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One Piece RP is a new non-canon forum RP focused on building a strong active community.

Phoenix D. Jack has been promoted to Administrator, and Ray Ignazia has been promoted to Head Moderator.
We are currently still in a beta like phase, and still working out some kinks like fixing up the tasks and stat system - but those that stay with us will be rewarded with limited edition stuff.

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    Gustav Montague

    Gustav Montague
    Gustav Montague


    Rank 1- Player-

    Lineage : Demon Of Ohara

    Beli Beli : 2002
    Posts : 8
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Affiliation : pirate


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    Post by Gustav Montague Mon Sep 01, 2014 7:40 pm

    Name:
    Gustav Montague
    Epithet:
    The Fancy Pirate
    Age:
    20
    Gender:
    Male
    Race:
    Human
    Sexuality:
    Straight

    Affiliation:
    Pirate
    Occupation:
    Weapon Master
    Appearance:
    Gustav often wears a tight silk pure white business suite with a dark red tie. He his a fairly tall stature that is awkwardly accompanied by an extremely thin body. He often carries with him a long dark blue cane, with a dragon handle that is slightly curved in around the Dragon's neck allowing him to hook onto simply things or pull a person forward. He has a fairly large scar accompanying the right side of his left cheek, and often wears a dark pair of sunglasses.
    Hair Color:
    Dark Blonde/Dirty Blonde
    Skin Tone:
    Pale
    Height:
    6'1"
    Weight:
    164lbs (74kg)

    Personality:
    Gustav is fairly cool and collective when it comes to even the most dangerous, and deadly of situations, sometimes leading to him acting carelessly even in extremely dangerous situations. He holds an overwhelmingly snobbish attitude towards others, and strongly believes in acting in a 'proper' manner towards others (such as holding the door for others, saying please and thank you, etc.). He is often extremely kind and generous towards his friends or even others due to his more noble upbringing, though to some Gustav might come off as somewhat egotistical or even ruthlessly self centered, due to his willingness to put all aside to accomplish his goals and dreams even if it means becoming what he hates most in the world. These stronger emotions can sometimes blind him from his true self, allowing them to hold sway over his actions and choices, turning him into an almost completely different person.
    Likes:
    -Manners
    -Wine
    -Antiques
    Dislikes:
    -Rudeness
    -Beggars
    -Alcohol (excluding wine)
    Motivations:
    -To regain his lost estate and family pride.
    Fears:
    -Becoming a coward
    -Losing what little wealth he has
    -Being unable to get revenge for his family
    Behavior/Habits:
    Gustav tends to have overly polite gestures and attitudes such as saying please and thank you when it isn't necessary or when people aren't expecting it. He is often seen using his fairly large cane to lean against, even though it lacks no purpose due to his legs being completely fine and him not suffering any back injuries. It is fairly common for him to dress in a well mannered fashion, though often refuses to spend money carelessly unless he is in desperate need of new clothes or equipment. Due to a nervous habit he also tends to hide any money he receives in various locations around him barely keeping it on his person.
    History:
    When Gustav was the age of three he was adopted from an orphanage by a wealthy businessman named Joseph Montague, who at the time was looking for a young boy to inherit his estate once he passed on. Once adopted Joseph quickly taught Gustav everything he knew, including how to act 'proper,' and if he failed to meet Joseph's circumstances he was beaten severely. At the age of 15 Gustav inherited Joseph's estate and business assets, but the current business executives noticing their chance to take over quickly jumped on it, and in the time of two years enacted their plan. A group of unknown pirates raided the village his estate was located in, and quickly burned down his estate. Using some quick thinking, and what little sword play he was taught he narrowly escaped death and fled to the sea on a small raft.

    Once he finally set adrift he spent almost half a month at sea barely surviving until he came across a fairly deserted island. Due to what little knowledge he had on surviving he often wandered aimlessly collecting various fruits, making traps to capture small animals, and drinking river water. Three weeks after he stumbled upon the deserted island Gustav was charged by a boar like creature and due to his lack of weapons was forced to flee, eventually leading to him losing the boar, but managing to walk into one of his own snares, sadly leaving him unable to walk on his right leg after he managed to escape the small trap. All day he crawled, and hobbled around trying to find a stick big enough to use a crutch, until he came across a mysterious cane. A beautiful dark blue cane with a dragon handle with the words "wealth, power, ambition" engraved onto the side. It was almost to good to be true, and long past his injury healed he kept the cane.

