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    Jin's fruit

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    Jin

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    Jin's fruit

    Post by Jin on Wed May 14, 2014 11:33 pm

    Skill Name: San San no Mi (Acid Acid no Mi)
    Skill Type: Logia
    Skill Information:It gives the person the ability to create, manipulate and transform into its element, in this case, Acid. The smoke can burn very easily and amek painful damage.
    Skill Strengths:
    -The user can make its body acid to evade some things.
    -The user can reach high parts by extending a acid body.
    -It can cause burns.
    Skill Weaknesses:
    -As any normal fruit, he is neutralized in water.
    -It has to be always touching something to stand.
    -It's actually kind of slow the acid.

    Lvl 1:

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Acid explosion
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Offensive/Close range 10 meter radio
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user makes himself explode to cover a huge place with acid. This acid will destroy the cells and any organic solid thing. It attacks explodes with a 10 meter radius.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -It can hit multiple foes at once.
    -It explodes to make extra damage.
    -It can be used to evade attacks since Jin explodes.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -Jin needs to recreate himself from the acid after he explodes.
    -It can harm allies too.
    -The acid only lasts 3 posts on the floor and walls.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Acid Clone
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Support/Close range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 5 post cooldown/It lasts for 3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user makes some acid to create a friend and makes him look just like Jin. It can fight and when it is destroyed, it makes a 1 radio explosion.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -It can make multiple attacks.
    -It can block attacks.
    -The clone is the same copying weapons but not abilities.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -The clone cant perform other than normal human attacks/technics.
    -If the clone is hit twice, it explodes.
    -Even if not hit, it explodes in 3 posts.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Acid Armor
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Support
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:It lasts 3 posts and has a 5 post cooldown
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user makes a invisible acid armor, because it forms threw the skin, that protects him from hits, and any hit will burn the enemy instead.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -The user is invulnerable to normal bullets.
    -The user is invulnerable to normal close range weapons.
    -Enemy attacks wil burn theme if there is contact.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -The user needs to be more concentrated and if he loses the concentration, the armor is destroyed.
    -The finesse is lowered by 5.
    -It can't block other attacks beside weapon attacks (including range attacks/weapons) and hand combat.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Acid Bullets
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Middle range/up to 20 meters
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:5 post cooldown
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user makes his hands of acid and then starts shooting many little spheres that can act like a bullets and also burn, making more pain than damage.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -The user can make many attacks.
    -It can hit up to 20 meters away.
    -As it burns inside the body, it makes a lot of pain, but as the acid then disappears, it makes less damage than a normal bullet.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -A normal bullet does more damage.
    -It only burns for 1 post before the acid disappears.
    -It doesn't go very inside as a bullet would do.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Acid wall
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Defensive/Close range 1 meter
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user makes a acid wall go up to protect from attacks. If it's hit by a weapon, it would get stoked, if it is hit with the body, it will burn the foe.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -It can protect the user from attacks.
    -The wall grows very fast to activate quickly.
    -It can burn or get stuck the enemy
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -The wall is destroyed just after the impact, or if there os no impact too.
    -It isn’t that fast to protect from bullets.
    -The user must be standing, meaning if he is in the air, the ability wont work.


    Last edited by Jin on Sat May 17, 2014 2:29 am; edited 1 time in total
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    Jin

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    Re: Jin's fruit

    Post by Jin on Thu May 15, 2014 4:32 am

    I changed it
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    Re: Jin's fruit

    Post by Storm Runner on Fri May 16, 2014 12:12 pm

    You need to add the ranges again


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    Jin

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    Secondary Skill: Dead man style

    Re: Jin's fruit

    Post by Jin on Sat May 17, 2014 2:29 am

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    Re: Jin's fruit

    Post by Storm Runner on Tue May 20, 2014 6:52 pm

    sorry for my short absence corrections spelling and flaws in red.

