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    Skill resgistration application

    Post by shadowspark on Tue Nov 18, 2014 11:54 pm

    Skill Name:[/b] Ink-ink no mi

    Skill Type: Paramecia/mid-range

    Skill Information: The ink ink no mi materializes anything that the user draws and gives it its original properties and have the endurance of the user .Example user draws ink fire, it can then  be as hot as fire, A giant ink wall will be as strong as a normal giant wall (drawings have the endurance of the user). The user is able to turn any part of his body into the shape of a colonial times ink pen which is as strong as steel(part of the body that are in pen form are whats used to draw and fight but can brake when hit with above level haki).User must illustrate his creations in the air and no where else. The user may revert up to his body into ink form in which he cant physically touch objects until hes out of it.

    Skill Strengths:
    1)The user may revert up to his body into ink form in which he cant physically touch
    objects until hes out of the form.


    2) user can convert part of his body into pens in order to use his ability(ex:his finger,all of his finger, his arm, his legs).

    3) User can draw anything that comes to mind and materialize it.
    4) user is able to combat sword users with the pen tip.


    5)Drawings have the phsical properties of their respective creation.(ex:a dog made of either flesh, water is wet etc)

    Skill Weaknesses:
    1)drawings are susceptible to there originals and seawater and haki(ex: ink-fireball is weak against water, seasalt, and haki).

    2)drawing exist until they are destroyed with sufficient force,natural weakness,sea prism or sea salt on user , or the user is knocked out, except for when sleeping or disappear after 5p.

    3) If user is excessively injured drawings will begin to droop and lose power and form.

    4)user can only have 5 things in existence at a time



    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Stylo

    Ability Lvl 1 Type: close-range/melee

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2p

    Ability Lvl 1 Description:User turns a desired part of their body into a pen and is now able to draw on the air.Being as this summons the pen it can also be used for melee attacks against swords and other close range weapons.In order to draw user says the desired item while imagining it and then draws a similar shape, user is able to maintain then body part as long as needed but must wait 2p in order to summon it again to the same part after release.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    1) user can now draw freely in the air.

    2) user can fight against melee attacks.

    3) Size of the tip of the pen varies depending on the body part (fingers have smaller tips than the whole hand would).

    4)user can draw things simultaneously

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    1) user can only turn 2 part of his body into pens at a time.

    2) user cannot draw with the while pen is engaged by another person.

    3) pen cannot draw on or touch sea stone(user draw a key to unlock sea prism cuffs).



    Ability Lvl 1 Name: ink

    Ability Lvl 1 Type:close-range

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3p

    Ability Lvl 1 Description:For evasion and defense user is able to revert his physical body into liquid ink that holds the form of the replaced body part for 1p.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    1)User can evade incoming attacks

    2) User doesnt take damage when ink is hit

    3)user can travel as a puddle of ink with normal mobility.

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    1)using this technique counts as 3 drawings,user cannot draw while in this state but may summon a pen.

    2) Takes alittle time to return the converted body part to normal.

    3)If user is severely injured he cannot revert that region of the body into ink(if chest is badly slashed he cant convert it, if stomach is badly slashed he cant convert it)



    Ability Lvl 1 Name: tenshou

    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Mid-range

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2p

    Ability Lvl 1 Description:From the tip of the pen user is able to release a solidified slash of ink thats as hard as steel towards the opponent. Similar to Ichigo's (from Bleach Manga) getsuga tenshou only in shape it can only be stopped by a superior force or above level haki.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    1) Mid-distance slash of power

    2) Can be focused into a beam but holds the same properties as before of steel(would feel like a beam of steel or a column of steel is sent at you).

    3)Can vary in size

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    1) is considered to be 2 drawings.

    2) Cant be controlled after released.

    3) A new pen must be summoned after the use of this technique.



    Ability Lvl 1 Name:erase

    Ability Lvl 1 Type:close-range

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:4p

    Ability Lvl 1 Description:When the user touches a drawing that already exist with either his body or more ink he can cause reform it while its in existence.(ex: an ink dog recieves damage, user is able to touch it to fix it, instead of having to draw something else.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    1)User can heal his drawings.

    2)user can add to his drawings if necessary( ink man gets an in sword).

    3) can remove or erase drawings

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    1) He cannot use this technique on himself.

    2) he cant save a drawing thats beyond repair(ink man without a head,ink fireball thats been put out, ink pen damaged by haki)

    3)Can only fix a drawing once in its current existence.



