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    Magu-Magu no Mi

    Post by RedCosmo on Fri Aug 01, 2014 3:45 pm

    Magu-Magu no Mİ
    Skill Name:Skill Type:Logia

    Skill Information:Skill Strengths:

    -Melting: Cause of magma,user can easily melt any meltable objects easily.

    -Invulnerability: User can easily escape from attacks not covered in haki by turning his body into lava.

    -Elemental Superiority: Magma haves an elemental superiority over fire,so user can burn fire.


    Skill Weaknesses:

    -Sea,Sea Stone and Sea Salt: As like all other devil fruit users,User can't swim in the sea and sea stone disables the user to use his devil fruit powers.

    -Haki: User can't escape attacks covered with haki.

    -Elemental Weakness: User loses 10 strength while fighting a water element user.


    LVL 1 Abilities:




    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Magma Fists (Magu Magu no Ken)

    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee/Ranged (15-25 m)

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 Posts

    Ability Lvl 1 Description: User turns his fists into magma and shoots them to the sky,and fists rain to the opponents.User can maximum shoot 3 fists (3 more at every rank)

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

    -This attack is great to hurt multiple opponents.
    -It causes burns on opponent.
    -It's both ranged and melee attack at the same time.



    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    -It causes serious burns on opponent when it hits.
    -It's hard to aim.(-5 Finesse)
    -It's easy to run away from this attack.

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    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Kazan no ryūsei (Volcanic Meteors)

    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Ranged (30-40)

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 Posts.

    Ability Lvl 1 Description: User creates blobs from his body and throws them with a great force.Volcanic Meteors explodes quicklime when contact and damages opponents.User can create maximum 5 Volcanic Meteors.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -If charged for 1 post,quicklime glows and flashes greatly when explodes,and blinds opponents for 1 post.
    -It can cause burns on opponent.
    -It's great for damaging a group of opponents.


    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    -If allies are close to the bombs,they get blind for 1 post too.
    -User haves to fill the blobs with quicklime,but when filling them quicklime hurts the user.
    -When there is a wind,blobs dont explode.

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    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Yōgan doriru (Lava Drill)

    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 Posts.

    Ability Lvl 1 Description: User turns himself to a drill,and dashes through the opponent,damaging the opponent harshly.The time span when user dashing to the other target is 1 post cause user gets dizzy 2 times,first is after user attacks the first target and second is after user attacks to the last target.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

    -This attack is great at melee battles.
    -It causes a serious burn at opponent.
    -If user targeted two opponents,user can easily dash to the other opponent.


    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    -User gets dizzy 2 times if he decides to attack two targets.
    -This attack can be stopped by a water element user.
    -User gets dizzy for 1 post.

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    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Magumakāpetto (Magma Carpet)

    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Field

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 6 Posts.

    Ability Lvl 1 Description: User touches to the ground and turns the field into lava and magma underneath the lava.User can select the radius of the attack.(Maxiumum 20 meters.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

    -User can select the radius of the lava field.So it makes a great trapping attack.
    -This attack is perfect to damage a lots of opponents.
    -Heavy opponents can fall into lava.


    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    -The maximum radius is 20 meters.
    -Water element users can disable this attack by turning lava into stone.
    -This attack can damage allies too.


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    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Kazantate (Volcanic Shield)

    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support.

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 5 Posts.

    Ability Lvl 1 Description: User creates a magma shield to protect himself and his allies.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

    -It causes burns if opponent attacks bare hand without haki.
    -It can guard the user and user's allies.
    -It's great attack for a counter.


    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    -Water element users can turn shield into rock and can break it.
    -If coming attack is haki covered,user gets hurt.
    -User cant aim the magma wave.




