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    Ember-Ember fruit (Tyler Eld's Primary Skill)

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    Tymonster01

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    Ember-Ember fruit (Tyler Eld's Primary Skill)

    Post by Tymonster01 on Sat Nov 15, 2014 3:43 am

    Skill Name:Ember-Ember Fruit
    Skill Type:Logia
    Skill Information:The Ember fruit allows the user to turn into embers and control the embers at will. The user can also move his body and any thing the user has on him through the embers. The fruit has very small flame shapes on it and is a dark red color.
    Skill Strengths:

    • air(to stoke the flames)
    • Resistant to fire
    • good area of effect


    Skill Weaknesses:

    • water(puts embers out)
    • sea prism stone
    • Haki


    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ember-Ember spread
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Melee, field, Mid Range(10-25 meters)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:User spreads embers from his body through out the field and moves his body through the embers to get to different vantage points and uses a sword to hit the opponent this in turn confuses the enemy because he has to spend some time to find out where the user will strike from.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

    • confuses enemy(by wondering where user went)
    • Goes from range to melee quickly
    • Keeps user moving till he is hit or hits something

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    • cannot stop moving through embers till is hit or hits something
    • field moves against user can easily hit him
    • Embers can be put out not allowing user to move to said embers


    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ember-Ember punch
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:melee,mid range(10-25 meters)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:User throws embers made from his body towards enemy and then quickly moves to each ember in a straight line then punches enemy
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

    • good against melee enemies(by moving quickly in a straight line making it hard to hit user)
    • range enemies have hard time hitting user
    • User can quickly dodge enemies atacks

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    • Needs to start from at least 10 meters away from enemy to use
    • bad against range enemies
    • fast enemies(speed exceeds 20 points over user's speed)


    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ember-Ember slash
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:melee, short range(0-5 meters)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:user spreads two embers beside the opponent and quickly travels between the two embers slashing at the enemy using a sword.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

    • quickly can dodge at the start of using the move
    • can burn the enemy
    • range attacks have hard time hitting user while using this move

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    • when move is used for a while it become significantly easier to hit user(user's attack slows down)
    • melee attacks can hit user easier then range
    • enemy can put embers out if user has not started transferring body between two embers


    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ember-Ember fiery sword
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:melee, short range(0-5 meters)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:user moves embers around blade making blade heat up and swing at the opponent doing some fire damage
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

    • If clashes with another metal weapon the opposing weapon will make weapon heat up making it nearly impossible to hold
    • Does quick damage
    • good against melee

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    • range
    • If move exceeds 3 posts sword melts
    • cannot use on sword more than 5 times every 24 hours or else sword melts


    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ember-Ember Transfer
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:field,long range(10-40 meters)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:5 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:User can create long lasting embers in shape of a feather allowing user to move to said embers if embers still exist and have not been extinguished.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

    • quick mobility
    • quickly leave area
    • allows user to escape sticky situations fast

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    • embers can be put out or put them selves out after a while
    • if ember is put out and user tries to travel to said ember user has difficulties moving body
    • Embers have to be on the same island as user or on a ship very close to the island


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    Re: Ember-Ember fruit (Tyler Eld's Primary Skill)

    Post by Storm Runner on Sat Nov 15, 2014 4:05 am

    I got this, review in progress

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    Re: Ember-Ember fruit (Tyler Eld's Primary Skill)

    Post by Storm Runner on Sun Nov 16, 2014 2:14 am

    Tymonster01 wrote:Skill Name:Ember-Ember Fruit
    Skill Type:Logia
    Skill Information:The Ember fruit allows the user to turn into embers and control the embers at will. The user can also move his body and any thing the user has on him through the embers. The fruit has very small flame shapes on it and is a dark red color.
    Skill Strengths:air(to stoke the flames), ice, invulnerable to fire, good area of effect -sorry but you can't be invulnerable to fire mainly because even though you are made of embers you can still light embers on fire, but you can have a resistance to fire. how are you stronger against ice after all surely if an ember touched a block of ice it would put out the ember so would it work like a double edged sword? Also please bullet point these
    Skill Weaknesses:water, earth, magma, sea prism stone -please don't forget to include haki, how are you weaker against water, earth and magma? Also please bullet point these.