    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Cho

    Ability Lvl 1 Type:close-range/hand to hand combat

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2p

    Ability Lvl 1 Description:Similar to armament haki user wraps  red ink around a desired part of the body for attack. The ink is as strong as the users endurance and deals the equivalent damage. endurance boosted by (5) strength boosted by (5)/ finesse drops by (5) reflex drops by (5)

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    1) user is able to fight as if every attack is there full power( as if they were using all the strength in their body in one arm)

    2)stays wrapped until user releases it or its destroyed( enemy must have superior attack power than the users endurance by 5/ (35 and above)  in order to brake.

    3) When in full body it can be used as a protective shield

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    1) is considered 2 drawings if only one body part is used.

    2) is considered 5 drawings if the whole body is used.

    3)is not stronger than haki when in a head on collision.

    4) cannot brake a same level haki defense.

    5)Body part being used cant turn into a pen to draw



    Last edited by Unitama on Thu Nov 20, 2014 12:14 pm; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : Overview,corrections,)
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    Re: Skill resgistration application

    Post by Unitama on Wed Nov 19, 2014 8:57 pm

    shadowspark wrote:Skill Name:[/b] Ink-ink no mi

    Skill Type: Paramecia/mid-range

    Skill Information: The ink ink no mi materializes anything that the user draws and gives it its original properties or solidifies it to be as hard as steel.Example user draws fire, it can then either be as hot as fire or as strong as steel but not both.The user is able to turn any part of his body into the shape of a colonial times ink pen which is as strong as steel(part of the body that are in pen form are whats used to draw and fight but can brake when hit with above level haki).User must illustrate his creations in the air and no where else. The user may revert up to his body into ink form in which he cant physically touch objects until hes out of it
    - I say, make it one or the other. Or everything he draws can become like it suppose to happen or they always become solid.
    Also, what are all the stats of the drawing. For example, a drawn wall. Is it just as strong as a normal wall or weaker(what I assume since it will be overpowered otherwise)

    Skill Strengths:
    1)The user may revert up to his body into ink form in which he cant physically touch
    objects until hes out of the form.


    2) user can convert part of his body into pens in order to use his ability(ex:his finger,all of his finger, his arm, his legs).

    3) User can draw anything that comes to mind and materialize it. 3) user is able to combat sword users with the pen tip. -make this two strengths.

    4)Drawings have the phsical properties of their respective creation, or are made of steel(ex:a dog made of either flesh,or steel, water is either wet or as strong as steel) -change this strength since the steel thing is under debate.

    Skill Weaknesses:
    1)user must write on air. -not a real weakness. Air is everywhere. Please change it.

    2)drawings are susceptible to there originals and seawater and haki(ex: ink-fireball is weak against water, seasalt, and haki).

    3)drawing exist until they are destroyed with sufficient force,natural weakness,sea prism or sea salt on user , or the user is knocked out, except for when sleeping. -maybe add a duration at the drawings and a cooldown for in between drawings.

    4) If user is excessively injured drawings will begin to droop and lose power and form.

    5)user can only have 10 things in existence at a time -change this to 5



    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Stylo

    Ability Lvl 1 Type: close-range/melee

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2p

    Ability Lvl 1 Description:User turns a desired part of their body into a pen and is now able to draw on the air.Being as this summons the pen it can also be used for melee attacks against swords and other close range weapons.In order to draw user says the desired item while imagining it and then draws a similar shape. -does this have a duration or is it permanent? And when does the cooldown kick in.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    1) user can now draw freely in the air.

    2) user can fight against melee attacks.

    3) Size of the tip of the pen varies depending on the body part (fingers have smaller tips than the whole hand would).

    4)user can draw things simultaneously

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    1) user can only turn 2 part of his body into pens at a time.

    2) user cannot draw with the while pen is engaged by another person.

    3) pen cannot draw on or touch sea stone(user draw a key to unlock sea prism cuffs).



    Ability Lvl 1 Name: ink

    Ability Lvl 1 Type:close-range

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3p

    Ability Lvl 1 Description:For evasion and defense user is able to revert his physical body into liquid ink that holds the form of the replaced body part.-add a duration.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    1)User can evade incoming attacks

    2) User doesnt take damage when ink is hit

    3)user can travel as a puddle of ink with normal mobility.

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    1)using this technique counts as 5 drawings.-make this less drawings or change this weakness. Maybe if he is in ink state, he can't draw or have pan limps?

    2) Takes alittle time to return the converted body part to normal.