    Last edited by RedCosmo on Tue Aug 05, 2014 10:49 pm; edited 25 times in total

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    Re: Magu-Magu no Mi

    Post by RedCosmo on Fri Aug 01, 2014 9:43 pm

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    Re: Magu-Magu no Mi

    Post by RedCosmo on Sat Aug 02, 2014 9:00 am

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    Re: Magu-Magu no Mi

    Post by Storm Runner on Sat Aug 02, 2014 8:54 pm

    Please change your fruit to be a paramecia and then remove the black hole skill. then please link me to your stats as I must consult them to valuate your skills, but for now I need to remove and replace black hole and big bang. If the darkness fruit is not allowed a black hole neither will this fruit and big bang may be allowed at level one maybe at level 3


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    Re: Magu-Magu no Mi

    Post by RedCosmo on Sun Aug 03, 2014 12:45 am

    Okay i'll do it but blackhole is not a real black hole it's just the name of the attack.

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    Post by RedCosmo on Sun Aug 03, 2014 6:54 pm

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    Re: Magu-Magu no Mi

    Post by RedCosmo on Mon Aug 04, 2014 4:57 pm

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    Re: Magu-Magu no Mi

    Post by RedCosmo on Tue Aug 05, 2014 1:19 pm

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    Re: Magu-Magu no Mi

    Post by Fisher D. Conrad on Tue Aug 05, 2014 8:54 pm

    RedCosmo wrote:
    Magu-Magu no Mİ
    Skill Name:Magu-Magu no Mi

    Skill Type:Logia

    Skill Information: Magu-Magu no Mi makes user a Magma Human and enables the user to turn his body parts to magma.User can turn the earth into lava and can control it,also can shoot magma rocks.Fruit itself looks like a red and black pineapple,but haves circled and swirled spikes,like the ones in mera-mera no mi.Also,Magma can melt meltable objects easily and haves a natural superiority over fire.Also user can generate quicklime from the magma.


    Skill Strengths:

    -Melting: Cause of magma,user can easily melt any meltable objects easily.

    -Invulnerability: User can easily escape from attacks not covered in haki by turning his body into lava.

    -Elemental Strength: User gains 10 strength while fighting a fire element user.


    Skill Weaknesses:

    -Sea,Sea Stone and Sea Salt: As like all other devil fruit users,User can't swim in the sea and sea stone disables the user to use his devil fruit powers.

    -Haki: User can't escape attacks covered with haki.

    -Elemental Weakness: User loses 10 strength while fighting a water element user.

    That's stuff.

    Yep wrote:LVL 1 Abilities



    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Magma Fists (Magu Magu no Ken)

    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee/Ranged (15-25 m)

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 Posts

    Ability Lvl 1 Description: User turns his fists into magma and shoots them to the sky,and fists rain to the opponents.User can maximum shoot 3 fists (3 more at every rank)

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

    -This attack damages more while fighting a fire element user.
    -It causes burns on opponent.
    -It's both ranged and melee attack at the same time.



    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    -This attack damages less while fighting a water element user.
    -It's hard to aim.(-5 Finesse)
    -It's easy to run away from this attack.

    ________________________________________________________________________

    Elemental strengths and weaknesses are expected. That makes those two redundant. Need a new strength and weakness.

    Happened wrote:

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Kazan no ryūsei (Volcanic Meteors)

    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Ranged (30-40)

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 Posts.

    Ability Lvl 1 Description: User creates blobs from his body and throws them with a great force.Volcanic Meteors explodes quicklime when contact and damages opponents.User can create maximum 5 Volcanic Meteors.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -This attack damages more while fighting a fire element user.
    -It can cause burns on opponent.
    -It's great for damaging a group of opponents.


    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    -This attack damages less while fighting a water element user.
    -User haves to fill the blobs with quicklime,but when filling them quicklime hurts the user.
    -When there is a wind,blobs dont explode.

    ________________________________________________________________________

    Same as before on elemental. I feel like you've got those for every one of these, so just copy this complaint to all of them.

    Complaining wrote:

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Yōgan doriru (Lava Drill)

    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 Posts.

    Ability Lvl 1 Description: User turns himself to a drill,and dashes through the opponent,damaging the opponent harshly.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

    -This attack damages more while fighting a fire element user.
    -It causes a serious burn at opponent.
    -If user targeted two opponents,user can easily dash to the other opponent.