    After nearly an entire year of spending time on the abandoned island he eventually came across a group of pirates who themselves were lost at sea, and exchange for what little food and water Gustav had gathered they decided to be kind enough to take him to the next town that they visited. Once they finally arrived the pirates quickly did what business they had with the people and left Gustav to accompany them, and leading to him deciding to take up a career as a blacksmith for a short six months where he learned many different skills. One day the man who had hired him became curious about the cane that Gustav seemed so needlessly attached to, and noticed a small crease around the handle of the dragon and tried nudging on it only to find out that it was actually a fairly beautiful steel rapier. The blacksmith offered a fairly large sum of Beli and same with the local swordsmen, but Gustav denied both offers due to a strong connection towards the very cane that helped him survive that island.

    Six long months finally passed and he finally amassed enough money to travel back home to his estate and to regain his past glory only to find out that when he finally arrived there was a new estate rebuilt in almost exact same location that his used to be located at. Curious he asked the locals who exactly lived there only to find out the sad truth, that he was quickly pronounced dead after the incident two years ago, and his business executives quickly took over the company and everything that the Montague's once owned. After numerous failed attempts to reclaim his original position within the company, he quickly tried to bring his case to the world government, but was quickly denied a case due to his lack of proof of the incident taking place. Out of anger towards his past employees and the world government he turned his ambitions towards the sea, convinced that if the world government wouldn't give back his home than he would take it back.


    Last edited by Gustav Montague on Tue Sep 02, 2014 5:23 am; edited 1 time in total
    Storm Runner
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    Lineage : Vanquisher's Valor

    Beli Beli : 32235
    Task Points : 2
    Posts : 507
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Infinite Horizon Pirates
    Affiliation : Pirate


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    Post by Storm Runner Tue Sep 02, 2014 3:13 am

    Personality must be at least 150 words long and Behaviour and habits must be at least 100 words long.
    Gustav Montague
    Gustav Montague


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    Lineage : Demon Of Ohara

    Beli Beli : 2002
    Posts : 8
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Affiliation : pirate


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    Post by Gustav Montague Tue Sep 02, 2014 4:14 am

    Storm Runner wrote:Personality must be at least 150 words long and Behaviour and habits must be at least 100 words long.

    Will do, I originally misread the guide, and I thought it said 150 letters not words, also what happened to the second person's critique? I wanted to touch on a few subjects that he mentioned when I redid my CS.
    Storm Runner
    Storm Runner


    Administrator- Moderator- Rank 1- Beta 3 Tester- Captain- Paramecia Fruit User- Player-

    Lineage : Vanquisher's Valor

    Beli Beli : 32235
    Task Points : 2
    Posts : 507
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Infinite Horizon Pirates
    Affiliation : Pirate


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    Character Name: Storm Runner Fūjin
    Primary Skill: Zūmu-Zūmu no Mi (Zoom-Zoom Fruit)
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    Post by Storm Runner Tue Sep 02, 2014 4:17 am

    He quit from being a moderator so I removed his post as I was over looking this application anyways. If you truly wish to touch on some of his subjects I would be more then willing to post up quotes if what he said. Though not all of what he stated was not actually necessary for your character application.
    Gustav Montague
    Gustav Montague


    Rank 1- Player-

    Lineage : Demon Of Ohara

    Beli Beli : 2002
    Posts : 8
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Affiliation : pirate


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    Post by Gustav Montague Tue Sep 02, 2014 4:35 am

    Well that is slightly strange, and thank you for the offer, but I think I have a pretty good idea of the things I want to touch on.
    Storm Runner
    Storm Runner


    Administrator- Moderator- Rank 1- Beta 3 Tester- Captain- Paramecia Fruit User- Player-

    Lineage : Vanquisher's Valor

    Beli Beli : 32235
    Task Points : 2
    Posts : 507
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Infinite Horizon Pirates
    Affiliation : Pirate


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Storm Runner Fūjin
    Primary Skill: Zūmu-Zūmu no Mi (Zoom-Zoom Fruit)
    Secondary Skill:

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    Post by Storm Runner Tue Sep 02, 2014 10:38 am

    Please bump when you are ready then
    Gustav Montague
    Gustav Montague


    Rank 1- Player-

    Lineage : Demon Of Ohara

    Beli Beli : 2002
    Posts : 8
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Affiliation : pirate


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    Post by Gustav Montague Tue Sep 02, 2014 4:58 pm

    Ok well I'm pretty much finished, so bump I guess.
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    Administrator- Moderator- Rank 1- Beta 3 Tester- Captain- Paramecia Fruit User- Player-

    Lineage : Vanquisher's Valor

    Beli Beli : 32235
    Task Points : 2
    Posts : 507
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Infinite Horizon Pirates
    Affiliation : Pirate


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Storm Runner Fūjin
    Primary Skill: Zūmu-Zūmu no Mi (Zoom-Zoom Fruit)
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    Post by Storm Runner Tue Sep 02, 2014 7:26 pm

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