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    Blue Rose Style

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    Atsui Komone

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    Character Name: Atsui Komone
    Primary Skill: Blue Rose Karate
    Secondary Skill: Blue Rose Style

    Blue Rose Style

    Post by Atsui Komone on Thu Nov 06, 2014 3:45 am

    Skill Name: Blue Rose Style
    Skill Type: Double Gun Style (Mid Range)
    Skill Information: This is the second part of Atsui's Technic. She is able to use two guns at the same time. Two pistols she can use in mid range and never hiding from their victim. She is so good with this type of guns, she can even reload with no extra hands.
    Skill Strengths:
    -Quick Hands: She is able to reload with no extra hands. She has two options. To quickly reload with both guns at the same time. Or reload only one gun while she is shooting the other one.
    -Enemies need 15 more reflex than Atsui's speed.
    -Neutral: Strong against earth and light
    Skill Weaknesses:
    -They can still use haki to dodge them easily.
    -Neutral: Weak against fire and darkness
    -Ammo limits the user's abilities. Ammo and guns depend in her weapons.

    Tier 1:
    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Fire Eye
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Defensive (Mid Range 10-20 meters)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts. Duration 1 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user will be able to shoot her pistol to exactly land in any moving object to divert it. It can even hit other bullets.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -It can defend herself and any other party member.
    -The user gains 5 finesse.
    -The user can still reload while she is blocking an attack of many. She can be blocking any amount of attacks if she has ammo.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -The utility of this ability depends on the amount of attacks the enemy uses. The maximum she can block is the same amount of ammo she has.
    -It can only defend them from launched attacks. Such as bullets, knifes, or maybe even a fire ball for example. (In the case of an elemental attack such as a fire ball, it won't divert it, it will explode and stop it.)
    -The user will lose ammo for each attack blocked. One bullet for each shoot/attack deflected.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Kick and Steal
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee (Close Range 0-10 meters)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user will first give a kick towards the enemies feet. While the target is falling, the user will grab anything they can from their pocket usually trying to get ammo.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -The user gets 30 ammo.
    -The enemy loses 30 ammo.
    -The enemy will end up in the ground. This occurs unless the target has 10 more endurance than her strength.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -The enemy needs a a gun or fire weapon to be able to steal the ammo.
    -It's a bad range for her other abilities.
    -The user will end up too close to the enemy.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Switch
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Offensive (Mid Range 10-20 meters)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user can calculate the speed and the trajectory of her bullet. Then she shoots both guns to make her bullets crash in some point and change direction to another target.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -Can hit two targets.
    -It almost impossible to evade since nobody (except for her) knows where the bullet is going to land. This can be evaded with haki though. If the target has 15 more reflext then the user's finesse, they can also evade it.
    -The enemy loses 10 reflex and speed during the attack since they don't know where is the bullet going.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -She needs her two guns and at least 1 bullet each.
    -Minus 10 Strength during the attack.
    -It can't attack with more than one bullet each target and can only attack 2 targets.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Bounce
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Offensive (Mid Range 10-20 meters)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user calculates the direction of her future shot and is able to shoot her bullet, make it bounce in something, and change direction.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -It almost impossible to evade since nobody (except for her) knows where the bullet is going to land. This can be evaded with haki though. If the target has 15 more reflext then the user's finesse, they can also evade it.
    -The enemy loses 10 reflex and speed during the attack since they don't know where is the bullet going.
    -Only needs one gun and bullet.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -Minus 10 strength during the attack.
    -The user needs something solid to bounce. Like a wooden wall or solid ground. Not even mud can work.
    -Can only attack one enemy.


    Last edited by Atsui Komone on Fri Nov 07, 2014 3:50 pm; edited 3 times in total
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    Unitama

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    Re: Blue Rose Style

    Post by Unitama on Thu Nov 06, 2014 1:58 pm

    This is a pretty solid skill set. It only needs to be a little more specific in some areas so rp'ing will become easier. Please pay attention to all the red comments from me and bump when it's ready to get checked again. Smile

    Atsui Komone wrote:Skill Name: Blue Rose Style
    Skill Type: Double Gun Style (Mid Range)
    Skill Information: This is the second part of Atsui's Technic. She is able to use two guns at the same time. Two pistols she can use in mid range and never hiding from their victim. She is so good with this type of guns, she can even reload with no extra hands.
    Skill Strengths:
    -Quick Hands: She is able to reload with no extra hands. She has two options. To quickly reload with both guns at the same time. Or reload only one gun while she is shooting the other one.
    -She can shoot as fast as a turret. -Please tell how much higher the reflex stat of the opponent must be. Higher than the speed stat of Atsui. For example, people with 10+ reflex over Atsui's speed are able to dodge some of those bullets but not all.
    -Neutral: Strong against earth and light
    Skill Weaknesses:
    -No long range attacks at all. -Mid-range skills can still have long-ranged attacks. See skill information for more.
    -Neutral: Weak against fire and darkness
    -Ammo limits the user's abilities. -How many ammo can the guns hold? And how many can Atsui hold?