    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    -This attack damages less while fighting a water element user.
    -This attack can be stopped by a water element user.
    -User gets dizzy for 1 post.

    ________________________________________________________________________

    How is it easy for them to "dash" to someone else? You say this makes them dizzy, so it's a stretch just making it to one guy. Do they drill someone, stop, then run at another guy all in the span of one post?

    J wrote:

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Magumakāpetto (Magma Carpet)

    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Field

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 5 Posts.

    Ability Lvl 1 Description: User touches to the ground and turns the field into magma rocks and lava underneath the rocks.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

    -This attack damages more while fighting a fire element user.
    -This attack is perfect to damage a lots of opponents.
    -Heavy opponents can fall into lava.


    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    -This attack damages less while fighting a water element user.
    -Water element users can disable this attack by turning lava into stone.
    -This attack can damage allies too.


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    Lava is on top, magma on bottom. Magma is not classified as lava until it reaches the surface.

    Science wrote:

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Kazantate (Volcanic Shield)

    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Guard/Explosion.

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 7 Posts.

    Ability Lvl 1 Description: User creates a magma shield to protect himself and his allies.After protecting,user sends the shield as a huge wave to the opponents.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

    -This attack damages more while fighting a fire element user.
    -It can guard the user and user's allies.
    -It's great attack for a counter.


    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    -This attack damages less while fighting a water element user.
    -If coming attack is haki covered,user gets hurt.
    -User cant aim the magma wave.


    [/spoiler]

    "Guard/Explosion" isn't a type. That's support.

    I don't like you using a defense as an attack at the same time. That seems beyond level 1 mastery.
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    Re: Magu-Magu no Mi

    Post by Storm Runner on Tue Aug 05, 2014 10:16 pm

    all corrections are in blue also please edit your range in all your abilities as shown in this example and according to the sites pre-set range classification Close range 0-10 meters. Mid range, 15-25 and long range 30-40.

    Example:
    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Gum Gum Pistol
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee mid/close ranged (0 - 20 metres)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2


    RedCosmo wrote:
    Magu-Magu no Mİ
    Skill Name:Magu-Magu no Mi

    Skill Type:Logia

    Skill Information: Magu-Magu no Mi makes user a Magma Human and enables the user to turn his body parts to magma.User can turn the earth into lava and can control it,also can shoot magma rocks.Fruit itself looks like a red and black pineapple,but haves circled and swirled spikes,like the ones in mera-mera no mi.Also,Magma can melt meltable objects easily and haves a natural superiority over fire.Also user can generate quicklime from the magma.


    Skill Strengths:

    -Melting: Cause of magma,user can easily melt any meltable objects easily. -This would not effect lv2/lv3 equipment, weapons, armour. Either state this as a weakness or add it on here.

    -Invulnerability: User can easily escape from attacks not covered in haki by turning his body into lava.

    -Elemental Strength: User gains 10 strength while fighting a fire element user.
    -unfortunately though this is cannon this doesn't follow the sites elemental chart found here: http://www.onepiecerp.com/t1076-elemental-chart

    Skill Weaknesses:

    -Sea,Sea Stone and Sea Salt: As like all other devil fruit users,User can't swim in the sea and sea stone disables the user to use his devil fruit powers.

    -Haki: User can't escape attacks covered with haki. -well this is incorrect you can escape a haki embedded attack if your reflex stats are high enough. Haki just allows people to harm logia users with physical strikes.

    -Elemental Weakness: User loses 10 strength while fighting a water element user.
    -please look at the elemental chart to see all of your elemental weaknesses

    LVL 1 Abilities:




    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Magma Fists (Magu Magu no Ken)

    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee/Ranged (15-25 m)

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 Posts

    Ability Lvl 1 Description: User turns his fists into magma and shoots them to the sky,and fists rain to the opponents.User can maximum shoot 3 fists (3 more at every rank)

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

    -This attack damages more while fighting a fire element user.
    -It causes burns on opponent.
    -It's both ranged and melee attack at the same time.



