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    Fishman Karate: Tiger Shark Style

    Caelus
    Caelus


    Rank 1- Player-

    Lineage : Peacekeeper's Virtue

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    Crew : Ombre di Giustizia
    Affiliation : Marine


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Caelus "Priest" Aulburne
    Primary Skill: Fishman Karate: Tiger Shark Style
    Secondary Skill:

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    Post by Caelus Fri Dec 06, 2013 4:23 am

    Skill Name: Fishman Karate: Tiger Shark Style
    Skill Type: Martial Arts
    Skill Information: Fishman Karate is a martial art that is practiced by certain skilled members of the fishmen race. While deadly enough on land, Fishman Karate has a number of devastating underwater moves designed to be suitable with the Fishmen strength and speed along with the mobility that goes while under water and, in some cases, a fishman's personal adaptation (fins, teeth, etc.).

    The secret of Fishman Karate is mastery of the water in the user's direct vicinity, using its power to send powerful waves impacting the water within the opponent's body. Since every living creature is nothing more than a mass of water, the users of Fishman Karate are able to battle opponents that are usually highly resistant (if not immune) against blows and punches.
    Skill Strengths:

    • Effective against DF users with a tangible form such as paramecia users and logia users such as ice, darkness, swamp, etc.


    • Extremely versatile because it can be used on both land or in the water or even in the air for a quick counterattack

    Skill Weaknesses:

    • Weaker in areas with scarce quantities of water, reduces the power/effectiveness of his moves by 5 power.


    • Abilities are restricted to only close and mid-range attacks


    • Shockwaves produced by his attacks travel slower on land through an air medium than through water

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    Last edited by Caelus on Sat Dec 07, 2013 4:00 am; edited 3 times in total
    Phoenix D. Jack
    Phoenix D. Jack


    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/Chatbox Moderator- Rank 1- Beta 3 Tester- Yonko- Captain- Limited Edition Donor- Novice- Logia Fruit User- Player-

    Lineage : Legacy of a Legend

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    Character Profile
    Character Name: Phoenix D. Jack
    Primary Skill: Mera Mera No Mi
    Secondary Skill: Rokushiki: Soru and Rankyaku

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    Post by Phoenix D. Jack Sat Dec 07, 2013 12:27 am

    You got alot to work on, I have listed everything I could catch within one read. when editing things you should also add is ranges, times taken for you to do the attack. does they have the same effect on a guy wearing armor as one wearing none. What impact can you do to buildings structures and such.

    When in doubt try reading other approved skills to gain ideas and such, people have gone through it differently.

    And lastly, all also each skill needs one more Weakness than Strenghts


    Caelus wrote:Skill Name: Fishman Karate: Tiger Shark Style
    Skill Type: Martial Arts
    Skill Information: Fishman Karate is a martial art that is practiced by certain skilled members of the fishmen race. While deadly enough on land, Fishman Karate has a number of devastating underwater moves designed to be suitable with the Fishmen strength and speed along with the mobility that goes while under water and, in some cases, a fishman's personal adaptation (fins, teeth, etc.).

    The secret of Fishman Karate is mastery of the water in the user's direct vicinity, using its power to send powerful waves impacting the water within the opponent's body. Since every living creature is nothing more than a mass of water, the users of Fishman Karate are able to battle opponents that are usually highly resistant (if not immune) against blows and punches.
    Skill Strengths:

    • Effective against DF users<-- How is it effective against Fruit users?


    • Extremely versatile <-- How is it versatile?

    Skill Weaknesses:

    • Weaker in areas with scarce quantities of water <--How is it weaker, if by a number how much?


