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    Bangu Bangu no Mi

    Post by Nana-chan on Thu Nov 06, 2014 5:00 pm

    Skill Name: Bangu Bangu no Mi (Bang-Bang Fruit)

    Skill Type: Paramecia

    Skill Information: While playing on 'finding treasures', Nana found a really strange orange sharon fruit with red swirls all over it. Later after this she realised that she has some really destructive abilities, wich she gained from it, and the main purpose of them. The Bangu Bangu no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to cause explosions. The eater becomes an "Explosive" human.

    Skill Strengths:
    - The user becomes highly resistant to explosions. They might only make Nana look 'little' dirty. Shrapnel won't do any damage, but it still has knockback effect wich my stun the user or make them hurt themselves if let's say they get hit by a wall behind them or if it cause them to fall hard on the ground. Debris from the eplosion are still painful to the user, however any heat would be resisted.
    - It can turn random objects (can't be smaller than a bullet and normally, the object musn't weight more than the user's strenght) into "bombyfied" (kind of like grenades) after the user touches them, wich can caught enemies off-guard. Bombyfied objects don't change their appearance. They can explode if the users uses the 'pistol' hand seal, or say the keyword 'Bang'. (explosion is 5x5 at most)
    - It does massive collateral damage. Explosion effect might be used in a close fight. The user can make small stream of explosion with normal strikes.


    Skill Weaknesses:
    - A lot amount of water might make it so this fruit's abilities won't be available at all. Sea-salt and sea-stone will also shut them down.
    - Skills only activates when the user initiates contact, or at will. Some explosions might not occur instantly.
    - The user is immune only to explosions, however this isn't a logia and they cannot so simply recover from other forms of damage.
    - Explosions can be engulfed from gaseous-like masses, wich is more heavy than the mass of the explosion itself.



    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Bangu Bangu no Mi: Impacto!
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee, close-ranged (0-2 metres)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2 posts, instant use
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: User can boost their attack with explosive force, released from a certain point, close to their body (up to 3 mm).
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - Makes user's strikes and kicks explosion-enhanced. (+10 strenght)
    - The explosion wich his created has a repulsive effect. If used against  shields/armors or rocks it can repulse them. They don't have to be more heavy than the user, or they might cause pain.
    - It can break rocks and opponent's bones with ease, depending on their strenght If their strenght is more, they can resist.

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - The user must kick or strike their opponents successfuly for the technique to work.
    - Oponents might caught the user's wrist/leg and stop their attack, as the user concentrates the boost only on their palms/punches/foots. Skilled Haki users can see through that.
    - It can't break throught really heavy deffence like iron/metal shields/walls, if they are thick enough. If they are really solid, the strike/kick might just make them bend inwards a little, or just scratch them with no other effect at all.
    - When used against shields/armor, wich are heavier triple than the user's original weight (130 kgs maximum), it would be harder for the repulsive effect to work, or won't have effect at all, in the worst case scenario, the user might crack a bone.
    - User must focus the boost to single point of their body, wether it would be their palms/punches/feets. (-10 finesse)


    Ability Lvl 1 Name:  Bangu Bangu no Mi: Bulleto!!!!!
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:  Mid-range (0-18 metres)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  3 posts, instant use
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:  The user shapes their hand like a pistol, and fires a gunshot (compressed explosive energy), wich has the speed of a bullet, and explodes when it's almost/or entirely in contact to the enemy.
       Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - It's very fast (+5 speed)
    - It explodes in close contact with enemy, kind of like granade (+5 strenght) The radius of the skill is that of a c2 bomb. (radius is 15x15)
    - It can be shot into a single point, and then explode. User can control when the bullet would explode by using the keyword 'BANG'.
    - Terrain might be a bonus, as it might blow up parts from it that can hit offguard enemies.

       Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - It can be shot only into straight direction.
    - The user needs to focus and put some effort into their skill. (-5 finesse)
    - Hand marks are used, wich means that this could be predicted, even without the need of Haki.
    - The 'gunshot' might be extinguished before it explode.
    - As the terrain is a bonus, it might be a weakness as well, if the user is close to the explosion and gets hit by the debris, caused from it /if any/. User might be open to sudden danger/attacks after shooting the bullet. (-5 reflex)



    Ability Lvl 1 Name:  Bangu Bangu no Mi: Jeto Dash~!
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  6 posts, lasts 4
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:  As the name would tell, the user can use jet propulsion, which is motion produced by passing a jet of matter or energy in the opposite direction to the direction of motion. By conservation of momentum, the moving body is propelled in the opposite direction to the jet. The jet can be a continuous stream. User can fly up to 10 feet high.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - The user can fly via explosive energy, much like using it as a jet.
    - It can reach high speed (+10 speed)
    - Can be used from user to prevent themselves from fall damage.
    - Jet can be released eighter from user's hands or their feet.

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - It's hard to control the straight-line trajectory, as sudden turns are difficult. (-5 finesse)
    - While in mid air and is harder for the user to maneuver around, it's hard for them to dodge fast/sudden attacks. (-5 reflex)
    - The explosion effect of the released energy is not ment for attack, only to propulse the user in the air. It can't burn living creatures.


    Ability Lvl 1 Name:  Bangu Bangu no Mi: Sparkle~!
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:  Close range (4-5 metres)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  5 posts, insta use
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:  User shots an explosive firebolts from all over their body. It can produce up to 15 fireballs.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - It can hit multiple enemies (5 or 6, depending on how close they are in the range). It's deadly against NPCs, if they are really close and around the user.
    - It's hard to dodge.
    - It's hot and it burns. (+10 strenght)

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - The user can't really move at all while using this technique. (-10 endurance)
    - User has no control over the firebolts what-so-ever. They just fall everywhere around them.
    - A Haki user might predict where the firebolts would fall and evade it.


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    Re: Bangu Bangu no Mi

    Post by Storm Runner on Thu Nov 06, 2014 6:42 pm

    Corrections Weill be in red

    Please edit your skill to add in it's range in as shown in this example below and according to the sites pre-set range classification Close range 0-10 meters. Mid range, 15-25 and long range 30-40.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Zoom-Zoom Bullet
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee mid/close ranged (0 - 20 metres)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2


    Nana-chan wrote:Skill Name: Bangu Bangu no Mi (Bang-Bang Fruit)

    Skill Type: Paramecia

    Skill Information: While playing on 'finding treasures', Nana found a really strange orange sharon fruit with red swirls all over it. Later after this she realised that she has some really destructive abilities, wich she gained from it, and the main purpose of them. The Bangu Bangu no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to cause explosions. The eater becomes an "Explosive" human.

    Skill Strengths:
    - The user becomes immune to explosions. They might only make Nana look 'little' dirty. -I can understand the high resistance to the fire and heat from explosions but would the debris and shrapnel from the explosions still do damage?
    - It can turn random objects into explosions, wich can caught enemies off-guard. -by any chance did you mean explosives like turning a pebble into a grenade?
    - It does massive damage. Explosion effect can be used for a close fight.
    -Well according to site rules you can only do damage equal to your rank while the strength and endurance determined how much one would be effected by the attack so I'd like you to add the word collateral into the strength above the "It does massive collateral damage" also do you mean you can make small explosions with normal strikes when you say "Explosion effect can be used for a close fight."

    Skill Weaknesses:
    - A lot amount of water might make it so this fruit's abilities won't be available at all. Sea-salt will also shut them down. -Don't forget to mention Sea-prism stone and also contact with water would weaken your character.
    - Skills only activates when the user initiates contact, or at will. - if the user can use it at will then how is it a weakness?
    - The user is immune only to explosions, however this isn't a logia and they cannot so simply recover from other forms of damage.
    - Explosions can be engulfed from gaseous-like masses, wich is more heavy than the mass of the explosion itself.



    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Bangu Bangu no Mi: Impacto!
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee, close-ranged
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2 posts, instant use
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: User can boost their attack with explosive force, released from a certain point, close to their body (up to 3 mm).
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - Makes user's strikes and kicks explosion-enhanced. (+10 strenght)
    - It has repulsive effect.
    - It can break rocks and opponent's bones with ease. -This depends on the strength of the target

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - The user must kick or strike their opponents successfuly for the technique to work.
    - It's uneffective against haki users. -how is it ineffective against Haki?i can understand if they were immune to the actual flames from the explosion but if you are using it to propel your attack then I wouldn't see why it couldn't effect a Haki user.
    - It can't break throught really heavy deffence like iron/metal shields/walls, if they are thick enough. If they are really solid, the strike/kick might just make them bend inwards a little, or just scratch them with no other effect at all.