    3)If user is severely injured he cannot revert that region of the body into ink(if chest is badly slashed he cant convert it, if stomach is badly slashed he cant convert it)



    Ability Lvl 1 Name: tenshou

    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Long-range-mid-range suits it better.

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2p

    Ability Lvl 1 Description:From the tip of the pen user is able to release a solidified slash of ink thats as hard as steel towards the opponent. Similar to Ichigo's (from Bleach Manga) getsuga tenshou only in shape it can only be stopped by a superior force or above level haki.-how strong is that force (relate it to stats) and haki(which level?) And which kind of haki?

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    1) Long distance slash of power -mid distance.

    2) Can be focused into a beam but holds the same properties as before of steel(would feel like a beam of steel or a column of steel is sent at you).

    3)Can vary in size

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    1) is considered to be 5 drawings. -Changr this weakness since the drawing system is changed a bit.

    2) Cant be controlled after released.

    3) A new pen must be summoned after the use of this technique.



    Ability Lvl 1 Name:erase

    Ability Lvl 1 Type:close-range

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:4p

    Ability Lvl 1 Description:When the user touches a drawing that already exist with either his body or more ink he can cause reform it while its in existence.(ex: an ink dog recieves damage, user is able to touch it to fix it, instead of having to draw something else.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    1)User can heal his drawings.

    2)user can add to his drawings if necessary( ink man gets an in sword).

    3) can remove or erase drawings

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    1) He cannot use this technique on himself.

    2) he cant save a drawing thats beyond repair(ink man without a head,ink fireball thats been put out, ink pen damaged by haki)

    3)Can only fix a drawing once in its current existence.



    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Cho

    Ability Lvl 1 Type:close-range/hand to hand combat

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2p

    Ability Lvl 1 Description:Similar to armament haki user wraps  red ink around a desired part of the body for attack. The ink is as strong as the users endurance and deals the equivalent damage.(however strong the users full body is thats how strong the melee attack is.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    1) user is able to fight as if every attack is there full power( as if they were using all the strength in their body in one arm)-how big is the strenght and endurance boost? Also, every boost needs a debuff with the same numbers. So does his speed and reflex drop? Or his finesse?

    2)stays wrapped until user releases it or its destroyed.-how many strength needs an attack to break it?

    3) When in full body it can be used as a protective shield

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    1) is considered 5 drawings if only one body part is used. -change it

    2) is considered 10 drawings if the whole body is used. -change it

    3)is not stronger than haki when in a head on collision.

    4) cannot brake a same level haki defense.

    5)Body part being used cant turn into a pen to draw



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    Re: Skill resgistration application

    Post by shadowspark on Wed Nov 19, 2014 9:05 pm

    ok disregard the last pm i see youv made the suggestions here thank you and il make variations now


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    Re: Skill resgistration application

    Post by Unitama on Wed Nov 19, 2014 11:56 pm

    shadowspark wrote:Skill Name:[/b] Ink-ink no mi

    Skill Type: Paramecia/mid-range

    Skill Information: The ink ink no mi materializes anything that the user draws and gives it its original properties and have the endurance of the user .Example user draws ink fire, it can then  be as hot as fire, A giant ink wall will be as strong as a normal giant wall (drawings have the endurance of the user). The user is able to turn any part of his body into the shape of a colonial times ink pen which is as strong as steel(part of the body that are in pen form are whats used to draw and fight but can brake when hit with above level haki).User must illustrate his creations in the air and no where else. The user may revert up to his body into ink form in which he cant physically touch objects until hes out of it.

    Skill Strengths:
    1)The user may revert up to his body into ink form in which he cant physically touch
    objects until hes out of the form.


    2) user can convert part of his body into pens in order to use his ability(ex:his finger,all of his finger, his arm, his legs).

    3) User can draw anything that comes to mind and materialize it.
    4) user is able to combat sword users with the pen tip.


    5)Drawings have the phsical properties of their respective creation, or are made of steel(ex:a dog made of either flesh,or steel, water is either wet or as strong as steel)

    Skill Weaknesses:
    1)drawings are susceptible to there originals and seawater and haki(ex: ink-fireball is weak against water, seasalt, and haki).

    2)drawing exist until they are destroyed with sufficient force,natural weakness,sea prism or sea salt on user , or the user is knocked out, except for when sleeping or disappear after 5p. - how much strength does the attack need over the user's endurance before he could destroy a drawing?

    3) If user is excessively injured drawings will begin to droop and lose power and form.