    Jin wrote:Skill Name: San San no Mi (Acid Acid no Mi)
    Skill Type: Logia
    Skill Information:It gives the person the ability to create, manipulate and transform into its element, in this case, Acid. The smoke can burn very easily and emitt painful damage. -acids don't produce smoke that can burn objects as far as I am aware though if you can provide a link proving other wise then I will retract this comment. however you could say the acid produces flammable gasses. Also please include the ph strength of the acid you produce keep in mind that the acid will grow stronger as your character level's up and gains new powers through their fruit.
    Skill Strengths:
    -The user can make its body acid to evade some things. - change to this Basic strength of being a Logia user, such as, any attacks that aren’t element or haki based will just go through the user and skill user is in full control of his body of acid.
    -The user can reach high parts by extending a acid body. -how high? it needs to be limited.
    -It can cause burns. -if this is a passive trait he has without having to use a skill then it will be 1st degree burns only until you reach level three when it can be second degree.
    -add in your elemental strengths
    Skill Weaknesses:
    -As any normal fruit, he is neutralized in water. -if this is listing off the weakness of a devil fruit then don't forget to include the world devil in front of the word fruit along with listing haki, sea prism stone and salt as a weakness along with your elemental weaknesses.
    -actually a base neutralises an acid in the real world so that needs to be added in.
    -It has to be always touching something to stand. -remove this
    -It's actually kind of slow the acid. - that actually depends on the strength of the acid produced. but if you are referring to how fast the liquid moves then say so also wouldn't mean when your character turns completely into acid you would gain a minus speed stat?

    Lvl 1:

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Acid explosion
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Offensive/Close range 10 meter radius
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user makes himself explode to cover a huge place with acid. This acid will destroy the cells and any organic solid thing. It attacks explodes with a 10 meter radius.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -It can hit multiple foes at once.
    -It explodes to make extra damage. -change this to be only to people who are within a 5 metre radius of the user of the and please state how much more damage it does.
    -It can be used to evade attacks since Jin explodes.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -Jin needs to recreate himself from the acid after he explodes. -this takes up a post
    -It can harm allies too.
    -The acid only lasts 3 posts on the floor and walls.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Acid Clone
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Support/Close range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 5 post cooldown/It lasts for 3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user makes some acid to create a friend and makes him look just like Jin. It can fight and when it is destroyed, it makes a 1 metre radius explosion.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -It can make multiple attacks.
    -It can block attacks.
    -The clone is the same copying weapons but not abilities. - this is not stated in the description
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -The clone cant perform other than normal human attacks/technics.
    -If the clone is hit twice, it explodes.
    -Even if not hit, it explodes in 3 posts.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Acid Armour
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Support/Defensive
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:It lasts 3 posts and has a 5 post cooldown
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user makes a invisible acid armor, because it forms through the skin, that protects him from hits, and any hit will burn the enemy instead. -the burn should be only 1st degree
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -The user is invulnerable to normal bullets. -you already are being a logia type user
    -The user is invulnerable to normal close range weapons. -you already are being a logia type user
    -Enemy attacks will burn theme if there is contact.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -The user needs to be more concentrated and if he loses the concentration, the armor is destroyed.
    -The finesse is lowered by 5.
    -It can't block other attacks beside weapon attacks (including range attacks/weapons) and hand combat.

    -remove the move above and come up with a new one it is a broken concept as you already able to do this passively

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Acid Bullets
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Middle range/up to 20 meters
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:5 post cooldown
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: The user makes his hands of acid and then starts shooting many little spheres that can act like a bullets and also burn, making more pain than damage.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -The user can make many attacks. -how many?
    -It can hit up to 20 meters away.
    -As it burns inside the body, it makes a lot of pain, but as the acid then disappears, it makes less damage than a normal bullet. -how does it get inside the body? you only stated that the acid burns the skin not seep through it.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -A normal bullet does more damage.
    -It only burns for 1 post before the acid disappears.
    -It doesn't go very inside as a bullet would do.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Acid wall
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Defensive/Close range 1 meter
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:The user makes a acid wall go up to protect from attacks. If it's hit by a weapon, it would get stoked, if it is hit with the body, it will burn the foe.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -It can protect the user from attacks. -elemental attacks only
    -The wall grows very fast to activate quickly.
    -It can burn or get stuck the enemy
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -The wall is destroyed just after the impact, or if there or no impact too. -how does it get destroyed with no impact?
    -It isn’t that fast to protect from bullets. -bullets unless embedded with haki pass through you and would pass through your wall and it you even if it was embedded with haki.
    -The user must be standing, meaning if he is in the air, the ability wont work. -state it has to be a solid surface he is standing on.

    this should help with your elemental corrections http://www.onepiecerp.com/t1076-elemental-chart

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