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    Moku Moku no Mi

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    Inzuki Love

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    Moku Moku no Mi

    Post by Inzuki Love on Tue Aug 19, 2014 10:58 pm

    Skill Name:Moku Moku no Mi
    Skill Type:Logia
    Skill Information:The user of this fruit is able to generate, manipulate, and become smoke. Like most other Logia fruits, when The user is hit, he can simply use the fruit's power to become smoke, thus absorbing the attack and remaining unharmed. Like some of the other Logia type Devil Fruits, this one allows its user to "fly", by turning his body or the lower part of it into smoke, greatly enhancing his movement and speed.
    Skill Strengths:The main offensive capabilities of the fruit stem from its user's ability to change the density of the smoke produced at will. This allows The user to surround his targets with his intangible smoke.

    The smoke can also be used as a blunt weapon, hitting enemies with great strength. However, it is possible to escape the smoke's hold with a sudden, strong enough expansion of the body (such as Luffy's Gomu Gomu no Fusen).
    Skill Weaknesses:It would seem that when confronted by fire, they will cancel out one another; the only reliable way to injure The user is through the use of Haki or through the standard Devil Fruit weaknesses.



    Ability Lvl 1 Name: :White Out
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Support/Field
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3 posts cooldown
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user shoots clouds of normal smoke from his arms and uses them to engulf his opponent, then makes the smoke dense to trap them inside.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:The user can trap more then one person.
    is almost impossible to break out of.
    When in a smokey area they can choke people with the smoke.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:Cannot be used over water.
    This move takes a lot of stamina from you.
    Other logia types can easily escape

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:White Blow
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:5 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user shoots a cloud of dense smoke from his arms to blast his opponent hard. After striking, he can then trap his opponent as with the White Out attack. There is another variation of this attack where he turns only one arm (except his fist) into smoke and launches the fist at his opponent as a long-range punch.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:It is very hard to dodge.
    -The user has full control so they can move in any direction.
    -  Can move into another skill.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:Drains a lot of energy
    Can't be used over water.
    If hit while using this skill the user will let go of their opponent and have to wait till they can use it again.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:White screen
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Field
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user creates a thick mist that only he can see in. The smoke will be clear after a while but once it is clear you won't be able to think straight.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:Enemies cannot see in fog
    Smoke enters anyone caught in smokes lungs causing breathing problems they also cough a lot
    Confuses people once smoke is clear


    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:Allies can be caught in the smoke
    Smoke only lasts for three posts
    Can't use any other smoke attacks.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:White The user transforms into a spiraling column of smoke to trap his enemies or to grab an airborne target.

    Ability Lvl 1 Type:
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:1 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user transforms into a spiraling column of smoke to trap his enemies or to grab an airborne target.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:Can go as high as user wants
    Smoke will catch target if they fall
    Can be used over water
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:Can't grab logia types
    If hit with fire the column will break
    Can only take the weight of two people.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:White Launcher
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Range/Meele
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user transforms himself into smoke and launches himself at his opponent, then re-solidifies and pins his opponent down.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:The user can use sword to pin target down
    If enough pressure and smoke is is used this can knock out target
    While pinning someone user can  use smoke to pin another person

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:The user has to be at least 20 meters away or closer.
    Can't be used against logia types.
    Is weak against fire.


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    Fisher D. Conrad

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    Re: Moku Moku no Mi

    Post by Fisher D. Conrad on Wed Aug 20, 2014 5:19 am

    Inzuki Love wrote:Skill Name:Moku Moku no Mi
    Skill Type:Logia
    Skill Information:The user of this fruit is able to generate, manipulate, and become smoke. Like most other Logia fruits, when The user is hit, he can simply use the fruit's power to become smoke, thus absorbing the attack and remaining unharmed. Like some of the other Logia type Devil Fruits, this one allows its user to "fly", by turning his body or the lower part of it into smoke, greatly enhancing his movement and speed.
    Skill Strengths:The main offensive capabilities of the fruit stem from its user's ability to change the density of the smoke produced at will. This allows The user to surround his targets with his intangible smoke.