    • Abilities are restricted to only close and mid-range attacks


    • Ineffective against certain logia users such as those who use smoke, fire, light, and other intangible elements he cannot channel a shockwave through <-- Fishman Karate is able to nulify a Fruit users ability when strikking them, cause they strike the water within them, so even a fire, light or smoke logia would still be affected, I don't see why you'd they'd not be affected? So unless your adaptation is not useing that fundamental this weakness does not suffice

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    Caelus
    Caelus


    Rank 1- Player-

    Lineage : Peacekeeper's Virtue

    Beli Beli : 33913
    Posts : 6
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Ombre di Giustizia
    Affiliation : Marine


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Caelus "Priest" Aulburne
    Primary Skill: Fishman Karate: Tiger Shark Style
    Secondary Skill:

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    Post by Caelus Sat Dec 07, 2013 1:16 am

    I've done all the editing I can.
    Phoenix D. Jack
    Phoenix D. Jack


    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/Chatbox Moderator- Rank 1- Beta 3 Tester- Yonko- Captain- Limited Edition Donor- Novice- Logia Fruit User- Player-

    Lineage : Legacy of a Legend

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    Gender : Male
    Crew : Gallant Pirates
    Affiliation : Pirate


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Phoenix D. Jack
    Primary Skill: Mera Mera No Mi
    Secondary Skill: Rokushiki: Soru and Rankyaku

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    Post by Phoenix D. Jack Sat Dec 07, 2013 2:41 am

    Caelus wrote:Skill Name: Fishman Karate: Tiger Shark Style
    Skill Type: Martial Arts
    Skill Information: Fishman Karate is a martial art that is practiced by certain skilled members of the fishmen race. While deadly enough on land, Fishman Karate has a number of devastating underwater moves designed to be suitable with the Fishmen strength and speed along with the mobility that goes while under water and, in some cases, a fishman's personal adaptation (fins, teeth, etc.).

    The secret of Fishman Karate is mastery of the water in the user's direct vicinity, using its power to send powerful waves impacting the water within the opponent's body. Since every living creature is nothing more than a mass of water, the users of Fishman Karate are able to battle opponents that are usually highly resistant (if not immune) against blows and punches.
    Skill Strengths:

    • Effective against DF users with a tangible form such as paramecia users and logia users such as ice, darkness, swamp, etc.


    • Extremely versatile because it can be used on both land or in the water or even in the air for a quick counterattack

    Skill Weaknesses:

    • Weaker in areas with scarce quantities of water, reduces the power/effectiveness of his moves by 20%<--- we don't go by percentages, so have it be a reduction of your power 5-10 or so should suffice


    • Abilities are restricted to only close and mid-range attacks


    • Shockwaves produced by his attacks travel slower on land through an air medium than through water

    Spoiler:
    Phoenix D. Jack
    Phoenix D. Jack


    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/Chatbox Moderator- Rank 1- Beta 3 Tester- Yonko- Captain- Limited Edition Donor- Novice- Logia Fruit User- Player-

    Lineage : Legacy of a Legend

    Beli Beli : 584647
    Posts : 414
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Gallant Pirates
    Affiliation : Pirate


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Phoenix D. Jack
    Primary Skill: Mera Mera No Mi
    Secondary Skill: Rokushiki: Soru and Rankyaku

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    Post by Phoenix D. Jack Sat Dec 07, 2013 4:19 am

    I hereby rate the skills listed below which should be the same as in the top, approved.

    Have fun


    Caelus wrote:Skill Name: Fishman Karate: Tiger Shark Style
    Skill Type: Martial Arts
    Skill Information: Fishman Karate is a martial art that is practiced by certain skilled members of the fishmen race. While deadly enough on land, Fishman Karate has a number of devastating underwater moves designed to be suitable with the Fishmen strength and speed along with the mobility that goes while under water and, in some cases, a fishman's personal adaptation (fins, teeth, etc.).

    The secret of Fishman Karate is mastery of the water in the user's direct vicinity, using its power to send powerful waves impacting the water within the opponent's body. Since every living creature is nothing more than a mass of water, the users of Fishman Karate are able to battle opponents that are usually highly resistant (if not immune) against blows and punches.
    Skill Strengths:

    • Effective against DF users with a tangible form such as paramecia users and logia users such as ice, darkness, swamp, etc.


    • Extremely versatile because it can be used on both land or in the water or even in the air for a quick counterattack

    Skill Weaknesses:

    • Weaker in areas with scarce quantities of water, reduces the power/effectiveness of his moves by 5 power.


    • Abilities are restricted to only close and mid-range attacks


    • Shockwaves produced by his attacks travel slower on land through an air medium than through water

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