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One Piece RP is a new non-canon forum RP focused on building a strong active community.

Phoenix D. Jack has been promoted to Administrator, and Ray Ignazia has been promoted to Head Moderator.
We are currently still in a beta like phase, and still working out some kinks like fixing up the tasks and stat system - but those that stay with us will be rewarded with limited edition stuff.

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    Jin's fruit

    Jin
    Jin


    Rank 1- Player-

    Lineage : Will of the Adventurer

    Beli Beli : 7263
    Posts : 33
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Infinite Horizon Pirates
    Affiliation : Pirate


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Jin
    Primary Skill: N/A
    Secondary Skill: Dead man style

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    Post by Jin Wed May 14, 2014 11:33 pm

    Skill Name: San San no Mi (Acid Acid no Mi)
    Skill Type: Logia
    Skill Information:It gives the person the ability to create, manipulate and transform into its element, in this case, Acid. The smoke can burn very easily and amek painful damage.
    Skill Strengths:
    -The user can make its body acid to evade some things.
    -The user can reach high parts by extending a acid body.
    -It can cause burns.
    Skill Weaknesses:
    -As any normal fruit, he is neutralized in water.
    -It has to be always touching something to stand.
    -It's actually kind of slow the acid.

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    Last edited by Jin on Sat May 17, 2014 2:29 am; edited 1 time in total
    Jin
    Jin


    Rank 1- Player-

    Lineage : Will of the Adventurer

    Beli Beli : 7263
    Posts : 33
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Infinite Horizon Pirates
    Affiliation : Pirate


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Jin
    Primary Skill: N/A
    Secondary Skill: Dead man style

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    Post by Jin Thu May 15, 2014 4:32 am

    I changed it
    Storm Runner
    Storm Runner


    Administrator- Moderator- Rank 1- Beta 3 Tester- Captain- Paramecia Fruit User- Player-

    Lineage : Vanquisher's Valor

    Beli Beli : 32235
    Task Points : 2
    Posts : 507
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Infinite Horizon Pirates
    Affiliation : Pirate


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Storm Runner Fūjin
    Primary Skill: Zūmu-Zūmu no Mi (Zoom-Zoom Fruit)
    Secondary Skill:

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    Post by Storm Runner Fri May 16, 2014 12:12 pm

    You need to add the ranges again
    Jin
    Jin


    Rank 1- Player-

    Lineage : Will of the Adventurer

    Beli Beli : 7263
    Posts : 33
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Infinite Horizon Pirates
    Affiliation : Pirate


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Jin
    Primary Skill: N/A
    Secondary Skill: Dead man style

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    Post by Jin Sat May 17, 2014 2:29 am

    Ready
    Storm Runner
    Storm Runner


    Administrator- Moderator- Rank 1- Beta 3 Tester- Captain- Paramecia Fruit User- Player-

    Lineage : Vanquisher's Valor

    Beli Beli : 32235
    Task Points : 2
    Posts : 507
    Race : Human
    Gender : Male
    Crew : Infinite Horizon Pirates
    Affiliation : Pirate


    Character Profile
    Character Name: Storm Runner Fūjin
    Primary Skill: Zūmu-Zūmu no Mi (Zoom-Zoom Fruit)
    Secondary Skill:

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    Post by Storm Runner Tue May 20, 2014 6:52 pm

    sorry for my short absence corrections spelling and flaws in red.

    Jin wrote:Skill Name: San San no Mi (Acid Acid no Mi)
    Skill Type: Logia
    Skill Information:It gives the person the ability to create, manipulate and transform into its element, in this case, Acid. The smoke can burn very easily and emitt painful damage. -acids don't produce smoke that can burn objects as far as I am aware though if you can provide a link proving other wise then I will retract this comment. however you could say the acid produces flammable gasses. Also please include the ph strength of the acid you produce keep in mind that the acid will grow stronger as your character level's up and gains new powers through their fruit.
    Skill Strengths:
    -The user can make its body acid to evade some things. - change to this Basic strength of being a Logia user, such as, any attacks that aren’t element or haki based will just go through the user and skill user is in full control of his body of acid.
    -The user can reach high parts by extending a acid body. -how high? it needs to be limited.
    -It can cause burns. -if this is a passive trait he has without having to use a skill then it will be 1st degree burns only until you reach level three when it can be second degree.
    -add in your elemental strengths
    Skill Weaknesses:
    -As any normal fruit, he is neutralized in water. -if this is listing off the weakness of a devil fruit then don't forget to include the world devil in front of the word fruit along with listing haki, sea prism stone and salt as a weakness along with your elemental weaknesses.
    -actually a base neutralises an acid in the real world so that needs to be added in.
    -It has to be always touching something to stand. -remove this
    -It's actually kind of slow the acid. - that actually depends on the strength of the acid produced. but if you are referring to how fast the liquid moves then say so also wouldn't mean when your character turns completely into acid you would gain a minus speed stat?

    Lvl 1:

    this should help with your elemental corrections http://www.onepiecerp.com/t1076-elemental-chart

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