    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ember-Ember spread
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Melee, field, Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:User spreads embers from his body through out the field and moves his body through the embers to get to different vantage points and uses a sword to hit the opponent. -can I have some more info please the info here is a little vague.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:confuses enemy(by wondering where user went), Goes from range to melee quickly, Keeps user moving till he is hit or hits something -how does it confuse the enemy? You could state that in your description. Also you can have a skill that keeps you moving until you hit something, you need to have a range and please bullet point these.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:cannot stop moving through embers till is hit or hits something, field moves against user can easily hit him, Embers can be put out not allowing user to move to said embers -well the range will also effect your can't stop moving weakness so remember to fix that so it works with the range, but what do you mean he can't use the embers if they are put out? Also please bullet point these.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ember-Ember punch
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:melee
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:User move embers in a line in front of user quickly moving through the embers to the enemy punching the enemy -can I have some more info please the info here is a little vague.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:good against melee enemies, range enemies have hard time hitting user, User can quickly dodge enemies attacks -how is it good against melee fighters? Also please bullet point these.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:Needs to start from a decent distance to use, bad against range enemies ,fast enemies -what's the distance needed and how fast does the enemy need to be to dodge it (think stat wise)? Also please bullet point these.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ember-Ember slash
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:melee
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:user spreads two embers beside the opponent and quickly travels between the two embers slashing at the enemy using a sword.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:quickly can dodge at the start of using the move, can cause severe damage to enemy quickly, range attacks have hard time hitting user while using this move -severe how? does it burn the target?.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:when move is used for a while it become significantly easier to hit user, melee attacks can hit user easier then range, enemy can put embers out if user has not started transferring body between two embers -how does it make him easier to hit? please bullet point.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ember-Ember fiery sword
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:melee
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:user moves embers around blade making blade heat up and swing at the opponent doing some fire damage
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:If clashes with another metal weapon the opposing weapon will make weapon heat up making it nearly impossible to hold, Does quick damage, good against melee -please bullet point
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:range, If move exceeds 3 posts sword melts, cannot use on sword more than 5 times every 24 hours or else sword melts -please bullet point

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Ember-Ember Transfer
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:field,range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:5 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:User can create long lasting embers in shape of a feather allowing user to move to said embers if embers still exist and have not been extinguished.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:quick mobility, quickly leave area, allows user to escape sticky situations fast -please bullet point
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:embers can be put out or put them selves out after a while, if ember is put out and user tries to travel to said ember user has difficulties moving body, Embers have to be on the same island as user or on a ship very close to the island -please bullet point

    okay as for your abilities please edit your type to include the range of all your abilities as shown in this example and according to the sites pre-set range classification Close range 0-10 meters. Mid range, 15-25 and long range 30-40.

    Example:
    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Gum Gum Pistol
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee mid/close ranged (0 - 20 metres)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2

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    Re: Ember-Ember fruit (Tyler Eld's Primary Skill)

    Post by Tymonster01 on Sun Nov 16, 2014 2:58 am

    I believe I fixed everything if there are any other issues let me know and I will work on it right away
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    Re: Ember-Ember fruit (Tyler Eld's Primary Skill)

    Post by Storm Runner on Sun Nov 16, 2014 5:05 am

    opYou did not fix your abilities ranges please edit your type to include the range of all your abilities as shown in this example and according to the sites pre-set range classification Close range 0-10 meters. Mid range, 15-25 and long range 30-40.

    Example:
    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Gum Gum Pistol
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee mid/close ranged (0 - 20 metres)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2

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    Re: Ember-Ember fruit (Tyler Eld's Primary Skill)

    Post by Tymonster01 on Sun Nov 16, 2014 6:26 am

    sorry thought I got everything the first time I fixed it but should be good now
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    Re: Ember-Ember fruit (Tyler Eld's Primary Skill)

    Post by Storm Runner on Tue Nov 18, 2014 9:24 pm

    once again please use the pre-set range classification Close range 0-10 meters. Mid range, 15-25 and long range 30-40.

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    Re: Ember-Ember fruit (Tyler Eld's Primary Skill)

    Post by Tymonster01 on Fri Nov 21, 2014 2:29 am

    Sorry it took me so long to try and fix it but should be good now if any other issues let me know
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    Re: Ember-Ember fruit (Tyler Eld's Primary Skill)

    Post by Unitama on Mon Nov 24, 2014 3:42 pm

    I am sorry but the range is still an issue. Close range can’t be 0-30 meters in range. Close range is 0-10 meters in range. So fix that issue or should I fix it for you?


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    Re: Ember-Ember fruit (Tyler Eld's Primary Skill)

    Post by Tymonster01 on Mon Nov 24, 2014 10:40 pm

    Does that work?
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    Re: Ember-Ember fruit (Tyler Eld's Primary Skill)

    Post by Unitama on Wed Nov 26, 2014 2:34 pm

    Approved for now. I first want to see this in combat before I make my final call So I can still unlock it and ask you to change a few things. But if I do that now, it will take too long and I just want to make you able to rp to the fullest.


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