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    Vrael's Primary Skills

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    Vrael

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    Vrael's Primary Skills

    Post by Vrael on Fri Feb 21, 2014 5:30 am

    Skill Name: Kusarigamajutsu
    Skill Type: Kusarigamajutsu
    Skill Information: Vrael uses the weapon in a very unusual manner he uses it like most to swing the chain in wide sweeping arcs to distract and entangle the opponents while using the Kama to deliver the fatal strike. Though he also swings around the Kama end as well so as to keep a bit of distance between himself and his enemies to study their attack pattern before engaging in to close. Can also be used to swing the Kama around the user in wide arcs hitting many enemies that are within reach.

    Skill Strengths:
    - Very Versatile weapon that can be used from close to up to twenty feet.
    - Curved blade of weapon makes it easy to use for blocking sword strikes
    - Chain can be used for many different purposes

    Skill Weaknesses:
    - Can swing around and hit allies
    - Strong enough foe could disarm you with pulling on chain
    - No use for anything farther then twenty feet

    Level One:

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Disarming Chain
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: Three Posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Vrael starts swinging the weighted chain in a large circle over his head, and then whipping it forward to entangle an opponent's weapon. If it wraps around an opponents weapon Vrael then yanks the chain back, if the attack works the opponents weapon clatters to the ground behind Vrael after flying out of the opponents hands.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - Can take away the opponents weapon
    - Can disarm an opponent from up to twenty feet away
    - Can stall opponent long enough for someone else to kill
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - Strong enough opponent can disarm user
    - An Opponent could grab onto chain giving other enemies chance to strike user down
    - Fast opponents have a good time to dodge the farther away the user is

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Tripping Chain
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: Two Posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Vrael starts swinging the weighted chain around before whipping it forward low to the ground towards the opponents's legs. If it is successful it wraps around their legs, then Vrael yanks the chain back attempting to pull the opponent's legs out from under him. Hopefully knocking them to the ground.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - Can leave the opponent vulnerable to attacks while on the ground
    - Can leave the opponent vulnerable while standing with chain wrapped around their legs
    - Jumping is easiest way to avoid so makes the next attack harder to dodge while opponent is in the air
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - Unable to use if surrounded by more then four enemies do to how low you have to swing the chain
    - Fast opponents have a good time to dodge the farther away the user is
    - Strong opponents could grab onto chain and disarm user

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Sweeping Arc
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: Three Posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Vrael starts swinging the Kama around by the chain in wide arcs around him slashing at up to twenty enemies.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - Can strike up to twenty opponents at once
    - Hard to disarm since the blade is flying around
    - Arcs go out as far as twenty feet from user
    - Strength increase by 10
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - If blocked the move ends
    - User is open to long range attacks
    - Finesse decreased by 5
    - User is open to melee attacks from weapon since Kama is not in hand

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Busoshoku Thrust
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: Four Posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Vrael uses Busoshoku Haki on his weapon then throws the weighted chain towards the enemy. If it hits the weight smacks very hard into the stomach of the target and send them flying backwards a little ways.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - Able to hit Logia users
    - Finesse and Strength increase by fifteen
    - Knocks the wind out of the opponent leaving them dizzy for one post
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - Only thrown in a straight line so able to dodge easily
    - Unable to use Busoshoku Haki for two posts
    - Able to block with Busoshoku Haki, though has to be same or higher level of Haki

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Spinning shields
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: Three Posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Vrael grabs the chain with both hands and starts spinning the weighted end and Kama end in vertical circles. These circles form two shields that knock off most attacks.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - Great verse ranged attacks ricocheting regular bullets and cannons away from user.
    - User can angle the shields to ricochet in direction he wants
    - Can last up to two posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - Can not attack while doing this
    - Can be swarmed since can only block from two sides
    - If an opponent with 10 more strength then user attacks there attack breaks through the defense ending it


    Last edited by Vrael on Mon Feb 24, 2014 1:29 am; edited 5 times in total
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    Azure Snow

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    Primary Skill: Heaven Nōdachi Style
    Secondary Skill: Gun Blade Style

    Re: Vrael's Primary Skills

    Post by Azure Snow on Sat Feb 22, 2014 8:59 pm

    Corrections in red.

    Vrael wrote:Skill Name: Kusarigamajutsu
    Skill Type: Kusarigamajutsu
    Skill Information: Vrael uses the weapon in a very unusual manner he uses it like most to swing the chain in wide sweeping arcs to distract and entangle the opponents while using the Kama to deliver the fatal strike. Though he also swings around the Kama end as well so as to keep a bit of distance between himself and his enemies to study their attack pattern before engaging in to close. Can also be used to swing the Kama around the user in wide arcs hitting many enemies that are within reach.