    Ability Lvl 1 Name:  Bangu Bangu no Mi: Bulleto!!!!!
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:  Mid-range
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  3 posts, instant use
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:  The user shapes their hand like a pistol, and fires a gunshot (compressed explosive energy), wich has the speed of a bullet, and explodes when it's almost/or entirely in contact to the enemy.
       Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - It's very fast (+5 speed)
    - It explodes in close contact with enemy, kind of like granade (+5 strenght) -what is the radius of the explosion? Is it as big as a bomb? Or more like a large firecracker?
    - It can be shot into a single point, and then explode.
    - User can control when the bullet would explode. this can be added to the strength above. Then please add a new strength.

       Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - It can be shot only into straight direction.
    - The user needs to focus and put some
    - Hand marks are used, wich means that this could be predicted, even without the need of Haki.
    - The 'gunshot' might be extinguished before it explode.



    Ability Lvl 1 Name:  Bangu Bangu no Mi: Jeto Dash~!
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  6 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:  As the name would tell, the user can use jet propulsion, which is motion produced by passing a jet of matter or energy in the opposite direction to the direction of motion. By conservation of momentum, the moving body is propelled in the opposite direction to the jet. The jet can be a continuous stream. -how does this ability last for? It can't last forever. Also how high can you fly?
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - The user can fly via explosive energy, much like using it as a jet.
    - It can reach high speed (+10 speed)
    - Can be used from user to prevent themselves from fall damage.

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - It's hard to control the straight-line trajectory, as sudden turns are difficult. (-5 finesse)
    - While in mid air and is harder for the user to maneuver around, it's hard for them to dodge fast/sudden attacks. -this would be -5 reflex
    - The explosion effect of the released energy is not ment for attack, only to propulse the user in the air, so it does no damage (only burns). -when you burn something you damage it, maybe say it can't burn living creatures.
    - Energy is drained. If the user is getting out of it, the jet beam might become smaller to the point when the user has no more left, and it disappears/can't be released.
    -would being drained of energy not effect your other abilities?

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:  Bangu Bangu no Mi: Sparkle~!
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:  Close range (4-5 meters)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  5 posts, insta use
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:  User shots an explosive firebolts from all over their body. -how many fireballs are produced?
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - It can hit multiple enemies. -how many enemies dies it hit?
    - It's hard to dodge.
    - It's hot and it burns.

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - The user can't really move at all while using this technique. (-10 endurance) -if you have a -10 in your weaknesses you need a +10 in your strengths
    - User has no control over the firebolts what-so-ever. They just fall everywhere around them.
    - A Haki user might predict where the firebolts would fall and evade it.

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    Re: Bangu Bangu no Mi

    Post by Nana-chan on Thu Nov 06, 2014 8:07 pm

    Bump~! Uhm....I think i'm done fixing. And yes, i know about the level 2 and 3 abilities.
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    Re: Bangu Bangu no Mi

    Post by Storm Runner on Fri Nov 07, 2014 4:20 am

    Nana-chan wrote:Skill Name: Bangu Bangu no Mi (Bang-Bang Fruit)

    Skill Type: Paramecia

    Skill Information: While playing on 'finding treasures', Nana found a really strange orange sharon fruit with red swirls all over it. Later after this she realised that she has some really destructive abilities, wich she gained from it, and the main purpose of them. The Bangu Bangu no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to cause explosions. The eater becomes an "Explosive" human.

    Skill Strengths:
    - The user becomes highly resistant to explosions. They might only make Nana look 'little' dirty. Shrapnel won't do any damage, but it still has knockback effect wich my stun the user or make them hurt themselves if let's say they get hit by a wall behind them or if it cause them to fall hard on the ground. Debris from the eplosion are still painful to the user, however any heat would be resisted.
    - It can turn random objects (can't be smaller than a bullet and normally, the object musn't weight more than the user's strenght) into "bombyfied" (kind of like grenades), wich can caught enemies off-guard. They can explode if the users uses the 'pistol' hand seal, or say the keyword 'Bang'.
    - It does massive collateral damage. Explosion effect might be used in a close fight. The user can make small stream of explosion with normal strikes.