    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    -This attack damages less while fighting a water element user.
    -It's hard to aim.(-5 Finesse)
    -It's easy to run away from this attack.



    ^This is too strong for lv1, this would be allowed at lv3^
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    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Kazan no ryūsei (Volcanic Meteors)

    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Ranged (30-40)

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 Posts.

    Ability Lvl 1 Description: User creates blobs from his body and throws them with a great force. Volcanic Meteors explodes quicklime when contact and damages opponents.User can create maximum 5 Volcanic Meteors. -what is the range of the explosion from the volcanic projectiles.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -This attack damages more while fighting a fire element user. -unfortunately though this is cannon this doesn't follow the sites elemental chart found here. please edit it
    -It can cause burns on opponent. -what kinds of burns 1st degree, 2nd degree please give more information.
    -It's great for damaging a group of opponents.
      -how so? do the lava projectiles spread out as they are fired? please give more information.


    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    -This attack damages less while fighting a water element user.
    -User haves to fill the blobs with quicklime, but when filling them quicklime hurts the user. -please reword this.
    -When there is a wind,blobs dont explode.
    -so if there is a gentle breeze the projectile won't explode? that seems unlikely please refer to the elemental charts to edit this weakness.
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    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Yōgan doriru (Lava Drill)

    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 4 Posts.

    Ability Lvl 1 Description: User turns himself to a drill, and dashes through the opponent, damaging the opponent harshly. -remove the word harshly as your damage is equal to your rank, also please give more information about the ability.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

    -This attack damages more while fighting a fire element user. -unfortunately though this is cannon this doesn't follow the sites elemental chart found here. please edit it
    -It causes a serious burn at opponent. -what kinds of burns 1st degree, 2nd degree please give more information.
    -If user targeted two opponents, user can easily dash to the other opponent.
    -I would highly doubt that after turning into a drill and spinning at a target that you would be able to target another target while spinning, as I would imagine it would leave you disorientated and dizzy. Thus I am not allowing this a strength.


    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    -This attack damages less while fighting a water element user.
    -This attack can be stopped by a water element user. -how can it be stopped more information is needed
    -User gets dizzy for 1 post.
    -does this mean you won't be able to attack and defend from attacks for a single post, please give more information.
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    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Magumakāpetto (Magma Carpet)

    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Field -you need to add the range of this ability.

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 5 Posts.

    Ability Lvl 1 Description: User touches to the ground and turns the field into magma rocks and lava underneath the rocks. -magma is underneath the surface and lava is above the surface. please fix that then give more information about it.

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

    -This attack damages more while fighting a fire element user. -unfortunately though this is cannon this doesn't follow the sites elemental chart found here. please edit it
    -This attack is perfect to damage a lots of opponents.
    -Heavy opponents can fall into lava.
    -anyone would sink in lava regardless of their weight if they didn't burn to death first

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    -This attack damages less while fighting a water element user.
    -Water element users can disable this attack by turning lava into stone.
    -This attack can damage allies too.


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    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Kazantate (Volcanic Shield)

    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Guard/Explosion. -defensive not guard, also a rang must be given.

    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 6.

    Ability Lvl 1 Description: User creates a magma shield to protect himself and his allies. After protecting, user sends the shield as a huge wave to the opponents. -measurements of the shield must be given. Also I will not allow the shield defence and the magma wave to take place in the same post they must be split up into two different posts

    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:

    -This attack damages more while fighting a fire element user. -unfortunately though this is cannon this doesn't follow the sites elemental chart found here. please edit it
    -It can guard the user and it's allies.
    -It's great attack for a counter.


    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:

    -This attack damages less while fighting a water element user. -how does it do less damage? -10 strength when attacking a target of the water element?
    -If coming attack is haki covered,user gets hurt.
    -User cant aim the magma wave.




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