    4)user can only have 5 things in existence at a time



    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Stylo

    Ability Lvl 1 Type: close-range/melee

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2p

    Ability Lvl 1 Description:User turns a desired part of their body into a pen and is now able to draw on the air.Being as this summons the pen it can also be used for melee attacks against swords and other close range weapons.In order to draw user says the desired item while imagining it and then draws a similar shape, user is able to maintain then body part as long as needed but must wait 2p in order to summon it again to the same part after release.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    1) user can now draw freely in the air.

    2) user can fight against melee attacks.

    3) Size of the tip of the pen varies depending on the body part (fingers have smaller tips than the whole hand would).

    4)user can draw things simultaneously

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    1) user can only turn 2 part of his body into pens at a time.

    2) user cannot draw with the while pen is engaged by another person.

    3) pen cannot draw on or touch sea stone(user draw a key to unlock sea prism cuffs).



    Ability Lvl 1 Name: ink

    Ability Lvl 1 Type:close-range

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3p

    Ability Lvl 1 Description:For evasion and defense user is able to revert his physical body into liquid ink that holds the form of the replaced body part for 1p.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    1)User can evade incoming attacks

    2) User doesnt take damage when ink is hit

    3)user can travel as a puddle of ink with normal mobility.

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    1)using this technique counts as 3 drawings,user cannot draw while in this state but may summon a pen.

    2) Takes alittle time to return the converted body part to normal.

    3)If user is severely injured he cannot revert that region of the body into ink(if chest is badly slashed he cant convert it, if stomach is badly slashed he cant convert it)



    Ability Lvl 1 Name: tenshou

    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Mid-range

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2p

    Ability Lvl 1 Description:From the tip of the pen user is able to release a solidified slash of ink thats as hard as steel towards the opponent. Similar to Ichigo's (from Bleach Manga) getsuga tenshou only in shape it can only be stopped by a superior force or above level haki.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    1) Long distance slash of power -please update to mid distance

    2) Can be focused into a beam but holds the same properties as before of steel(would feel like a beam of steel or a column of steel is sent at you).

    3)Can vary in size

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    1) is considered to be 2 drawings.

    2) Cant be controlled after released.

    3) A new pen must be summoned after the use of this technique.



    Ability Lvl 1 Name:erase

    Ability Lvl 1 Type:close-range

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:4p

    Ability Lvl 1 Description:When the user touches a drawing that already exist with either his body or more ink he can cause reform it while its in existence.(ex: an ink dog recieves damage, user is able to touch it to fix it, instead of having to draw something else.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    1)User can heal his drawings.

    2)user can add to his drawings if necessary( ink man gets an in sword).

    3) can remove or erase drawings

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    1) He cannot use this technique on himself.

    2) he cant save a drawing thats beyond repair(ink man without a head,ink fireball thats been put out, ink pen damaged by haki)

    3)Can only fix a drawing once in its current existence.



    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Cho

    Ability Lvl 1 Type:close-range/hand to hand combat

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2p

    Ability Lvl 1 Description:Similar to armament haki user wraps  red ink around a desired part of the body for attack. The ink is as strong as the users endurance and deals the equivalent damage.(the user endurance is the boost added to strength thats how strong the melee attack is, while reflex and finesse decrease by the same amount raised , example: strength 20+15 endurance=35 attack strength and 35 point drop of both finesse and overall reflex ).-please be more clear with the numbers and debuff then to around 5-15 since this is only rank one. And add the buffs to the strengths and debuffs to the weaknesses and remove them from here. For example: endurance is boosted with 10 and strength with 5. Speed is dropped by 10 and finesse with 5.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    1) user is able to fight as if every attack is there full power( as if they were using all the strength in their body in one arm)

    2)stays wrapped until user releases it or its destroyed( enemy must have superior attack power that the users stregnth and endurance combined in order to brake. -to break. And nerf this big time. I suggest 7 strength over the user's endurance. Keep in mind that this is still rank one.

    3) When in full body it can be used as a protective shield

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    1) is considered 2 drawings if only one body part is used.

    2) is considered 5 drawings if the whole body is used.

    3)is not stronger than haki when in a head on collision.

    4) cannot brake a same level haki defense.

    5)Body part being used cant turn into a pen to draw

    Bump when done.


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    ok

    Post by shadowspark on Thu Nov 20, 2014 12:01 am

    alright will do


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    Re: Skill resgistration application

    Post by Unitama on Thu Nov 20, 2014 12:14 am

    You can also pm me when you are done. This is close to approval


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    Re: Skill resgistration application

    Post by Unitama on Thu Nov 20, 2014 12:15 pm

    Approved. Sorry that it took so long.


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