    Skill Weaknesses:
    - A lot amount of water might make it so this fruit's abilities won't be available at all. Sea-salt and sea-stone will also shut them down.
    - Skills only activates when the user initiates contact, or at will. Some explosions might not occur instantly.
    - The user is immune only to explosions, however this isn't a logia and they cannot so simply recover from other forms of damage.
    - Explosions can be engulfed from gaseous-like masses, wich is more heavy than the mass of the explosion itself.



    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Bangu Bangu no Mi: Impacto!
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee, close-ranged (0-2 metres)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2 posts, instant use
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: User can boost their attack with explosive force, released from a certain point, close to their body (up to 3 mm).
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - Makes user's strikes and kicks explosion-enhanced. (+10 strenght)
    - It has repulsive effect. -what do you mean a repulsive effect?
    - It can break rocks and opponent's bones with ease, depending on their strenght. They can resist it if their strenght difference is with +10 more.
    -+10 more what?

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - The user must kick or strike their opponents successfuly for the technique to work.
    - Oponents might caught the user's wrist/leg and stop their attack, as the user concentrates the boost only on their palms/punches/foots. Skilled Haki users can see through that.
    - It can't break throught really heavy deffence like iron/metal shields/walls, if they are thick enough. If they are really solid, the strike/kick might just make them bend inwards a little, or just scratch them with no other effect at all.

    ^^Please keep in mind that if you have a + stat buff in your strength you must have equal - debuffs in your weaknesses. So in your case you need two -10 stats or one -10 stat if you remove the +10 more part in your strengths above.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:  Bangu Bangu no Mi: Bulleto!!!!!
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:  Mid-range (0-18 metres)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  3 posts, instant use
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:  The user shapes their hand like a pistol, and fires a gunshot (compressed explosive energy), wich has the speed of a bullet, and explodes when it's almost/or entirely in contact to the enemy.
       Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - It's very fast (+5 speed)
    - It explodes in close contact with enemy, kind of like granade (+5 strenght) The radius of the skill is that of a c2 bomb. -can I have the measurement of the radius please.
    - It can be shot into a single point, and then explode. User can control when the bullet would explode by using the keyword 'BANG'.
    - Terrain might be a bonus, as it might blow up parts from it that can hit offguard enemies.

       Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - It can be shot only into straight direction.
    - The user needs to focus and put some
    - Hand marks are used, wich means that this could be predicted, even without the need of Haki.
    - The 'gunshot' might be extinguished before it explode.
    - As the terrain is a bonus, it might be a weakness as well, if the user is close to the explosion and gets hit by the debris, caused from it /if any/.

    ^^you need to have one -10 or two -5 stats in your skills above^^


    Ability Lvl 1 Name:  Bangu Bangu no Mi: Jeto Dash~!
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  6 posts, lasts 4
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:  As the name would tell, the user can use jet propulsion, which is motion produced by passing a jet of matter or energy in the opposite direction to the direction of motion. By conservation of momentum, the moving body is propelled in the opposite direction to the jet. The jet can be a continuous stream. User can fly up to 10 feet high.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - The user can fly via explosive energy, much like using it as a jet.
    - It can reach high speed (+10 speed)
    - Can be used from user to prevent themselves from fall damage.

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - It's hard to control the straight-line trajectory, as sudden turns are difficult. (-5 finesse)
    - While in mid air and is harder for the user to maneuver around, it's hard for them to dodge fast/sudden attacks. (-5 reflex)
    - The explosion effect of the released energy is not ment for attack, only to propulse the user in the air. It can't burn living creatures.
    - Energy is drained. If the user is getting out of it, the jet beam might become smaller to the point when the user has no more left, and it disappears/can't be released. This effect other abilities as well and they become weaker (-10 strenght)
    -for how long are they weaker? Also you need to balance out the +stat buffs and the -stat buffs here too

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:  Bangu Bangu no Mi: Sparkle~!
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:  Close range (4-5 metres)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  5 posts, insta use
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:  User shots an explosive firebolts from all over their body. It can produce up to 15 fireballs.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - It can hit multiple enemies (5 or 6, depending on how close they are in the range). It's deadly against NPCs, if they are really close and around the user.
    - It's hard to dodge.
    - It's hot and it burns. (+10 strenght)

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - The user can't really move at all while using this technique. (-10 endurance)
    - User has no control over the firebolts what-so-ever. They just fall everywhere around them.
    - A Haki user might predict where the firebolts would fall and evade it.

