think just rubbing them together would ignite the oil. Fun attack, but it needs a more realistic starter.

    Same thing as before about NPC fighters.

    Why is it hard to block?

    Range covered before.




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    Re: Sherlock Fang's Primary skill set Duel Kitchen Knives

    Post by serdaniel on Tue Aug 05, 2014 11:01 pm

    Fixed it I think
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    Re: Sherlock Fang's Primary skill set Duel Kitchen Knives

    Post by Fisher D. Conrad on Tue Aug 05, 2014 11:23 pm

    serdaniel wrote:Skill Name: Dual Wielding Kitchen Knives
    Skill Type: Duel wielding Kitchen Knife
    Skill Information: Most cooks only use their kitchen knives for cooking, few rarely use them for fighting Sherlock uses them expertly in both fighting and cooking. May it be countering a master swordsman with a bigger blade then him to filleting the barrel of a gun off, but one thing can be certain he takes very good care of his knives as he does not us the knives he fights with to coook
    Skill Strengths: *Sharp they cut through Flesh Like butter *They are easy to conceal *Their easy weapon to Quickly Drawl out
    Skill Weaknesses: *Opponents With lvl. 1 med or Heavy armor *Opponents with long ranged weaponry *Zoan type Devil fruit user with thick hides

    Guess this works now.

    I Guess wrote:Ability Lvl 1 Name: Poison covered Fillet Chop x20
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Melee
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 turns
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:20 very quick slashes and  causes shallow or deep cuts on the enemy
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths: *can cut off the barrels of rifles * has a chance to poison foot soldiers *
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses: *Enemies with high reflexes have a chance doge this move *  

    Why are these knives strong enough to cut through guns? That's metal and hard wood.

    What do you have against foot soldiers and why are they only susceptible to poison? Is it a special poison that only NPCs can be hurt by? How much of a chance?

    How high do their reflexes have to be?

    You're still short strengths and weaknesses.

    Short wrote:Ability Lvl 1 Name: Double Kitchen Knives Throw
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Ranged
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 Posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Flings two kitchen Knives
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:*Sherlock's only Medium to long range move  *Hits Twice *
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses: *People with High Reflex can doge this move*Misses 50%the time *Falls on the ground in 10 to 15 feet

    Still short a strength.

    Still don't know why it misses half the time. This still seems like a bad move to use if it's guaranteed to miss every other time you use it.

    So the range is 15 meters?

    EAT wrote:Ability Lvl 1 Name: Sherlocks Sweet Knee of Justice
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 5 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: When Sherlock doesn't have his knives on himself he shouts out SWEET KNEE OF JUSTICE and knees his opponent in the groin.  
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:*Works against Armored Opponents *Stuns opponent For a turn *Hurts mens family jewls really badly
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:*Only does a quarter of normal stat damage*Move is slow and can be easily avoided by opponents with high speed and reflexes*Doesn't work on women

    How high are those speeds and reflexes to dodge you? More than yours? Same as yours? We need some details.

    To what extent are they stunned?

    Bu wrote:Ability Lvl 1 Name: X slash/ Cross slash
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Sherlock does a cross slash on an enemy
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:  *This is another move that hits twice *Stuns enemy for an post  *When using this attack he speeds up by 20%
    [b]Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses: *Enemies with stronger stats then him can block or parry this move *Move only uses half of his physical stats instead of all of them *This move has a chance to break the Knives

    How much are they stunned? If that's true, you're going to need a bigger cooldown.

    Hard number would be better than a percentage so I don't have to do math.

    Which stats? Can my 40 intelligence negate your attack?

    Which half? You need to be specific.

    What chance does it have? If what conditions are present? Can your opponent just say, "And now they break!" whenever they feel like it?

    CHUD wrote:[b]Ability Lvl 1 Name: Flaming Cross Slash/Flaming X Slash
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Melee
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:6 Posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: He covers His Kitchen Knives with Cooking oil and uses matches to Light them aflame then while there on fire he does a flaming cross slash on the enemy.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:*Burns and cuts enemy *This can hit logia type devil fruit users *Can melt normal metals  like Iron
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:*Doesn't burn logia type devil fruit users *Can sometimes burn himself *Only can use Twice a Thread
    [/b][/b]

    How hot do these knives get if they can melt metal? What are they even made of?

    Why are they able to hit Logia users?

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    Re: Sherlock Fang's Primary skill set Duel Kitchen Knives

    Post by serdaniel on Sun Aug 17, 2014 4:17 pm

    Fixed it again
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    Re: Sherlock Fang's Primary skill set Duel Kitchen Knives

    Post by Fisher D. Conrad on Tue Aug 19, 2014 3:12 am

    You have more strengths than weaknesses on this first one, but that's okay, since two of them are the exact same thing.

    So two knives just cut through any kind of armor? Give me limits.

    Don't give me a percent. Tell me how much he "speeds up" with points. Do the same for what it does to his body. Needs a bigger cooldown.

    Why can this melt metal? What are your knives made out of?

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