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    Ketsueki Sutairu (Blood Style)

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    Mystic340

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    Ketsueki Sutairu (Blood Style)

    Post by Mystic340 on Sat Nov 08, 2014 6:57 am

    Skill Name: Ketsueki Sutairu (Blood Style)
    Skill Type: Sword Style | close range (0-5 meters)
    Skill Information: Allows the user to use the sword Blood for offence to pierce or break level 1 armor and defense
    Skill Strengths:
    - The sword blood can pierce lv. 1 armor with ease
    - Can block enemy attacks if endurance is 10 higher than enemy's strength
    - Add a small plus 5 endurance to the user stays active as long as sword is unsheathed
    Skill Weaknesses:
    - The sword blood weighs the user down decreasing the user's speed by 5 when unsheathed.
    - It cannot cut through or into flesh due to the fact that the blade is dull
    - Abilities can be canceled out by Kenbunshoku Haki users, they can easily dodge and counter the attacks

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Ketsueki Sasu (Blood Stab)
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee|close range (3 meters)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Blood stab allows the user to stab the opponent quickly 2 times
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -It pierces level 1 armor
    -Sends level 1 ranking enemies back 3 feet if user's strength is 10 higher than enemy's endurance
    -Makes the user's speed go up by 10 only while using this abilty
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -Enemies with 5 more reflex than the user's speed can defend or counter this
    -After using this ability, successful or not, the user's speed will drop by 10 for 2 posts
    -Enemies with 10 more endurance than user's attack or enemies with the zoan fruit ability 'hide' can deflect or ignore this ability

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Ketsueki Barikēdo (Blood Barricade)
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Defense | Close range (0-3 meters)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Allows the user to stab the sword blood in the ground and defend against oncoming attacks
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - Endurance goes up by a small 5 points
    - Blocks attacks from level 1 weapons
    - Enemies need 10 strength more than user's endurance to break the endurance
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - User has no movement and can be attacked from behind
    - Cannot defend against Busoshoku Haki attacks
    - If attacked from behind the ability will be stopped immediatly

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Kekkyū Keisū-Ki (Blood Counter)
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee | Close range (0-3 meters)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: This ability allows the user to block and counter enemy attacks by holding the sword blood in a diagonal direction
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -Can block attacks if user's endurance is the same or higher than enemy's strength
    -Can counter attacks if user's reflex is higher that enemy's speed
    - reflex goes up by 5
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -If enemy's reflex is higher that the user's reflex the enemy may counter the user's counter
    -User can't block against Logia fruit attacks
    -User cannot hurt enemies with higher endurance than user's reflex

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Ketsueki Pondo (Blood Pound)
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee | Close range (0-5 meters)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 5 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Allows the user to jump in the air and slam the sword Blood onto the ground
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -It can make level 1 rank enemies up to 5 meters away fall
    - User's strength increases by 5
    - Ability may potentially crack the ground (If it's dirt) causing enemies 0-1 meter away to get one foot stuck in the ground
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - Speed deceases by 10 for 3 posts
    - Tires the user out forcing them to stay in place
    - Doesn't affect enemies with 10 endurance higher than the user's attack

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Ketsueki Hakku (Blood Hack)
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 5 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Allows the user to rush at an enemy and bring the sword Blood down onto the enemy
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - Strength is increased by 5
    - Pierces through level 1 armor
    - Speed is increased by 5
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - Endurance drops by 5  
    - Reflex drops by 5
    - Cannot hurt zoan fruit users with the ability 'hide' and cannot pierce through level 1 armor if enemy's endurance is higher than user's strength


    Last edited by Mystic340 on Sun Nov 09, 2014 7:46 pm; edited 1 time in total


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    Re: Ketsueki Sutairu (Blood Style)

    Post by Unitama on Sun Nov 09, 2014 3:44 pm

    It is looking pretty solid, but please pay attention to my red comments. Bump when done.

