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    Ito Ito no Mi

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    HikenMCFC

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    Character Name: Kano Hogai
    Primary Skill: Swordsmanship
    Secondary Skill:

    Ito Ito no Mi

    Post by HikenMCFC on Sun Aug 24, 2014 9:53 pm

    Skill Name:Ito Ito no Mi
    Skill Type:Paramecia
    Skill Information:The Ito Ito no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to create and manipulate strings.
    Skill Strengths: The strings can be used for cutting.

    The strings can also be used to clouds, for air transport

    Set a string webtrap



    Skill Weaknesses: if there are no clouds in the sky there is nothing to attach the strings at for air transport

    If the user is in touch with sea salt stone I wont be able to use my abilities

    Can get hit by physical attacks.




    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Five Color Strings
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Close Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Slashes his target with five strings coming out from his fingers
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:It Cuts the opponent
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:Can be dodged by move away or jump away

    Ability Lvl 2 Name:Spiderweb
    Ability Lvl 2 Type:Earth
    Ability Lvl 2 Cooldown:3 posts
    Ability Lvl 2 Description:Its Spiderweb that I can Catch my opponent with, that makes him being stuck at the spiderweb
    Ability Lvl 2 Strengths:Is that it makes the opponent unable to move if he gets stuck
    Ability Lvl 2 Weaknesses:The Spiderweb can get cut.


    Ability Lvl 3 Name:String Kano
    Ability Lvl 3 Type:Field
    Ability Lvl 3 Cooldown:4
    Ability Lvl 3 Description: Forms a clone of himself, made entirely out of string, and then the clone can be controlled
    Ability Lvl 3 Strengths:Making it easier to escape by attacking with the clone
    Ability Lvl 3 Weaknesses:That they can see that its a clone, and then they attack the real person instead of the clone
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    Storm Runner

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    Primary Skill: Zūmu-Zūmu no Mi (Zoom-Zoom Fruit)
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    Re: Ito Ito no Mi

    Post by Storm Runner on Tue Aug 26, 2014 1:44 am

    Hello Hiken and welcome to the site, okay the corrections to your Skill are in red

    HikenMCFC wrote:Skill Name:Ito Ito no Mi
    Skill Type:Paramecia
    Skill Information:The Ito Ito no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to create and manipulate strings.
    Skill Strengths: The strings can be used for cutting.

    The strings can also be used to clouds, for air transport

    Set a string web trap -This would be one of your skills abilities not a strength, a strength for an ability would be for example your strings could be sharp enough to break/slice through stone. If you are having any further problems relating to your strengths and weaknesses I suggest making them relating them to your elemental strengths and weaknesses. Your element would be neutral and here is a link to the page: http://www.onepiecerp.com/t1076-elemental-chart



    Skill Weaknesses: if there are no clouds in the sky there is nothing to attach the strings at for air transport

    If the user is in touch with sea salt stone I wont be able to use my abilities

    Can get hit by physical attacks. -this isn't a weakness unique to you because of your power any one can get hit by physical attacks after all even logia users if they are hit with haki.




    Ability Lvl 1 Name:Five Color Strings
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:Close Range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:2 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Slashes his target with five strings coming out from his fingers
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:It Cuts the opponent
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:Can be dodged by move away or jump away

    Ability Lvl 2 Name:Spiderweb
    Ability Lvl 2 Type:Earth
    Ability Lvl 2 Cooldown:3 posts
    Ability Lvl 2 Description:Its Spiderweb that I can Catch my opponent with, that makes him being stuck at the spiderweb
    Ability Lvl 2 Strengths:Is that it makes the opponent unable to move if he gets stuck
    Ability Lvl 2 Weaknesses:The Spiderweb can get cut.


    Ability Lvl 3 Name:String Kano
    Ability Lvl 3 Type:Field
    Ability Lvl 3 Cooldown:4
    Ability Lvl 3 Description: Forms a clone of himself, made entirely out of string, and then the clone can be controlled
    Ability Lvl 3 Strengths:Making it easier to escape by attacking with the clone
    Ability Lvl 3 Weaknesses:That they can see that its a clone, and then they attack the real person instead of the clone

    okay as for your abilities please edit your type to include the range of all your abilities as shown in this example and according to the sites pre-set range classification Close range 0-10 meters. Mid range, 15-25 and long range 30-40.

    Example:
    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Gum Gum Pistol
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee mid/close ranged (0 - 20 metres)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2

    then continuing on with your abilities, you can't use lv2 or lv3 abilities until you reach that rank and you seemed to have missed the part about your are allowed to have 5 lv1 skills. Also I would like to see three weaknesses and three strengths in each of the abilities, I left a link to my Devil Fruit which you can use as an example if you wish to use it.
    http://www.onepiecerp.com/t1117-zumu-zumu-no-mi


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