    Please remove your lv2/lv3 skills you can add them back in once you are levels




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    Re: Bangu Bangu no Mi

    Post by Nana-chan on Fri Nov 07, 2014 4:29 pm

    Bump!
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    Re: Bangu Bangu no Mi

    Post by Storm Runner on Sat Nov 08, 2014 4:28 am

    Nana-chan wrote:Skill Name: Bangu Bangu no Mi (Bang-Bang Fruit)

    Skill Type: Paramecia

    Skill Information: While playing on 'finding treasures', Nana found a really strange orange sharon fruit with red swirls all over it. Later after this she realised that she has some really destructive abilities, wich she gained from it, and the main purpose of them. The Bangu Bangu no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to cause explosions. The eater becomes an "Explosive" human.

    Skill Strengths:
    - The user becomes highly resistant to explosions. They might only make Nana look 'little' dirty. Shrapnel won't do any damage, but it still has knockback effect wich my stun the user or make them hurt themselves if let's say they get hit by a wall behind them or if it cause them to fall hard on the ground. Debris from the eplosion are still painful to the user, however any heat would be resisted.
    - It can turn random objects (can't be smaller than a bullet and normally, the object musn't weight more than the user's strenght) into "bombyfied" (kind of like grenades) after the user touches them, wich can caught enemies off-guard. Bombyfied objects don't change their appearance. They can explode if the users uses the 'pistol' hand seal, or say the keyword 'Bang'. (explosion is 5x5 at most)
    - It does massive collateral damage. Explosion effect might be used in a close fight. The user can make small stream of explosion with normal strikes.


    Skill Weaknesses:
    - A lot amount of water might make it so this fruit's abilities won't be available at all. Sea-salt and sea-stone will also shut them down.
    - Skills only activates when the user initiates contact, or at will. Some explosions might not occur instantly.
    - The user is immune only to explosions, however this isn't a logia and they cannot so simply recover from other forms of damage.
    - Explosions can be engulfed from gaseous-like masses, wich is more heavy than the mass of the explosion itself.



    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Bangu Bangu no Mi: Impacto!
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee, close-ranged (0-2 metres)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2 posts, instant use
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: User can boost their attack with explosive force, released from a certain point, close to their body (up to 3 mm).
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - Makes user's strikes and kicks explosion-enhanced. (+10 strenght)
    - The explosion wich his created has a repulsive effect. If used against  shields/armors or rocks it can repulse them. They don't have to be more heavy than the user, or they might cause pain.
    - It can break rocks and opponent's bones with ease, depending on their strenght. They can resist it if their strenght difference is with +10 more than user's current strenght.

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - The user must kick or strike their opponents successfuly for the technique to work.
    - Oponents might caught the user's wrist/leg and stop their attack, as the user concentrates the boost only on their palms/punches/foots. Skilled Haki users can see through that.
    - It can't break throught really heavy deffence like iron/metal shields/walls, if they are thick enough. If they are really solid, the strike/kick might just make them bend inwards a little, or just scratch them with no other effect at all.
    - When used against shields/armor, wich are heavier triple than the user's original weight (130 kgs maximum), it would be harder for the repulsive effect to work, or won't have effect at all, in the worst case scenario, the user might crack a bone.

    -you still need to have two -10 stats in you're weakness in this ability

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:  Bangu Bangu no Mi: Bulleto!!!!!
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:  Mid-range (0-18 metres)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  3 posts, instant use
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:  The user shapes their hand like a pistol, and fires a gunshot (compressed explosive energy), wich has the speed of a bullet, and explodes when it's almost/or entirely in contact to the enemy.
       Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - It's very fast (+5 speed)
    - It explodes in close contact with enemy, kind of like granade (+5 strenght) The radius of the skill is that of a c2 bomb. (radius is 15x15)
    - It can be shot into a single point, and then explode. User can control when the bullet would explode by using the keyword 'BANG'.
    - Terrain might be a bonus, as it might blow up parts from it that can hit offguard enemies.

       Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - It can be shot only into straight direction.
    - The user needs to focus and put some effort into their skill. (-5 finesse)
    - Hand marks are used, wich means that this could be predicted, even without the need of Haki.
    - The 'gunshot' might be extinguished before it explode.
    - As the terrain is a bonus, it might be a weakness as well, if the user is close to the explosion and gets hit by the debris, caused from it /if any/. User might be open to sudden danger/attacks after shooting the bullet. (-5 reflex)



    Ability Lvl 1 Name:  Bangu Bangu no Mi: Jeto Dash~!
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  6 posts, lasts 4
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:  As the name would tell, the user can use jet propulsion, which is motion produced by passing a jet of matter or energy in the opposite direction to the direction of motion. By conservation of momentum, the moving body is propelled in the opposite direction to the jet. The jet can be a continuous stream. User can fly up to 10 feet high.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - The user can fly via explosive energy, much like using it as a jet.
    - It can reach high speed (+20 speed) -change to +10
    - Can be used from user to prevent themselves from fall damage.
    - Jet can be released eighter from user's hands or their feet.

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - It's hard to control the straight-line trajectory, as sudden turns are difficult. (-5 finesse)
    - While in mid air and is harder for the user to maneuver around, it's hard for them to dodge fast/sudden attacks. (-5 reflex)
    - The explosion effect of the released energy is not ment for attack, only to propulse the user in the air. It can't burn living creatures.
    - Energy is drained. If the user is getting out of it, the jet beam might become smaller to the point when the user has no more left, and it disappears/can't be released. This effect other abilities as well and they become weaker (-10 strenght) It would cost 8  posts before the user recharges.
    -remove this fourth weakness it's creating more problems and work for you. Then your ability will be balanced

    Ability Lvl 1 Name:  Bangu Bangu no Mi: Sparkle~!
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:  Close range (4-5 metres)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  5 posts, insta use
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:  User shots an explosive firebolts from all over their body. It can produce up to 15 fireballs.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - It can hit multiple enemies (5 or 6, depending on how close they are in the range). It's deadly against NPCs, if they are really close and around the user.
    - It's hard to dodge.
    - It's hot and it burns. (+10 strenght)

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - The user can't really move at all while using this technique. (-10 endurance)
    - User has no control over the firebolts what-so-ever. They just fall everywhere around them.
    - A Haki user might predict where the firebolts would fall and evade it.


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    Re: Bangu Bangu no Mi

    Post by Nana-chan on Sat Nov 08, 2014 4:46 am

    Okay. This is fixed. Bumpty dumpty~!
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    Re: Bangu Bangu no Mi

    Post by Storm Runner on Sat Nov 08, 2014 2:03 pm

    Nana-chan wrote:Skill Name: Bangu Bangu no Mi (Bang-Bang Fruit)

    Skill Type: Paramecia

    Skill Information: While playing on 'finding treasures', Nana found a really strange orange sharon fruit with red swirls all over it. Later after this she realised that she has some really destructive abilities, wich she gained from it, and the main purpose of them. The Bangu Bangu no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to cause explosions. The eater becomes an "Explosive" human.

    Skill Strengths:
    - The user becomes highly resistant to explosions. They might only make Nana look 'little' dirty. Shrapnel won't do any damage, but it still has knockback effect wich my stun the user or make them hurt themselves if let's say they get hit by a wall behind them or if it cause them to fall hard on the ground. Debris from the eplosion are still painful to the user, however any heat would be resisted.
    - It can turn random objects (can't be smaller than a bullet and normally, the object musn't weight more than the user's strenght) into "bombyfied" (kind of like grenades) after the user touches them, wich can caught enemies off-guard. Bombyfied objects don't change their appearance. They can explode if the users uses the 'pistol' hand seal, or say the keyword 'Bang'. (explosion is 5x5 at most)
    - It does massive collateral damage. Explosion effect might be used in a close fight. The user can make small stream of explosion with normal strikes.


    Skill Weaknesses:
    - A lot amount of water might make it so this fruit's abilities won't be available at all. Sea-salt and sea-stone will also shut them down.
    - Skills only activates when the user initiates contact, or at will. Some explosions might not occur instantly.
    - The user is immune only to explosions, however this isn't a logia and they cannot so simply recover from other forms of damage.
    - Explosions can be engulfed from gaseous-like masses, wich is more heavy than the mass of the explosion itself.