    Mystic340 wrote:Skill Name: Ketsueki Sutairu (Blood Style)
    Skill Type: Sword Style | close range (0-5 meters)
    Skill Information: Allows the user to use the sword Blood for offence to pierce or break level 1 armor and defense
    Skill Strengths:
    - The sword blood can pierce lv. 1 armor with ease
    - All enemies need 10 more defense than user's strength to block skill -to block every skill? Sounds more like a weakness. So please change it to a solid strength.
    - Add a small plus 5 defense to the user [colo=#ff0000]-Please change defense to endurance. And will this buff stay active whenever the sword is unsheathed? [/color]
    Skill Weaknesses:
    - The sword blood weighs the user down decreasing the user's speed by 5 when unsheathed.
    - It cannot cut through or into flesh due to the fact that the blade is dull
    - Abilities can be canceled out by Haki users -since everybody is able to use Haki, be more specific about the sort of Haki and how is can cancel the abilities.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Ketsueki Sasu (Blood Stab)
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee|close range (3 meters)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Blood stab allows the user to stab the opponent quickly 2 times
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -It pierces level 1 armor
    -Sends low ranking enemies back a few feet -How many feet? How low must the enemy be? Does the enemy endurance have a roll in this?
    -Makes the user's speed go up by 10 only while using this abilty
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -Enemies with 5 more reflex than the user's attack can defend or counter this -5 more reflex than the user's speed makes more sense since this attack relies more on the speed of the user and not the attack.
    -After using this ability, successful or not, the user's speed will drop by 10 -For how long will the drop last?
    -Enemies with 10 more defense than user's attack or enemies with the zoan fruit ability 'hide' can deflect or ignore this ability -please change defense to endurance.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Ketsueki Barikēdo (Blood Barricade)
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Defense | Close range (0-3 meters)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Allows the user to stab the sword blood in the ground and defend against oncoming attacks
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - Defence goes up by a small 5 points -Please change defense to endurance.
    - Blocks attacks from level 1 weapons
    - Enemies need 10 strength more than user's defense to break the defense please change defense to endurance.
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - User has no movement and can be attacked from behind
    - Cannot defend against Haki attacks -Which kind of Haki?
    - If attacked from behind the ability will be stopped immediatly

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Kekkyū Keisū-Ki (Blood Counter)
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee | Close range (0-3 meters)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 3 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: This ability allows the user to block and counter enemy attacks by holding the sword blood in a diagonal direction
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -Can block attacks if user's defense is the same or higher than enemy's strength -Please change defense to endurance.
    -Can counter attacks if user's reflex is higher that enemy's speed
    - reflex goes up by 5
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    -If enemy's reflex is higher that the user's reflex the enemy may counter the user's counter
    -User can't block against Logia fruit attacks
    -User cannot hurt enemies with higher defense than user's reflex -Please change defense to endurance.

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Ketsueki Pondo (Blood Pound)
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee | Close range (0-5 meters)
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 5 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Allows the user to jump in the air and slam the sword Blood onto the ground
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    -It can make low ranking enemies up to 5 meters away fall -how low ranking?
    - User's strength increases by 5
    - Ability may potentially crack the ground (If it's dirt) causing enemies o-1 meter away to get one foot stuck in the ground
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - Speed deceases by 10 -For how long?
    - Tires the user out forcing them to stay in place
    - Doesn't affect enemies with 10 endurance higher than the user's attack

    Ability Lvl 1 Name: Ketsueki Hakku (Blood Hack)
    Ability Lvl 1 Type: Melee
    Ability Lvl 1 Cooldown: 5 posts
    Ability Lvl 1 Description: Allows the user to rush at an enemy and bring the sword Blood down onto the enemy
    Ability Lvl 1 Strengths:
    - Strength is increased by 5
    - Pierces through level 1 armor
    - Speed is increased by 5
    Ability Lvl 1 Weaknesses:
    - Endurance drops by 5  
    - Defense drops by 5 -this is not a stat we are currently using. The endurance stat is also a sort of defense stat. I suggest changing this to reflex.
    - Cannot hurt zoan fruit users with the ability 'hide' and cannot pierce through level 1 armor if enemy's defense is higher than user's attack -Defense=endurance and attack=strength.

    P.S. Pro-tip. If you want to make this look more slick and nice, you can look at one of my skills and see bow I did the lay-out with the colors etc. The links are in my signature. This is not needed but makes it a little more pretty looking.


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    Re: Ketsueki Sutairu (Blood Style)

    Post by Mystic340 on Sun Nov 09, 2014 7:46 pm

    Bump


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    Re: Ketsueki Sutairu (Blood Style)

    Post by Unitama on Sun Nov 09, 2014 8:16 pm

    Oke, approved! Have fun killing people


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