    Skill Strengths:
    - Very Versatile weapon that can be used from close to mid-range combat.(How far? Put the meters here.)
    - Curved blade of weapon makes it easy to use for blocking sword strikes
    - Chain can be used for many different purposes

    Skill Weaknesses:
    - Can swing around and hit allies
    - Strong enough foe could disarm you with pulling on chain
    - No long range use(Again, put how far it can go.)

    Level One:

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Disarming Chain
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: Two Posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Vrael starts swinging the weighted chain in a large circle over his head, and then whipping it forward to entangle an opponent's weapon. If it wraps around an opponents weapon Vrael then yanks the chain back, if the attack works the opponents weapon clatters to the ground behind Vrael after flying out of the opponents hands.(where does the weapon land? does it go to you? or does it land near the one you just used it on? ---I have trouble with this technique because of the 2 post cool down. I could probably approve it if it had a 3 post cool down.)
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - Can take away the opponents weapon(Where does the weapon go?)
    - Can disarm an opponent from up to twenty feet away
    - Can stall opponent long enough for someone else to kill(so while you use this, you cant attack the one who you just disarmed? --that would be fair.)
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - Strong enough opponent can disarm user(How strong?)
    - An Opponent could grab onto chain giving other enemies chance to strike user down
    - Fast opponents have a good time to dodge the farther away the user is

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Tripping Chain
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: Two Posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Vrael starts swinging the weighted chain around before whipping it forward low to the ground towards the opponents's legs. If it is succesful it wraps around their legs, then Vrael yanks the chain back attempting to pull the opponent's legs out from under him. Hopefully knocking them to the ground.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - Can leave the opponent vulnerable to attacks while on the ground
    - Can leave the opponent vulnerable while standing with chain wrapped around their legs
    - Jumping is easiest way to avoid so makes the next attack harder to dodge while opponent is in the air
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - Unable to use if surrounded by to many enemies do to how low you have to swing the chain(How many enemies? be specific. )
    - Fast opponents have a good time to dodge the farther away the user is
    - Strong opponents could grab onto chain and disarm user

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Sweeping Arc
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: Two Posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Vrael starts swinging the Kama around by the chain in wide arcs around him slashing at many enemies.(How many Enemies MAX?)
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - Can strike many opponents at once(how many?-- if its over two i want a higher cool down)
    - Hard to disarm since the blade is flying around
    - Arcs go out as far as twenty feet from user
    - Strength increase by 10(your going to need a higher cool down if you want this strength, at least a 3 post cool down.)
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - If blocked the move ends
    - User is open to long range attacks
    - Finesse decreased by 5
    - User is open to melee attacks from weapon since Kama is not in hand

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Busoshoku Thrust(you really dont have to say Busoshoku Haki, you can do it anyways with out putting it in your technique.)
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: Two Posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Vrael uses Busoshoku Haki on his weapon then throws the weighted chain towards the enemy. If it hits the weight smacks very hard into the stomach of the target and send them flying backwards a little ways.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - Able to hit Logia users (dont need to put this. everyone has haki)
    - Finesse and Strength increase by fifteen(Woah. thats a +30 Stats your getting there. i want to see a cool down of 5 and an equal weakness.)
    - Knocks the wind out of the opponent leaving them dizzy for one post
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - Only thrown in a straigth line so able to dodge easily
    - Unable to use Busoshoku Haki till this cool down is over(dont really need this weakness)
    - Able to block with Busoshoku Haki, though has to be same or higher level of Haki(dont really need this weakness, its obvious that you are able to. )
    -(I want to see at least a -25 to your stats for the post after this technique activated to balance out the stat gain you get when using this tech.)
    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Spinning shields
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: Two Posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Vrael grabs the chain with both hands and starts spining the weighted end and Kama end in vertical circles. These circles form two shields that knock off most attacks.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - Great verse ranged attacks ricosheing regulor bullets and cannons(Cannons?.. hmmm..) away from user.
    - User can angle the shields to ricoshe in direction he wants
    - Can last up to two posts (If this lasts for 2 posts i want to see a cool down of 3.)
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - Can not attack while doing this
    - Can be swarmed since can only block from two sides
    - If an opponent with 10 more strength then user attacks there attack breaks through the defense ending it

    Alrighty, so Fix those things and then bump when your ready for the next review. Smile


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    Re: Vrael's Primary Skills

    Post by Vrael on Sat Feb 22, 2014 11:12 pm

    Bump
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    Azure Snow

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    Character Name: Azure D. Snow
    Primary Skill: Heaven Nōdachi Style
    Secondary Skill: Gun Blade Style

    Re: Vrael's Primary Skills

    Post by Azure Snow on Wed Feb 26, 2014 8:31 pm

    You haven't fixed the Last three Techniques. Bump when your ready. The first two techniques are good.


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    Weapon: Silver Light
    Weapon: Bright Nodachi
    Armor: Majestic Winter
    Primary Skill: Heaven's Nōdachi Style
    Secondary Skill: Gun Blade Style


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