    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Bangu Bangu no Mi: Impacto!
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee, close-ranged (0-2 metres)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 2 posts, instant use
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: User can boost their attack with explosive force, released from a certain point, close to their body (up to 3 mm).
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - Makes user's strikes and kicks explosion-enhanced. (+10 strenght)
    - The explosion wich his created has a repulsive effect. If used against  shields/armors or rocks it can repulse them. They don't have to be more heavy than the user, or they might cause pain.
    - It can break rocks and opponent's bones with ease, depending on their strenght. They can resist it if their strenght difference is with +10 more than user's current strenght.
    -remove the +10 here or add in another -10 in the weakness.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - The user must kick or strike their opponents successfuly for the technique to work.
    - Oponents might caught the user's wrist/leg and stop their attack, as the user concentrates the boost only on their palms/punches/foots. Skilled Haki users can see through that.
    - It can't break throught really heavy deffence like iron/metal shields/walls, if they are thick enough. If they are really solid, the strike/kick might just make them bend inwards a little, or just scratch them with no other effect at all.
    - When used against shields/armor, wich are heavier triple than the user's original weight (130 kgs maximum), it would be harder for the repulsive effect to work, or won't have effect at all, in the worst case scenario, the user might crack a bone.
    - User must focus the boost to single point of their body, wether it would be their palms/punches/feets. (-10 finesse)


    Ability Lvl 1 Name:  Bangu Bangu no Mi: Bulleto!!!!!
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:  Mid-range (0-18 metres)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  3 posts, instant use
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:  The user shapes their hand like a pistol, and fires a gunshot (compressed explosive energy), wich has the speed of a bullet, and explodes when it's almost/or entirely in contact to the enemy.
       Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - It's very fast (+5 speed)
    - It explodes in close contact with enemy, kind of like granade (+5 strenght) The radius of the skill is that of a c2 bomb. (radius is 15x15)
    - It can be shot into a single point, and then explode. User can control when the bullet would explode by using the keyword 'BANG'.
    - Terrain might be a bonus, as it might blow up parts from it that can hit offguard enemies.

       Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - It can be shot only into straight direction.
    - The user needs to focus and put some effort into their skill. (-5 finesse)
    - Hand marks are used, wich means that this could be predicted, even without the need of Haki.
    - The 'gunshot' might be extinguished before it explode.
    - As the terrain is a bonus, it might be a weakness as well, if the user is close to the explosion and gets hit by the debris, caused from it /if any/. User might be open to sudden danger/attacks after shooting the bullet. (-5 reflex)



    Ability Lvl 1 Name:  Bangu Bangu no Mi: Jeto Dash~!
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Support
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  6 posts, lasts 4
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:  As the name would tell, the user can use jet propulsion, which is motion produced by passing a jet of matter or energy in the opposite direction to the direction of motion. By conservation of momentum, the moving body is propelled in the opposite direction to the jet. The jet can be a continuous stream. User can fly up to 10 feet high.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - The user can fly via explosive energy, much like using it as a jet.
    - It can reach high speed (+10 speed)
    - Can be used from user to prevent themselves from fall damage.
    - Jet can be released eighter from user's hands or their feet.

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - It's hard to control the straight-line trajectory, as sudden turns are difficult. (-5 finesse)
    - While in mid air and is harder for the user to maneuver around, it's hard for them to dodge fast/sudden attacks. (-5 reflex)
    - The explosion effect of the released energy is not ment for attack, only to propulse the user in the air. It can't burn living creatures.


    Ability Lvl 1 Name:  Bangu Bangu no Mi: Sparkle~!
    Ability Lvl 1 Type:  Close range (4-5 metres)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown:  5 posts, insta use
    Ability Lvl 1 Description:  User shots an explosive firebolts from all over their body. It can produce up to 15 fireballs.
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - It can hit multiple enemies (5 or 6, depending on how close they are in the range). It's deadly against NPCs, if they are really close and around the user.
    - It's hard to dodge.
    - It's hot and it burns. (+10 strenght)

    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - The user can't really move at all while using this technique. (-10 endurance)
    - User has no control over the firebolts what-so-ever. They just fall everywhere around them.
    - A Haki user might predict where the firebolts would fall and evade it.


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    Re: Bangu Bangu no Mi

    Post by Nana-chan on Sat Nov 08, 2014 5:19 pm

    Done.


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    Re: Bangu Bangu no Mi

    Post by Storm Runner on Sun Nov 09, 2014 1:39 am

    all good now



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