    Tier 1:
    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Fire Eye
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Defensive (Mid Range 10-20 meters)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts. Duration 1 post
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user will be able to shoot her pistol to exactly land in any moving object to divert it. It can even hit other bullets.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -It can defend herself and any other party member.
    -The user gains 5 proficiency. -This is not a stat we currently use. Please change it to a stat we are currently using(look at the stat info for more information). And please write how long this buff will last.
    -The user can still reload while she is blocking an attack of many. -how many?
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -The utility of this ability depends on the amount of attacks the enemy uses. -What is the max of incoming attacks she can block with this skill?
    -It can only defend them from launched attacks. Such as bullets, knifes, or maybe even a fire ball for example. (In the case of an elemental attack such as a fire ball, it won't divert it, it will explode and stop it.)
    -The user will lose ammo for each attack blocked. -How many ammo will be lost?

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Kick and Steal
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee -close-range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user will first give a kick towards the enemies feet. While the target is falling, the user will grab anything they can from their pocket usually trying to get ammo.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -The user gets 30 ammo.
    -The enemy loses 30 ammo.
    -The enemy will end up in the ground. -Some people with high endurance might be able to resist it. Tell me how much higher endurance must be over Satsui's strenght.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -The enemy needs a a gun or fire weapon to be able to steal the ammo.
    -It's a bad range for her other abilities.
    -The user will end up too close to the enemy.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Switch
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Offensive (Mid Range 10-20 meters)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user can calculate the speed and the trajectory of her bullet. Then she shoots both guns to make her bullets crash in some point and change direction to another target.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -Can attack two. -two enemies?
    -It almost impossible to evade since nobody (except for her) knows where the bullet is going to land. This can be evaded with haki though. -And high reflexes. Tell me how high the reflex stat must be.
    -The enemy loses 10 reflex and speed. -Tell me how and when the enemy will lose those and how long it will last.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -She needs her two guns and at least 1 bullet each.
    -Minus 10 proficiency. -This is not a stat we currently use. Please change it to a stat we are currently using(look at the stat info for more information). And how long will this debuff last?
    -It can't attack with more than one bullet each target and can only attack 2 targets.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Bounce
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Offensive (Mid Range 10-20 meters)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: Used once per post.
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user calculates the direction of her future shot and is able to shoot her bullet, make it bounce in something, and change direction.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -It almost impossible to evade since nobody (except for her) knows where the bullet is going to land. This can be evaded with haki though. -And high reflexes. Tell me how high the reflex stat must be.
    -The enemy loses 10 reflex and speed. -Tell me how and when the enemy will lose those and how long it will last.
    -Can only attack one. -one enemy? And tell me how this is a strenght.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -Minus 10 proficiency. -This is not a stat we currently use. Please change it to a stat we are currently using(look at the stat info for more information). And how long will this debuff last?
    -Only attacks 1. -one enemy?
    -The user needs something solid to bounce. -You can give examples to make it more clear.


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    Atsui Komone

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    Character Name: Atsui Komone
    Primary Skill: Blue Rose Karate
    Secondary Skill: Blue Rose Style

    Re: Blue Rose Style

    Post by Atsui Komone on Fri Nov 07, 2014 3:46 am

    I think it's done, and thanks
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    Re: Blue Rose Style

    Post by Unitama on Fri Nov 07, 2014 11:29 am

    Yea, almost done. The only thing still is that you need to change your cooldown for "bounce" to 4 posts. If that's done, I'll accept.


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    Atsui Komone

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    Character Name: Atsui Komone
    Primary Skill: Blue Rose Karate
    Secondary Skill: Blue Rose Style

    Re: Blue Rose Style

    Post by Atsui Komone on Fri Nov 07, 2014 3:50 pm

    Done i guess, and thanks again
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    Primary Skill: Rokushiki
    Secondary Skill: Ama Ama no mi

    Re: Blue Rose Style

    Post by Unitama on Sun Nov 09, 2014 7:16 pm

    I approve this. But please keep in mind that I may ask you to change some things later. The system is pretty new on this site. And sorry that it took so long. Computer problems.


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