    The smoke can also be used as a blunt weapon, hitting enemies with great strength. However, it is possible to escape the smoke's hold with a sudden, strong enough expansion of the body (such as Luffy's Gomu Gomu no Fusen).

    Need the three and three style from the skills up here. Good start, though.

    Above the Influence wrote:Skill Weaknesses:It would seem that when confronted by fire, they will cancel out one another; the only reliable way to injure The user is through the use of Haki or through the standard Devil Fruit weaknesses.

    Same as above. Could list some other weaknesses, too. There's probably more than just, "Don't like fire."

    Meaning, there better be wrote:Ability Lvl 1 Name: :White Out
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Support/Field
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3 posts cooldown
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user shoots clouds of normal smoke from his arms and uses them to engulf his opponent, then makes the smoke dense to trap them inside.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:The user can trap more then one person.
    is almost impossible to break out of.
    When in a smokey area they can choke people with the smoke.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:Cannot be used over water.
    This move takes a lot of stamina from you.
    Other logia types can easily escape

    This isn't a Field move. This is a Ranged attack. Field moves directly change the environment, like burning the land and setting it on fire. You're attacking people. In accordance, I need a range.

    How many people can it trap?

    When you make a move that's "almost impossible" for anything to happen, it's too powerful.

    How do we do stamina? Does he lose endurance? What's going on here?

    Mern wrote:Ability Lvl 1 Name:White Blow
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:5 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user shoots a cloud of dense smoke from his arms to blast his opponent hard. After striking, he can then trap his opponent as with the White Out attack. There is another variation of this attack where he turns only one arm (except his fist) into smoke and launches the fist at his opponent as a long-range punch.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:It is very hard to dodge.
    -The user has full control so they can move in any direction.
    -  Can move into another skill.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:Drains a lot of energy
    Can't be used over water.
    If hit while using this skill the user will let go of their opponent and have to wait till they can use it again.

    I need a range on this.

    First off, seems about the same as the other, especially since it does the exact same thing. Split it. Say he can combine them, or something.

    How is it hard to dodge?

    How's it drain energy?

    Cheez-It wrote:Ability Lvl 1 Name:White screen
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Field
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user creates a thick mist that only he can see in. The smoke will be clear after a while but once it is clear you won't be able to think straight.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:Enemies cannot see in fog
    Smoke enters anyone caught in smokes lungs causing breathing problems they also cough a lot
    Confuses people once smoke is clear


    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:Allies can be caught in the smoke
    Smoke only lasts for three posts
    Can't use any other smoke attacks.

    The fact you're totally immune to any of the ill effects of this and all your opponents are totally helpless makes this an Overpowered Attack.

    Why are they confused after the smoke clears? Did it poison them? Is this Pokemon? I don't get it.

    Your cooldown needs to be longer than when your skill ends. You can just keep instantly reentering into it every time it lets up.

    ERM wrote:Ability Lvl 1 Name:White The user transforms into a spiraling column of smoke to trap his enemies or to grab an airborne target.

    Ability Lvl 1 Type:
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:1 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user transforms into a spiraling column of smoke to trap his enemies or to grab an airborne target.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:Can go as high as user wants
    Smoke will catch target if they fall
    Can be used over water
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:Can't grab logia types
    If hit with fire the column will break
    Can only take the weight of two people.

    Got some wires crossed up there.

    Minimum cooldown on all attacks is 2.

    There needs to be a limit on your range. You're level 1.[/quote]

    K wrote:Ability Lvl 1 Name:White Launcher
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Range/Meele
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user transforms himself into smoke and launches himself at his opponent, then re-solidifies and pins his opponent down.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:The user can use sword to pin target down
    If enough pressure and smoke is is used this can knock out target
    While pinning someone user can  use smoke to pin another person

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:The user has to be at least 20 meters away or closer.
    Can't be used against logia types.
    Is weak against fire.

    Definitely needs a bigger cooldown.

    How do they use a sword to pin someone? This is sounding like a carbon copy of Smoker now.

    Instant KO also makes this an Overpowered Attack.

    Two hits for free also makes this an Overpowered Attack.

    That range isn't a weakness. That's just a range. And a good one, at that.

    You already listed fire as a weakness to the fruit. Listing it again here is redundant.

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